Normally these stories are pretty straightforward, but I have no freaking idea what was going on this time.
... okay, part of this was that I was confusing this with the Trixie's Magic Bit series, but I still have no idea what the characters are thinking. Especially Luna.
The only thing that gives this chapter any sense would be Chrysalis mind controlling Luna somehow from their fight. That's the only thing that makes any sense to me. I saw the fight coming last chapter, with roast Chrysalis served up on a silver platter, but it ended much differently, I'll give you that, Nom.
Yeah, I was expecting a lot of confusion--and was even worried about a good deal of anger--from this chapter. I just want to remind everyone that, no matter how things look right now, I am a HUGE proponent of the happy ending.
All I can ask is that you have faith. (Well, I COULD spoil what is going to happen, I suppose, but I'm not gonna do that.)
4328362 no anger from me Nom just shock and confusement. I have every faith that Luna still loves her Tia more then her own life which is of course unending ^^
Celestia was worried about destroying Luna? Isn't Luna literally the most immortal thing on the planet?
And OH MY GOD. Chrysalis is slowly taking a place below Discord as best villain, even if she's not a villain exactly. (Which sadly means that Sombra will have to go. RIP.)
But yeah. Serious mode activate.
In the middle of all this seems to be Luna's "aid". I'm predicting she's a changeling controlling Luna or at least dampening her senses much like Chrysalis did to Cadance. But the Queen herself seems to be stirring things up quite a bit. So it potentially could be in fact Chrysalis conducting this whole ordeal via other changeling drones whilst Equestria is in a weakened state.
Just some thoughts though. Probably not accurate beyond obvious observations.
Wow, a literal dick measuring contest between a princess and a queen.
“You are. It’s all right to admit it,” she interrupted, and then saddled up directly beside Luna.
I believe the word you want here is "sidled."
“The Ponytunes! That was it.”
They were the Ponytones. Although I just realized the joke may have been that he did not quite remember their name correctly.
The scene between Chrysalis and Luna reminded me of a certain tiarawhy game.
If the chapters continue following their current trend, the next and final chapter should be a little more than twelve thousand words.
Chrysalis can control minds. It would not be a stretch to think that the strife between Luna and Celestia is a puppet show being controlled by Chrysalis.
This was quite good. I thoroughly enjoyed it. Especially the uncomfortable sex scene. Have the elusive Fluttershy ahegao as a reward for how very uncomfortably turned on your sexy words made me.
Let me start by stating that I do not typically read this particular type of fiction, but I said "what the hell," and read this one. (From the beginning, yes.) And all in all, I found it interesting.
Onto the things at hoof: Way to shatter some expectations right there. Cheese-legs has been a busy little bug. I also must be honest, nothing I've read in your series has bugged me, until now. (Pun was intended.) But this chapter made me feel sick. Excellent job invoking a emotional response with Luna's situation.
Also it is nice to see you Chrysalis some brains... Cant wait to see what they look like.
And I'm also glad that what happened between Chryssie and Luna is getting the response that I wanted. It wasn't supposed to be a clean thing. There's a lot of dirt there that should bring mixed emotions. It's the kind of thing that is uncomfortable to write--and it was.
Already finished ? That was short, I hope you planned something after that. I expected the next chapter to be the beginning of the action, I will not spoil since I think I already understood what is coming with side characters, but to finish this soon, I'm very surprised.
And not in the good sense. (but well, it's your story )
Hmm. It sort of adds up. Maybe the petitioner influx is changelings, slowly draining her love for her subjects. So she's weakened enough for Chrysalis to start controlling her...
Chrysalis was also reading up on Equestrian law... and now Luna is challenging Celestia via some legal claim. Chrysalis is definitely manipulating Luna heavily. The implication was that her guard has been infiltrated, too.
Crysilis is gilty of rape twice and now mentil rape plus mentily braking luna causing her to go( just guesing on this part) stokholm sindrome on us and chalinge cele for no good reason. Sir con you crucify dear old cricy for us please
Just thought I would be proactive about those concerns.
at this point with your caliber of writing it's impossible for me to have such concerns.....
ok so never mind about that last question then she does still have the golden horn....
oh my luna the laughter that hit me when i eventually came to realize while reading on that chrysalis made luna her bitch simply by having a female dick sizing contest with her XD ......
and bit i get to the end here i was beginning to wonder if you were going to have chrisy try to become the new coldheart of this realm , and then maybe you could have had her free coldheart and then things REALLY could have gotten fucked lol.....
hmmm also , about last chapter with luna pulling the worried self scene , i thought the princesses were still supposed to be immortal no matter what? just that they are able to trade this immortality (which btw really needs to be brought into a discussion of it's own so it can be made clear how they were immortal before , could then not be immortal , and then luna ends up being immortal again anyways , with all the battling they're always doing kinda brings that into needing to be discussed) to get a free res from tarterous or w/e , so why would luna be worried about that then?.....
aaannd ooooooooo luna challenging celestia's right to rule , the event that kicked off this amazing series :D . how everything always comes full circle , this doesn't mean you're going to be done for this now does it :c ?.......
4330289 that's only because those are the interesting scenes that make for an interesting story , if we got 15k words of celestia's and luna's every day encounters that would be kinda very boring to read about.....
4332265 she doesn't know just how immortal luna is , but at the same time she's still very destroyable as noted by her first encounter with coldheart......
4333180 fuck me that there's no images that have already been made which could fit that scene , that closing image in that video is just a super cruel teaser leaving me wanting so much more >_>' .......
4334606 from the beginning of this book or the whole series?....
4338899 nooooo that's not long enough , how will you tie in every side story and be able to fully explain the consciousness behind them all in such a short framework?.....
4369901 she's only guilty of deception , the sex happened through the other party's verbal agreement , this isn't even that really fucking retarded professional victim playing feminist conceived scenario of they had sex but she didn't like it afterwards so she gets to retroactively call it rape , there was only super hot sex and that's it.....
...well you know unless the mind controlling speculation turns out to be accurate , but last time chrysalis enchanted someone they didn't have her name on their head , would be kinda silly if that were the case :l ......
4379003 realy? So the fact that luna said no and risisted isn't rape? The fact that cricy didn't give luna a choice? Well maybe I'm mistaken let's look back now shall we .... eeyup THATS FUCKING RAPE! I don't know how you see her consenting at all it dosint even hint at that quite the opisite realy. Now let's look at celestias eh? Yes I can see how you would think that isn't rape becouse she thought it was lune, but tell me would she have done the same if cricy wasint in descise? No don't answer that I can tell you the answer and it is NO she shure as hell wouldint, deception like that is still rape no matter what loophole you find. And now you, you I don't even *sigh* how do you not see any of this?
4381224 because when you say yes , then a previous no is negated she resisted? last i read she just stood there and did nothing , and this was immediately after she was about to go into mortal kombat with chrysalis , so no there was absolutely 0 resistance from luna here.....
>didn't give luna a choice
nobody ever does anything they didn't chose to do , so don't even try that.....
> I don't know how you see her consenting at all it dosint even hint at that quite the opisite realy.
“Please?”
“Please what? Be specific!” Chrysalis commanded.
“Please…fuck me,” Luna’s voice cracked.
yeah i don't know either honestly......
and i disagree about the part about celly , though im finding it extremely difficult to draw some other kind of rl parallel that accurately creates the same kind of situation that the deception for sex thing does , the best i can say right now is if you replaced my partner and we sexed and i later found out that you were actually an impostor i wouldn't retroactively cry rape.....
Were either/both of those actions rape? Yes...and no. To me, the action against Celestia was the more "rapey" of the two, because it was done under duplicitous circumstances. Tia thought she was having sex with her wife, under circumstances that in their relationship would be considered normal, but it wasn't with the person she thought. So, it was non-consensual sexual activity--after the fact. To me, that is rape. Legally...well, I'm not a lawyer, so I can't say.
As to the case with Luna... That is an entirely different circumstance. Chrysalis did not force, nor did she trick Luna into having sex. She did present herself in a more "alpha" light, which surprised Luna and led to things that were very unexpected for her. I wanted the scene to be both uncomfortable and arousing, and most seem to think that it was. It certainly was a grey area for them to be in. The reason? Well...that will be revealed later this week (hopefully...I'm almost done with it) when the last chapter of this story is posted.
Oh, and in answer to the "THIS IS SHORT!" comments from folks: yeah, it is, but I mentioned in my blog posts that the next few stories (see multiple story reference in sentence) were going to be shorter, more personal tales. Originally, Circles was going to be two chapters longer, but as I was breaking them down, I realized that there was a lot of padding in this one, so I pared it down to a more streamlined story.
This story DOES lead into other stories, though. There are definite repercussions and ramifications to the events of Circles, and I will be getting to them in future tales.
4384770 4381224 right but another thing that i just thought of to support my stance is having the same scenario but for a different reason , namely i thought of a scenario where 2 parties are going to have sex , and the 1 wants the medical data form the other to make sure they don't have any std's they'd be able to infect them with , and then fabricated data is given and they sex and later the party finds out that they were infected by that other party , i don't think anyone would consider that to be an act of rape by the other party , and i view what chrysalis did the same way.....
ok good good to know , my dick can hardly wait!.....
4384891 well this is how I see it if we're doing conperisens.
A marred man finds out someone else has raped/had sex with his wife by method of discise, they both know who it is so one of them go to confront the person who did this, when he/she gets there a chance is given to the acused to clear up any slight misunderstandings there might be so the whole story of that night can be known, the acused then taunts the person, and infuryates them to the point of violance so the acusore draws a knife, then the acused pulls a gun and lafs, then acused starts to bhe marred man/woman(whatever let's just asume its a guy sorry bout that) with words until he has no more confidence, and feels overpowerd, like this whole thing has been a waste of time then the acused waves his gun and says face on the ground ass in the air, and any hasitation he theatons again. You can guess what hapons from here.
This is prety stinkin close to what hapend in the story and don't even say she would have fought back harder becouse in a situation like that dam close to everyone would do the same thing.
4387090 uuum no that's not even close to what happened , your scenario relies on 3 key factors which are not a factor in this story
the first being the accused had a gun ie life threatening power to threaten the other party with to demand sex from them , when we both know for a fact chrysalis wouldn't stand up to luna's tactics in a fight
second the part where the accused was the initiator of the desires for sex , when what actually happened was luna was going to literally rape chrysalis.....
the third.......well dangit , i forgot what the third factor was , went and had a bit of a conversation with another friend in between writing this and now i can't remember what was the other thing i thought about , but yeah you're still wrong lol......
4387533 your first point is understandible but you have to look at the whole thing she used her silver tounge to make luna dought herself wich would definetly afect her ability to fight or reason properly, (I know this becouse I have done this myself not to or for the same end tho I wouldent do that)
Your second point is also understandible, luna is guilty of atemted rape I never said deferently but that dosint meen its not rape on crisys part or that luna is inicent, they are both guilty but if they both went to court luna's sentince would not be as long becouse she beleaved she was justified in her actions and she was but she shouldn't have try'd to rape crisy as a punishment for rape that dosint excuse it and I forgot the rest of my little rant but I think you get the point. (I hope)
4392347 no it didn't , the only thing that stopped luna from continuing to fight was chrysalis pointing out that they would end up destroying half the castle in the process and a castle makeover wasn't something the kingdom needed right then.....
and no she's not either , idk how you keep putting these contexts where they don't exist , she made it clear she wanted to rape chrysalis , but she wasn't even able to attempt that before chrysalis flung out her dick and had a little dick measuring contest with her.....
and you missed the point of the flaw i was pointing out in my previous post that the scenario you described had chrysalis being the initiator of the violence for the purpose of forceful sexual intercourse , when neither of those were actually true in this story......
4392392 hay can we finish this debate in a few days with pm? Couse one of my grandmoms is on her deathbed and I have to go see one last time.(oh and I was just told this she was taken off life suport one hour ago) or I would totaly finish it here sorry
4399548 Colon cancer, if not discovered early, is one of the most difficult types of cancer to combat. It is not affected by chemotherapy or radiation treatments, and can only be dealt with surgically. Unfortunately, it is also a very fast-spreading form of cancer, so it is very difficult to remove surgically.
I promise you, we did everything possible to try to save her.
Normally these stories are pretty straightforward, but I have no freaking idea what was going on this time.
... okay, part of this was that I was confusing this with the Trixie's Magic Bit series, but I still have no idea what the characters are thinking. Especially Luna.
I am unsure how to feel about that. I can't say Luna hasn't deserved some punishment for a while but was mean.
....I...I'm so very confused...
Luna... How could Luna be protecting Chrysalis from Tia?.... Luna loves Tia more then anyone or anything...
...
Please update quickly I can't stand the idea of Luna hating Tia!
The only thing that gives this chapter any sense would be Chrysalis mind controlling Luna somehow from their fight. That's the only thing that makes any sense to me. I saw the fight coming last chapter, with roast Chrysalis served up on a silver platter, but it ended much differently, I'll give you that, Nom.
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Yeah, I was expecting a lot of confusion--and was even worried about a good deal of anger--from this chapter. I just want to remind everyone that, no matter how things look right now, I am a HUGE proponent of the happy ending.
All I can ask is that you have faith. (Well, I COULD spoil what is going to happen, I suppose, but I'm not gonna do that.)
4328362
no anger from me Nom just shock and confusement. I have every faith that Luna still loves her Tia more then her own life which is of course unending ^^
Does Chrysalis fancy herself some kind of alien (morally ambiguous) relationship therapist? The sex and domination is a bonus, of course.
Only four chapters in this one? After three very long stories?
Why does that make me feel uncomfortable...then again, this could be a lead up to an even bigger story.
And is it just me, or do Luna and Celestia end up yelling and growling at each other quite often?
4328362
You have succeeded in drawing both confusion and anger from me, though the anger is mostly directed at the characters involved.
I await the next chapter eagerly.
Oooh i want to see Bugs head on a pike for placing such discrord between sisters. This should be counted as coup, nothing less.
Celestia was worried about destroying Luna? Isn't Luna literally the most immortal thing on the planet?
And OH MY GOD. Chrysalis is slowly taking a place below Discord as best villain, even if she's not a villain exactly. (Which sadly means that Sombra will have to go. RIP.)
But yeah. Serious mode activate.
In the middle of all this seems to be Luna's "aid". I'm predicting she's a changeling controlling Luna or at least dampening her senses much like Chrysalis did to Cadance. But the Queen herself seems to be stirring things up quite a bit. So it potentially could be in fact Chrysalis conducting this whole ordeal via other changeling drones whilst Equestria is in a weakened state.
Just some thoughts though. Probably not accurate beyond obvious observations.
Wow, a literal dick measuring contest between a princess and a queen.
I believe the word you want here is "sidled."
They were the Ponytones. Although I just realized the joke may have been that he did not quite remember their name correctly.
The scene between Chrysalis and Luna reminded me of a certain tiarawhy game.
If the chapters continue following their current trend, the next and final chapter should be a little more than twelve thousand words.
Chrysalis can control minds. It would not be a stretch to think that the strife between Luna and Celestia is a puppet show being controlled by Chrysalis.
This was quite good. I thoroughly enjoyed it. Especially the uncomfortable sex scene. Have the elusive Fluttershy ahegao as a reward for how very uncomfortably turned on your sexy words made me.
KBO.
Let me start by stating that I do not typically read this particular type of fiction, but I said "what the hell," and read this one. (From the beginning, yes.)
And all in all, I found it interesting.
Onto the things at hoof: Way to shatter some expectations right there. Cheese-legs has been a busy little bug. I also must be honest, nothing I've read in your series has bugged me, until now. (Pun was intended.) But this chapter made me feel sick. Excellent job invoking a emotional response with Luna's situation.
Also it is nice to see you Chrysalis some brains... Cant wait to see what they look like.
4333180 As always, thanks for the catches! (Though "saddled" probably would work just from a pony perspective, but still...)
And, y'know, 12,000 words is probably going to be about right on that last chapter...
4334606 Thank you! Those are very kind words.
And I'm also glad that what happened between Chryssie and Luna is getting the response that I wanted. It wasn't supposed to be a clean thing. There's a lot of dirt there that should bring mixed emotions. It's the kind of thing that is uncomfortable to write--and it was.
What ?!
Already finished ? That was short, I hope you planned something after that.
I expected the next chapter to be the beginning of the action, I will not spoil since I think I already understood what is coming with side characters, but to finish this soon, I'm very surprised.
And not in the good sense. (but well, it's your story )
Hmm. It sort of adds up. Maybe the petitioner influx is changelings, slowly draining her love for her subjects. So she's weakened enough for Chrysalis to start controlling her...
Chrysalis was also reading up on Equestrian law... and now Luna is challenging Celestia via some legal claim. Chrysalis is definitely manipulating Luna heavily. The implication was that her guard has been infiltrated, too.
Crysilis is gilty of rape twice and now mentil rape plus mentily braking luna causing her to go( just guesing on this part) stokholm sindrome on us and chalinge cele for no good reason. Sir con you crucify dear old cricy for us please
at this point with your caliber of writing it's impossible for me to have such concerns.....
ok so never mind about that last question then she does still have the golden horn....
oh my luna the laughter that hit me when i eventually came to realize while reading on that chrysalis made luna her bitch simply by having a female dick sizing contest with her XD ......
and bit i get to the end here i was beginning to wonder if you were going to have chrisy try to become the new coldheart of this realm , and then maybe you could have had her free coldheart and then things REALLY could have gotten fucked lol.....
hmmm also , about last chapter with luna pulling the worried self scene , i thought the princesses were still supposed to be immortal no matter what? just that they are able to trade this immortality (which btw really needs to be brought into a discussion of it's own so it can be made clear how they were immortal before , could then not be immortal , and then luna ends up being immortal again anyways , with all the battling they're always doing kinda brings that into needing to be discussed) to get a free res from tarterous or w/e , so why would luna be worried about that then?.....
aaannd ooooooooo luna challenging celestia's right to rule , the event that kicked off this amazing series :D . how everything always comes full circle , this doesn't mean you're going to be done for this now does it :c ?.......
4330289 that's only because those are the interesting scenes that make for an interesting story , if we got 15k words of celestia's and luna's every day encounters that would be kinda very boring to read about.....
4332265 she doesn't know just how immortal luna is , but at the same time she's still very destroyable as noted by her first encounter with coldheart......
4333180 fuck me that there's no images that have already been made which could fit that scene , that closing image in that video is just a super cruel teaser leaving me wanting so much more >_>' .......
4334606 from the beginning of this book or the whole series?....
4338899 nooooo that's not long enough , how will you tie in every side story and be able to fully explain the consciousness behind them all in such a short framework?.....
4369901 she's only guilty of deception , the sex happened through the other party's verbal agreement , this isn't even that really fucking retarded professional victim playing feminist conceived scenario of they had sex but she didn't like it afterwards so she gets to retroactively call it rape , there was only super hot sex and that's it.....
...well you know unless the mind controlling speculation turns out to be accurate , but last time chrysalis enchanted someone they didn't have her name on their head , would be kinda silly if that were the case :l ......
4379003 realy? So the fact that luna said no and risisted isn't rape? The fact that cricy didn't give luna a choice? Well maybe I'm mistaken let's look back now shall we .... eeyup THATS FUCKING RAPE! I don't know how you see her consenting at all it dosint even hint at that quite the opisite realy. Now let's look at celestias eh? Yes I can see how you would think that isn't rape becouse she thought it was lune, but tell me would she have done the same if cricy wasint in descise? No don't answer that I can tell you the answer and it is NO she shure as hell wouldint, deception like that is still rape no matter what loophole you find. And now you, you I don't even *sigh* how do you not see any of this?
4381224 because when you say yes , then a previous no is negated
she resisted? last i read she just stood there and did nothing , and this was immediately after she was about to go into mortal kombat with chrysalis , so no there was absolutely 0 resistance from luna here.....
>didn't give luna a choice
nobody ever does anything they didn't chose to do , so don't even try that.....
> I don't know how you see her consenting at all it dosint even hint at that quite the opisite realy.
yeah i don't know either honestly......
and i disagree about the part about celly , though im finding it extremely difficult to draw some other kind of rl parallel that accurately creates the same kind of situation that the deception for sex thing does , the best i can say right now is if you replaced my partner and we sexed and i later found out that you were actually an impostor i wouldn't retroactively cry rape.....
4381503 4381224
Let me throw in my 2 cents...
Were either/both of those actions rape? Yes...and no. To me, the action against Celestia was the more "rapey" of the two, because it was done under duplicitous circumstances. Tia thought she was having sex with her wife, under circumstances that in their relationship would be considered normal, but it wasn't with the person she thought. So, it was non-consensual sexual activity--after the fact. To me, that is rape. Legally...well, I'm not a lawyer, so I can't say.
As to the case with Luna... That is an entirely different circumstance. Chrysalis did not force, nor did she trick Luna into having sex. She did present herself in a more "alpha" light, which surprised Luna and led to things that were very unexpected for her. I wanted the scene to be both uncomfortable and arousing, and most seem to think that it was. It certainly was a grey area for them to be in. The reason? Well...that will be revealed later this week (hopefully...I'm almost done with it) when the last chapter of this story is posted.
Oh, and in answer to the "THIS IS SHORT!" comments from folks: yeah, it is, but I mentioned in my blog posts that the next few stories (see multiple story reference in sentence) were going to be shorter, more personal tales. Originally, Circles was going to be two chapters longer, but as I was breaking them down, I realized that there was a lot of padding in this one, so I pared it down to a more streamlined story.
This story DOES lead into other stories, though. There are definite repercussions and ramifications to the events of Circles, and I will be getting to them in future tales.
Thanks for the patience and understanding.
4384770
4381224 right but another thing that i just thought of to support my stance is having the same scenario but for a different reason , namely i thought of a scenario where 2 parties are going to have sex , and the 1 wants the medical data form the other to make sure they don't have any std's they'd be able to infect them with , and then fabricated data is given and they sex and later the party finds out that they were infected by that other party , i don't think anyone would consider that to be an act of rape by the other party , and i view what chrysalis did the same way.....
ok good good to know , my dick can hardly wait!.....
4384770 thank you for adding your part I always feel like I'm going to get something wrong if I don't have the authors piece to clear it up. Have a
4384891 well this is how I see it if we're doing conperisens.
A marred man finds out someone else has raped/had sex with his wife by method of discise, they both know who it is so one of them go to confront the person who did this, when he/she gets there a chance is given to the acused to clear up any slight misunderstandings there might be so the whole story of that night can be known, the acused then taunts the person, and infuryates them to the point of violance so the acusore draws a knife, then the acused pulls a gun and lafs, then acused starts to bhe marred man/woman(whatever let's just asume its a guy sorry bout that) with words until he has no more confidence, and feels overpowerd, like this whole thing has been a waste of time then the acused waves his gun and says face on the ground ass in the air, and any hasitation he theatons again. You can guess what hapons from here.
This is prety stinkin close to what hapend in the story and don't even say she would have fought back harder becouse in a situation like that dam close to everyone would do the same thing.
4387090 uuum no that's not even close to what happened , your scenario relies on 3 key factors which are not a factor in this story
the first being the accused had a gun ie life threatening power to threaten the other party with to demand sex from them , when we both know for a fact chrysalis wouldn't stand up to luna's tactics in a fight
second the part where the accused was the initiator of the desires for sex , when what actually happened was luna was going to literally rape chrysalis.....
the third.......well dangit , i forgot what the third factor was , went and had a bit of a conversation with another friend in between writing this and now i can't remember what was the other thing i thought about , but yeah you're still wrong lol......
4387533 your first point is understandible but you have to look at the whole thing she used her silver tounge to make luna dought herself wich would definetly afect her ability to fight or reason properly, (I know this becouse I have done this myself not to or for the same end tho I wouldent do that)
Your second point is also understandible, luna is guilty of atemted rape I never said deferently but that dosint meen its not rape on crisys part or that luna is inicent, they are both guilty but if they both went to court luna's sentince would not be as long becouse she beleaved she was justified in her actions and she was but she shouldn't have try'd to rape crisy as a punishment for rape that dosint excuse it and I forgot the rest of my little rant but I think you get the point. (I hope)
4392347 no it didn't , the only thing that stopped luna from continuing to fight was chrysalis pointing out that they would end up destroying half the castle in the process and a castle makeover wasn't something the kingdom needed right then.....
and no she's not either , idk how you keep putting these contexts where they don't exist , she made it clear she wanted to rape chrysalis , but she wasn't even able to attempt that before chrysalis flung out her dick and had a little dick measuring contest with her.....
and you missed the point of the flaw i was pointing out in my previous post that the scenario you described had chrysalis being the initiator of the violence for the purpose of forceful sexual intercourse , when neither of those were actually true in this story......
4392392 hay can we finish this debate in a few days with pm? Couse one of my grandmoms is on her deathbed and I have to go see one last time.(oh and I was just told this she was taken off life suport one hour ago) or I would totaly finish it here sorry
4396404 My deepest condolences. I lost my mother-in-law five weeks ago. Always rough.
4396404 why pm?...
what's wrong with her?...
4396781 how?.....
4397072 She passed away after a battle against colon cancer.
4397791 why didn't you cure it then?.....
4399548 Colon cancer, if not discovered early, is one of the most difficult types of cancer to combat. It is not affected by chemotherapy or radiation treatments, and can only be dealt with surgically. Unfortunately, it is also a very fast-spreading form of cancer, so it is very difficult to remove surgically.
I promise you, we did everything possible to try to save her.
4399589 well i suppose you didn't inform me at what stage it was it was discovered at , but did you try this?....
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=0psJhQHk_GI
4328362 All the more reason to like your stories. I love happy endings. There are enough dad endings IRL.
Wow, I gotta see where this is going. Chryssie is spelt badass. So far I think she's either trying to fix the relationship between the princesses.
Cya
Raziel-chan