Capitulo Uno
A Chance Meeting
"It is said that everything is not what it seems...I've come to learn this particular saying firsthand when I was under unfortunate circumstances..."
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It was a fine spring day in Canterlot, with everything going about the same way it had the day before, not that the citizens found anything wrong with it. There were certain ponies of upper class enjoying their brisk walks while simultaneously basking in their haughtiness as their noses were high in the air. Luxurious establishments were bustling with activity in a more collected fashion than any neighboring cities. It was a perpetual cycle of action, and anypony wouldn't trade it for the world.
Of the many citizens going about their own business was none other than the most important pony amongst the locals: Fancy Pants. He was seen in his fine black tuxedo outside of a cafe sipping tea with his wife, Fleur De Lis, who chose to stand rather than sit down. After finishing his latest sip, Fancy Pants faced Fleur with a content smile.
"Such a pleasant air this day, would you not agree, Fleur?" He asked as he watched Fleur extend her left hind leg backwards while placing her right foreleg behind her head, merely giving off an 'mhm' in reply as she arched her back. Fancy Pants only chuckled in amusement at the sight.
"I know you possess a penchant for poses, but must you do so during our conversation?" He asked as he raised an eyebrow at Fleur.
"You know that it's the only way for me to gain proper exercise while on the go. Besides, you've never commented on it before, have you?" Fleur replied with a sly smile as she struck another pose, though she briefly wiggled her flank at her husband and winked.
"Touche, my dear. You do look rather stunning when you're 'working out', as it were." Fancy Pants quipped as he sipped his tea. While he did so, his right ear twitched, bringing him to pause mid-drink before lowering his cup and looking around in bewilderment "Strange...I thought I'd heard something out of the ordinary for a moment..."
"Oh? What troubles you, dear?" Fleur said as she took a break from her poses, noticing Fancy Pants' change in behavior.
"I'm not certain...But it felt as if-" Fancy Pants was silenced when a small tremor rocked himself, Fleur, and the civilians around them. When the tremor subsided, everypony looked around, murmuring amongst themselves over any potential dangers that may have befallen their peaceful city. What made it worse was that some ponies could not help but feel as if a presence were around the area; a presence that filled them with unease.
"What in Equestria is that?" Fancy Pants whispered as he looked around.
"I-...I'm not sure...Are we in any peril? Is this a sign?" Fleur asked as she trembled, her former mood vanished.
"Even I am uncertain to the answer, my love...But I do know who can help us in our time of need," Fancy Pants said as he tried to locate the source of the tremor.
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"I never thought I would owe my life to such interesting creatures, let alone the one that had rescued me from such a cruel fate..."
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Canterlot, as a city, was glorified in its own way, but it did not hold a candle to the castle that belonged to the diarchy that governs over all of Equestria. Canterlot castle was a symbol of Equestria's pride and joy, and the many citizens of Equestria near and far would find solace in the help of their rulers, Princess Celestia and Princess Luna.
The two sisters were busy with their scheduled hearings from their subjects in the throne room over varying matters, some of which were tedious in their own way, giving whomever would speak to the princesses an open ear. They were currently listening to a brown stallion's proposition that involved expanding his hayburger business towards Ponyville. Celestia smiled warmly at the stallion before her.
"Your proposition is very appealing indeed, Mr. Patty Pat. I will permit you to construct one of your restaurants in Ponyville."
"Thank you so much for your approval, Your majesty!" Pat took off his chef's hat and bowed in genuflect with a grin on his face, "I won't forget this act of kindness. I'm sure Ponyville will enjoy my life's work!" Before Pat could feel like performing a victory dance, a royal guard burst through the throne room doors, galloping towards the princesses and stopping next to the burger chef.
"Majesties, there's word of an unknown disturbance that has caused distress in the city. We desire your presence immediately."
"A disturbance?" Luna asked inquisitively "What has happened that requires our attention?" The guard looked up at Luna with a frown.
"We're unable to discern the source, but according to our report, some of Canterlot's citizens were met with a small quake, followed by a feeling of somepony close by, though we do not know for sure," He hung his head again, "The guards stationed to patrol the city streets have searched high and low for anypony in particular, but we have no leads whatsoever, and the citizens are growing restless," Celestia and Luna stared at each other before sharing a nod and looking back at the guard.
"We're on our way," Celestia said in determination before turning to a grey mare wearing glasses, "Postpone any further hearings until this matter has been resolved," She said authoritatively.
"Yes, your majesty," The mare replied as she bowed. Celestia and Luna rose from their thrones and followed the guard outside of the castle.
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"It was my aspect and mine alone, yet there he was..."
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Nervous murmurs filled the air as the citizens around the tremor's area could not shake the feeling of a being in their presence. Some darted their heads about in hopes of avoiding a possible ambush while others tried to muster the courage to leave. Whatever it was, they felt it robbed them of any instinct to run away, making them think they would be open for attack if they had done so. A wealthy couple held each other as they shivered in fear.
"What do we do, dearest? I'm uncomfortable with the position we're in," Upper Crust mewled to her husband.
"N-Now now, sweetheart. We have to be strong..." Jet Set gulped as he shivered, "That's right...strong...Like the guards that patrol our fine city..." He said with faint reassurance.
"But they're just as afraid as us..." Upper Crust pointed out.
"...Oh dear..." Jet Set whimpered.
"The princesses! They're here!" A noble cried out in desperate joy, eliciting a swarm of relief from nearby citizens as they saw the approaching images of Celestia and Luna.
Celestia and Luna were looking around as they approached the crowd of distressed ponies, wondering if it were possibly Discord pulling another prank on the citizens. Both of them were miffed just dwelling upon the possibility.
"Sister, what compelled you to release Discord knowing that he wouldn't change his demeanor entirely?" Luna asked irritably, "We would be lucky if he did not choose to disrupt any neighboring nations and thereby initiate conflict between us."
"It was a good idea at the time, but I'll admit I regret ever coming up with it. But we have to be sure it is him so we won't have to deal with any further-" Celestia stopped dead in her tracks, her eyes widened in surprise as she looked forward.
"Sister? Sister, did you find Discord? What has he done?" She followed her sister's gaze and let off a low gasp at what was seen.
"What? What's happening?" One of the ponies asked "What do you see?" He asked as he tried following the princesses' gazes. Sadly for them, what the princesses saw, they could not.
It was better that way.
In Celestia and Luna's vision were two foreign and battered figures coated in copious amounts of scars and blood in the middle of the crowd. There was a bipedal creature with peach skin and blue hair, wearing tattered white garments and was on his knees and gasping for air as one of his green eyes were closed. A skeletal jaw piece rested on the right side of his face. A katana-shaped blade was seen on his waist.
On his back was another figure, though its face was hidden and its arms were slumped over the former's shoulders. its skin was darker and its hair yellow, and appeared to be wearing the same color of garments. The gasping figure stared up at the princesses once he noticed their eyes were locked on him.
"Hey...If you two can actually see us, I'm gonna need a favor from you both..."
To be continued...
Bit you evil Zebra
*See's new story, gets invested, learns it is joke. So conflicted.*
Still nice though. I was worried for a second that you might abandon Kick About when I saw a new Bleach crossover from you.
Side note: It's 11:30 pm, March 31st here, so I really wasn't expecting this.
Grimmjow should try to become the king of Equestria~
Damn you Dirty Bit, I was so excited for a new crossover. Please make this a thing if not for me then for Fluttershy look at that face, look at it and tell it no.
Grimmjow in Equiestria GRIMM-FUCKING-JOW
please make it a story
As others stated, really wasn't expecting this. It's still 9:30 p.m. on 31 Mar for me. Gotta say that it would be awesome if you did continue it; in my opinion Stark, Halibel, Ulquiorra, and Grimjow are the only espada that could feasibly adjust to another culture... you know, without blowing it up or getting imprisoned for the rest of eternity. And personally, I've always been the most interested in Halibel out of all of them... though Nel is close through sheer adorableness.
...Nicely done. I commend you, good sir, on this prank.
Too bad it didn't quite work on me ;)
Darn you bit! All your bleach crossovers are making me not want to do mine in fear of failing compared to yours!
Who am I kidding, I'm gonna do it anyway
Good luck with it and keep it coming!
4165501 Look, if Charlie_K can outshine my Ulquiorra fic, I'm pretty sure whatever you'll come up with can hold a candle
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I edited this weeks ago, nearly forgot about it.
Also, you forgot something, DB.
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4165596 Very well, we shall do it your way...for now
ME WANT! ME WANT! Amazing first chapter, I pray for another chapter to be made, as the awesomeness of both Grimmjow and Tier in Equestria would be awesome! Keep goin and stay golden^^
4165637 Credit given, where credit due, guy.
4165846 ...Wait, I thought you were correcting the way I worded my late credit to you
Before Pixel:
Story edited by Pixel brony
After Pixel:
Edited by Pixel brony
EDIT: I was serious by the way. I kinda felt like a dick when I forgot to credit you then
Sweet either way, I'd read more of dis.
4165854 No worries.
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P.S. I hate this holiday.
P.P.S. Your Bleach stories now includes Espada 1-6. Personally I don't think that the others are developed enough to be the centre of a story, or even one chapter. Well, maybe Yammy.
You are a fucking expert at doing these kinda things Dirty, you really are... But who was the second espada asides from Grimmjow?
4166408 Nevermind, just looked at the comments, realized I'm a tit.
Princess Celery! Grimmjow has to say that. The sage of melons demands it! Wokka shokkaaaa!
Anyways, nice chapter. I don't know if you're really going to make this a story or not, although I'm doubting it right now. Regardless, I like this. I was hoping for Ichigo though. I've yet to see him in a Bleach/MLP crossover. I don't know why I want him in, but I'm guessing it's a strange wanting phase.
However, I don't see Grimmjow asking for a favour, especially so politely. I'd be guessing it'd be more demanding. Ah, what do I know? You're probably more accurate with Bleach than I am, so do what you think fits him. PLI likey. PLI liiiiikeeeeey.
Awww, no Sternritter in Equestira story?
Oh well, I guess this will have to do.
You'd damn well better finish this... If not, I will summon eighteen thousand hollows to devour you while you sleep. And then I'd cut your chain of fate.
And laugh.
Farce or not, I'm interested.
April 1st, You win this year.
4166625 ...You've read PEACH yet, right?
4166821 Oh, I can't do a Transformers crossfic. I cannot do the franchise justice (And neither can Michael Bay )
4167018 I'm waaaaiiting~!
4166316 4166408 Your tears are delicious
I personally do hope you continue this but if you don't I'll be saddened but would understand.
4166316 Thankfully, Yammi's an idiot. The ponies dun hafta worry! He'll just fall off a cliff or something.
Grimjow is in Equestria...
So many dead ponies are gonna happen.
>>>Now, before you shower me with butthurt and sustain me with your tears>>>
Oh I'm gonna give you butthurt, all right...
Oh, and the other Espada seems like Halibel from the skin and hair description. Makes sense since they survived.
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He's also big enough to step on Canterlot
4169665 He'd get lost in the Badlands and squish Chrysalis instead.
And there was much rejoicing.
4170576 Hands to yourself, thief!
Could prove amusing.
4167954 Just started thanks to you asking. That satisfies my desire. Well, mister Melon Sage must fly off to his cucumber country to rule over his cucumber servants and melon subjects.
4175001 Suddenly, knives
4175041 You little fuck... You are gonna do this weather you like it or not... DO YOU HEAR ME?!
4180014 Sorry, what was that? I couldn't hear you over the shower of tears that I'm basking in
4182442 I'll make you shower in blood! YOUR BLOOD!
4182656 Ewwww...I'm more comfortable in the tears of my victims; more sanitary.
Toodles *runs off*
4183225 SMOUGH! AFTER HI--- Oh god... what have I done?
It looks great so far. I would most assuredly favorite this story were it continued. I have not read a story where their invisibility to those with low spirit energy comes into play.
Please continue this story!
4185292 If this actually becomes popular
Whenever THAT might be...
You MAY just get your wish...May being the key word...
...And the month after the one where I posted this thing
I will favorite this in case it does continue become a story. If it doesn't then I will be sad, and will have to un-favorite(?) it.
4205798 Every day is April Fools Day in a world of chaos!
But yeah, Imma wait and see how popular it gets...
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Another day, another victim :3
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Am I really a victim if I can un-favorite the story? Or if the story is continued?
4206202 Good things come to those who wait
Also, yes, you're still a victim no matter what you do
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YAY!
4284798 I give it 75 upvotes tops before I'll even be motivated
MOAR!