Truth or Dare

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Truth or Dare

Now, at first glance, Truth or Dare seems like fun, but, after a few rounds, things get a bit... odd. Very odd.

Warning: Contains some probably drunk ponies, and a smidgeon of K-I-S-S-I-N-G!

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Sparkers16

Sparkers16 #1 · Mar 27th, 2014 · · ·

Cute!

Peaceofpie

Peaceofpie #2 · Mar 27th, 2014 · · ·

Laughing my head off over here!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Roudee

Roudee #3 · Mar 27th, 2014 · · ·

I think the ending was a bit rushed. You had a good buildup, but then it felt like you said "and then Luna showed up and made ponies kiss. The End." It was funny, but it was sudden and very brief compared to the rest of the story.

I rate this story 6/10.
Keep on writing.

Probably Terrible

Probably Terrible #4 · Mar 27th, 2014 · · ·

4140628 Thanks for the feedback! I wasn't quite sure how to continue the rest of the story after that event, which is why that happened. I did pretty much say: "And then Luna showed up and made ponies kiss. The end." By that point my ideas for the story were kinda running out, so I decided to cut it short

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