The evil that turned Luna to Nightmare Moon was not just from within. Despite anypony's good heart, it could affect them and turn them. The Corruption was spreading fast over Equestria, and it reached the most powerful victim ever. Princess Celestia.
It was not just Luna who had a bad side. The difference was that Luna, even as Nightmare Moon, could be defeated. Celestia could not. there was nopony who could challenge her in this state, and nopony could keep the world from burning.
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Good story so far but u could have explained the corruption thingie
facepalms..............
no, celestia would not be unstoppable as a nightmare. if anythign she would be somewhat more powerful than luna if only because she has more experience.
and its the Nightmare force dude.
Sorry, but is the "and its the Nightmare force dude." comment for me, or for the first comment? You are correct, the Corruption is intended to be a form of sickness that "corrupts" a pony. It is intended to be a rather personalized form of corruption in our world. Also, I may be exaggerating a bit when I say Celstia would be unstoppable, but remember that Celestia needed the Elements of Harmony to defeat Nightmare Moon.
Nice Avatars you two have.
I suggest you read through you story an extra time to catch some mistakes you missed. Also, press the >> button beside the comment you want to respond to so the the person you're replying to gets a message that they got replied to and that everyone else knows who you're talking about. And this story is a lot more enjoyable for the fact it, unlike like the dozens of other stories I read by first time authors who are trying to write an epic adventure with an unique premise that's not actually all that unique, is not just ignoring Discord as a factor. Although in my headcanon Discord could easily defeat the Corruption, Celestia, and Luna with a few snaps of his talons if he wanted to, your take on how strong he is will be interesting.
Interesting concept... I like it
Me too.
But why no new update?