Evan Kelly arrives in Equestria in the most questionable of ways. How is he going to get back home and why are the ponies so colorful? maybe he should do some tests on the pigment concentration in the-OH MY GOD THAT ONE JUST SPOKE!
AT LEAST AUTHOR CAN MAKE SENTENCE WITHOUT KGB INTRUDING ON HOUSE.
IVAN BE SHORT. FICTION OF FAN BAD. VERY BAD. WORSE THAN TAPCO. WHY IS PROTAGONIST WHITE HAIRED JAPANESE PRETTY BOY WITH PERSONALITY OF AUTHOR TEENAGE BOY? WHY IS CHARACTERS BEING OUT OF CARDBOARD? WHY IS DIALOGUE SO BAD?
NEED IMPROVEMENT. YOU NOT WANT KGB BREAKING DOWN DOOR.
2268698Oh. No not from an anime. technically he is not from any anime. I stole a pick of Kyo from Fruits basket changed his hair and eye color in photo shop and blurred MLP and forest background together.
2268748The first chapter is kind of a introduction for the character into the world more then the character itself. The original first chapter was the character's backstory but an editor suggested I bring that in later because it didn't sound like an MLP fan fic. So yah I guess I need some tweaking here and there.
Where is this character from?
2268591Washington state USA
2268689 No I mean is he from an anime show ? Or is the cover art deceiving?
AT LEAST AUTHOR CAN MAKE SENTENCE WITHOUT KGB INTRUDING ON HOUSE.
IVAN BE SHORT. FICTION OF FAN BAD. VERY BAD. WORSE THAN TAPCO. WHY IS PROTAGONIST WHITE HAIRED JAPANESE PRETTY BOY WITH PERSONALITY OF
AUTHORTEENAGE BOY? WHY IS CHARACTERS BEING OUT OF CARDBOARD? WHY IS DIALOGUE SO BAD?NEED IMPROVEMENT. YOU NOT WANT KGB BREAKING DOWN DOOR.
2268748 You are hilarious.
2268698Oh. No not from an anime. technically he is not from any anime. I stole a pick of Kyo from Fruits basket changed his hair and eye color in photo shop and blurred MLP and forest background together.
2268748The first chapter is kind of a introduction for the character into the world more then the character itself. The original first chapter was the character's backstory but an editor suggested I bring that in later because it didn't sound like an MLP fan fic. So yah I guess I need some tweaking here and there.
AAAWWW YEAH HIS NAME IS EVAN TOO?
2269103 Yup LOL. I swear i didn't steal it.
2269133 no i dont mind that at all! Evan isnt used alot anymore so im excited!
Hmmm I like it More Please
2271546next post will be sunday