Dear Diary,
Tia STILL can't get the green dye out of her coat. I finally had to apologize. I hope that it wasn't permanent.
You know what, Diary? I don't care that I talk to you. I don't care that you are an inanimate object. I just don't care. I love you because I can unleash all of my emotions and EVERYTHING.
For example, this.
I am still jealous of Tia.
Great! I absolutely LOVE the idea! It supports my beliefs
[X] Celestia is a troll
[X] Luna has a reason to become Nightmare Moon
No criticism, but some suggestions.
1. In the first chapter, put in Luna's full name. Nox Pallentia Luna.
2. Keep writing!
4179422 Thank you!
4179693 No problem!
Liking this.Couple pointers:
- More eye-catching title perhaps?
- Longer chapters
Other than that,fantastic job!
4180215 Thank you.
Sorry for the short chapters.