Peter was hired to do one thing, work on a rock farm. But when he starts to develop a relationship with the owner's daughters, he is forced to balance his work, his relationship, and his well being, all while all while dealing with a zebra curse
Ok dude, you need to slow down with all the Pinkie laws breaking there is be able to bend them a little and in short periods of times, and there is just obliterated all together, and make Pinkie like that…its not a complain per se more of an advice because it suppose to be weird, but if you push it a bit to far it start to become just plain creepy
Also what do you mean 4 mounts I got lost his bad luck can or can not be removed?
So, for four months, this guy is going to be a walking disaster zone. I don't think Pinkie can still around him THAT long. Question: If he was getting hurt so often, why is he still working at the rock farm?
don't forget his luck is bad but good at the same time like finding valuable materials that helped the pie family pay his expenses and make a peofit I think they are gonna keep him awhil
Desperation, and the story seems to indicate his 'bad' luck has been a boon to the Pie's business. Also, the daughters have a infatuation with him, so that must be accounted for.
4328952 Yeah that scene confuse me…did Twilight miss use the spell?, or both saw they respective fantasies by accident? It is a bit confused what the hell just happen
Ok dude, you need to slow down with all the Pinkie laws breaking there is be able to bend them a little and in short periods of times, and there is just obliterated all together, and make Pinkie like that…its not a complain per se more of an advice because it suppose to be weird, but if you push it a bit to far it start to become just plain creepy
Also what do you mean 4 mounts I got lost his bad luck can or can not be removed?
I´m curious, who was Twilight´s "partner"? or was she performing a "solo"?
4 months of nothing but bad luck...atleast the poor bastard didn't break a mirror :/
So, for four months, this guy is going to be a walking disaster zone. I don't think Pinkie can still around him THAT long. Question: If he was getting hurt so often, why is he still working at the rock farm?
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Maybe because there will be less thing that ca cause him harm
4328326 This. Is a surprisingly accurate statement.
4328536 What?
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That maybe they send him to the farm house because in there are less objects that could harm him
don't forget his luck is bad but good at the same time like finding valuable materials that helped the pie family pay his expenses and make a peofit I think they are gonna keep him awhil
Your chosen cover art is too explicit.
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Desperation, and the story seems to indicate his 'bad' luck has been a boon to the Pie's business. Also, the daughters have a infatuation with him, so that must be accounted for.
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Yes!
So what, Twi's a lesbian, or she just have bi/les pulls when watching porn?
BTW. What was that language they used? GTranslete tells me it's Polish, but it's not, I would know.
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Italian.
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It's pretty wrong grammatically speaking though. Or maybe that's the joke? I'm pretty confused.
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No, I'm just fucking terrible at it.
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Yeah that scene confuse me…did Twilight miss use the spell?, or both saw they respective fantasies by accident? It is a bit confused what the hell just happen
Wait. So did Twilight get off to whatever she saw, too? I'm pretty confused as to just what the hell happened in that scene as a whole, actually.
And I believe you meant "grazed" rather than "graced".
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Electrical malfunction made them both...*eeugh* themselves.
Four months of sexually anxious Pie sisters and near-death experiences. Ah yeah!
4328530 isnt it obvious... he likes to get 'stoned'.
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Or did he? *suggestive eyebrow wiggle*
The scene with Dash was fantastic, and I have no idea why.
Also, four months? Damn. Poor guy's going to die somehow, but I'm not sure if it'll be from a rock farming accident or just dehydration.
Looking forward to more.
4334617 10 bucks says fucked to death by the sisters
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Marble is grey mane grey coat
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Make it 30, and you got a deal.
I usually wait for a story to top 10k before I read it, but I couldn't resist this one's summary any longer...
Now I want more, and it isn't there yet...
I am now sad, pls fix that soon?
i dont think i cant get with this story lol.
doesnt seem like my cup of tea
4 months?
Ouch. Be sure to SAVE often, mate.