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Shadow Scar


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It has promise, but it needs work.

I'd suggest for you to seek out help from the Overly Extensive Editors group.

I'll follow this, for now.

This is not what "Getting Burned" means!

4713653 should i change the title?

4714117 up to you

I just think there should be at least some burn injuries :/

4714863 kinda hard ro burn something that bathes in lava for a past time.

4715298. Oh there will be plenty of that soon enough.

Comment posted by The Great Derpsby deleted Jul 19th, 2014

4719448 I hadn't even noticed that thanks for pointing it out

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Happy to be of service!

Do you want me to delete the post now that it's no longer relevant?

Well, I just hope that that bitch Inferna gets hers in the last chapter. I started hating her when I read about her plans for Celestia and the rest of Equestria.

I only hope that War and Shadow Scar...and Discord, too, of course...throw a monkey wrench into her plans. I mean, Discord is pretty much a god, after all.

And Inferna has messed with Fluttershy. Not the smartest thing to do, methinks.........

And executing the Sun Phoenix-blessed Princess of the Sun, you flaming (literally) idiot?! Really?! Who's going to raise the sun if you do that; you?!

I think not.

Anyway, can't wait for the next (last) chapter! I hope that Inferna, like Dainn, gets her comeuppance in it!:twilightangry2:

4785026 Oh she will, no need to worry there.

4785143 Ohhhh, good! Can't wait to see what you have in store for the witch!:trollestia:

*rubs palmstogether gleefully*

(And when I say "witch", I'm being nice.:raritywink:)

And on another note, might I ask if your avatar is a picture of your OC of the same name in the story?:applejackunsure:

Just curious, you understand.:raritywink:

4785187 yes that is a pic of Scar. And yes they are the same char.

Sequel please? Maybe an aftermath?

4785338 Kinda thought so. It, and she, look good.:twilightsmile:

And that was an excellent ending! Inferna got what she deserved, the caribou also got their just desserts, wounds (both figurative and literal) were healed, three kingdoms were united, and all ended happily. Well done.:ajsmug:

4785861 I'm considering a sequal, perhaps a series even. We'll see where it goes. But i do plan on expanding on this.

4786010 I aimed to please. I also feel this a good stepping stone to starting a possible series but for now i do plan on expanding on this. Might take a while to make but There are ideas floating in my head for a sequel.

4786305 Yes, you most certainly do.:twilightsmile:

Really? Cool. That's a sequel that I'd definitely read. So just take your time with it. Anything worth doing is worth doing well.:raritywink:

4786305
I just realized your name... :derpyderp1: Fuck I'm slow.

4787466 happens to everyone now and then no biggie

You must be Morpheus here 'cause you fed me a red pill and brought me (back) into the matrix...! :rainbowdetermined2: :pinkiehappy: :duck: :ajsmug: :yay: :twilightsheepish:

This brain of mine is burning bright like lava,
Its loud thought scream for me to type:
In this, My Hope, MY TRUST, AND ALL OF MY PASSION!
BLAZING ACCLAIM!!!
Go, GO... GO!!!!!

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I (have to) agree with you one that one; after all, there seemed to be some spelling errors at the end such as this one:

Cadence and Shining had finally snapped out of their depression, both realizing that they couldn't change the past but what they could do...Was try to make amends for their betrayels. Shining had been released from his bonds as has Cadence the two assisted Inferna by mapping out all known places the caribou might be hiding. Inferna then redirected her search teams. If Shadow Scar had been hurt in any way the ones responcable would have hell to pay.

4713653

Oh but it will be soon enough...

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Yea, all that heat would force it into a spontaneous combustion...

Normally when I'm reading FOE Fic I'm always on the verge of throwing up, but this one made me laugh like a mad man.

Awesome Character. Great story. I am actually doing one myself even as I type this out. Mind being an Editor for me?

Brothers and Sisters, retribution is at hand.
It is our strength.
We are the children Fuasticorn.
Let FURY guide your weapons.
Let VENGEANCE be your song.
We are the ANGELS OF DEATH.
And our enemies Shall FALL!

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