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Really enjoyed it, like 8.5/10 to 9/10. My only current complaint would be longer chapters but, I know it can be annoying to do but if you can it would be SWEET.
he had better win the overlord doesnt lose to anyone and it would be nice to see evil win for once after a long and trying battle between him and the elements or something along those lines
4233387 Don't worry. He will.
4233322 Longer chapters? That second one alone was over twenty pages!
4233677 Elements of harmony corruption nice let me guess corrupts elements of harmony to join side of overlord or destroys elements upon use or makes them unusable correct or am I wrong
4234613 Not exactly. To quote a famous Soup Master from Seinfeld...
"No spoilers for you!"
4233677 In my defense I have seen monster 20k chapters. Not to say you need to but to salvage a bit of dignity.
Looking foward to when the OL is reunited with his minions again.
4249496 Trust me, you will die laughing. Hopefully not, but you get the idea.
4234716 Or A friend of a certain Doctor.
"Spoilers"
i hope there some struggle with good vs evil type of things to keep a balance or it just one side op
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it would be 'Mine' not 'Thine'. Thine means your, as in Your soul.
what? '-' that is a contradiction
this was never stated, it said
from this we are to understand he went and scouted around for a couple hours before returning to the castle? looks like he just went straight to the castle
after reading a bit more I have decided I do not enjoy this story, while the writing is much better then a lot of HIE fics it is still just a basic power fantasy with all the common tropes. I will, however, give a like for the decent writing (that and my perfectionisim demanded i make that number even)
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I'll admit, the first couple of chapters are a jumble mess, that's due to two factors; the first being my hard press for time since I made them during my college months. The second was trying to meet the thousand word quota for the chapter to be posted.
That said, if and when things finally calm down for me again, I might revisit and rework some the earlier chapters.
Trust me, later chapters get a tad better.