Goddamn you! Now I have to wait for another update! Not only that but now the story will end sooner. Also as much as I would want to see Twi stay and save her, I get the feeling that abandoning her would prove to be more interesting to read, so that`s what I would like Twi to do. Also I would like to point out that you really are a genious. You know how to make everything interesting
It's remind me of something. Maybe a game... or a film perhaps? Whatever, Twilight don't really have so much choice, try to help Ditzy even without magic, or run away. I like Ditzy but... It's better for Twilight that she avoid the ashes ponies until she have a weapon
Hmmm - Twilight usually doesn't run, unless it's snakes, or bats, or bees, or hydras, or evil shadow-kings, or...
Okay, she does run. Like, a lot. But I think she'd rather stay and fight, even without her horn, and try to put a hoof through some sand-beast's head if that is what it takes to protect Ditzy.
Well that's...creepy.
Goddamn you!
Now I have to wait for another update! Not only that but now the story will end sooner.
Also as much as I would want to see Twi stay and save her, I get the feeling that abandoning her would prove to be more interesting to read, so that`s what I would like Twi to do.
Also I would like to point out that you really are a genious. You know how to make everything interesting
It's remind me of something. Maybe a game... or a film perhaps?
Whatever, Twilight don't really have so much choice, try to help Ditzy even without magic, or run away.
I like Ditzy but... It's better for Twilight that she avoid the ashes ponies until she have a weapon
I hope that twilight rescues her, it feels more in character to me.
Also great job with explaining so much yet still leaving us in the dark!
the map description reminded me a bit of dead frontier
Hmmm - Twilight usually doesn't run, unless it's snakes, or bats, or bees, or hydras, or evil shadow-kings, or...
Okay, she does run. Like, a lot. But I think she'd rather stay and fight, even without her horn, and try to put a hoof through some sand-beast's head if that is what it takes to protect Ditzy.
Considering how Twilight thinks, she would probably try to save Ditzy. Me on the other hand, I would haul ass outta there.
She's probably going to save her.
Not Ditzy! Why?!
Try attacking one of the ash monsters.
Punch it in the face, if it goes down, stay and rescue, if it shrugs it off, get the hell out of there.
Masterfully crafted atmosphere. I always enjoy audio affects in literature so well done the too.
Keep up the good work.
You should make two different routes here. Let us choose which one happens; a "choose your own adventure" of sorts.
I don't want you to leave Derpy, but you know... It would be interesting to see what happens in both situations.
Ahh. Silent Hill. Very nice.