Princess Cadance and Shining Armor had generated enough power for love, so much power that they floated up in the air and surrounded the room in a flash of light. Chrysalis turned around and saw what was about to happen, the five elements of harmony had watched happily as Shining Armor and Cadance's love for each other gave them power. But as for Twilight, who had quickly remembered all the pressure that they had put on her at the practice rehearsal earlier, was not so happy.
Cadance and Shining Armor's love had created a shockwave of love, causing a wave to blast Chrysalis and her changeling army out of Canterlot and off to parts unknown with her screaming in defeat as she went off with her changelings. The blast from their love had also managed to free Princess Celestia from her cocoon prison, which Chrysalis had trapped her in.
"Don't worry about me, I'm fine." she said getting back up on her feet, she then turned to Twilight who had her back turned from them and approached her.
"You have a real wedding to put together." she said, but her response was the sound of sobs, then silence.
"Twilight is everything okay?" she asked her placing a hoof on her back, she kept sobbing, the next one who saw her sad and approached her was Shining Armor.
"You all right Twiley?" he asked, the next one was Applejack.
"You okay, sugarcube, we've got a real wedding to do." she said, finally Twilight snapped.
"A REAL WEDDING?!, IS THAT ALL YOU IDIOTS CAN THINK ABOUT????!!!!!!!!!" her scream of anger echoed in the room, there was soon immediate silence, they had never seen Twilight this angry.
"Twilight, what's your problem?" Rainbow Dash asked
"You all are my problem, can you not see what has just happened?! We nearly lost Canterlot to a group of monsters that wanted our love. They nearly got all of Equestria, and still all you care about is the damn wedding?!"
"Twilight, calm down." Celestia said kneeling her head down to Twilight, but Twilight turned and slapped her face, causing her to step back from her.
"Why are you out here instead of back in that cocoon?!" she snapped
"Twilight I...."
"Glue it you son of a bitch!" There were shocking gasps from everypony in the room, including Celestia. She was cussed at by her own student, plus back talked, Twilight continued on.
"This is what I was trying to warn you about at the practice rehearsal. I was trying to warn you, and what did I get as a response?!......"
"You can forget about being my best mare, in fact, if I were you, I wouldn't even show up to the wedding at all."
"Come on ya'll, let's go check on the princess."
"You have a lot to think about."
The first one to speak up from her outbursts was Applejack, "Well, maybe, if ya' had just come in here with proof that she was evil, we would've believed ya'." she said.
Rainbow Dash backed her up, "Yeah you just barged in here acting all loopy, plus you were acting like a filly!"
Twilight's rage grew, "So you just decided to use that as an excuse to dump me, or did you all just decide to take evil's side, and check on that black hag?!" she then turned to Celestia, who had her head hung low in disappointment.
"And I'm really beginning to think that one around here that has a lot to 'think about' is you, because do you know what happened after you left me in here all alone?"
"No." she said.
"She trapped me in the caverns below Canterlot." her eyes were now moist and teary again, plus were bloodshot from her anger. "I was so...embarrassed....(sob)...and frightened, plus the imposter told me.....that.....I was never going to be found!"
Everypony was again in shock, they had never known that.
"I could've died down there, if I hadn't found Cadance and escaped with her." she said trying to calm herself down, but she just couldn't, she turned to Celestia.
"Why did you reject me Celestia?!" she snapped
"Twilight, I was disappointed, you were acting childish. Applejack is right, if you had just come in here with proof, we would've believed you."
Then in a fit of anger, Twilight pounded her hooves on the floor. The vibration from it was so hard that it caused a window to crack hard.
"I know I NEEDED proof, and I KNOW I was acting irrational, but does that really excuse the fact that we were facing the threat of an attack?! Did that excuse the fact that nopony thought to carry out ANY checks for the behavior of Cadance?! or Shining?! Didn't any of you bother to think it could've better been safe than sorry?! Or were you all just too blind to your own ignorance and stupidity because materialism is more important than friendship?!
Rainbow Dash had just about had enough of her rage, "Twilight shut up, you're acting like a filly again, we need to get back to doing the wedding."
Twilight's rage mode had now reached the boiler,"So help me everypony, I am going to get through to you, and if this is the only way, then so be it!" she said lighting up her horn and starting to shoot blasts of magic. First, she shot down the beautiful curtains that were hanging on top of the windows causing them to fall off, and the beautiful plants that stood in between the curtains fell off and shattered making the plants and dirt scatter all over. Then she looked up at the ceiling and shot down the chandelier and curtains around it, causing the chandelier to plummet to the ground and shatter, but everypony backed away before getting crushed.
"Twilight!" Cadance screamed at her, but Twilight didn't listen.
"Twilight stop!" Celestia said, but Twilight just kept on going, her final destruction target was the arch that stood on the stage, the one with the bells on them, with one shot of her magic, the arch toppled down onto the stage and broke in half, causing the bells that were on it to snap off and land in front of Shining Armor.
After she had finished, her body was now boiling red with fury, her face stained from tears, but was still crying, Celestia approached to try to once again reason with her, but Twilight backed away, for she had already known the truth.
"I'm sorry Celestia, but I quit, I'm no longer your student, goodbye!" she said storming out of the room and leaving behind a group of ponies and a now ex-teacher inside a now destroyed wedding room.
This is exactly how I felt during that situation.
Good premise. Terrible execution.
well I still like bitterness than this.
More! Make Twilight's friends suffer! Yes!
I'm going to have to agree with Justy. I like the premise, but the execution needs work. I definitely wouldn't go for violence or swearing
This could be improved. Alot. Grammar mistakes, medium amounts. Still, I like, and I enjoy this. The feeling of making friends/people you care about realize the pain which they caused you...
...God, I'm weird.
So awesome :D
this has already been said im not nitpicky about grammer but theres some grammer mistakes here and there like imposing should be posing or pretending i guess
I hope you continue you this. I'm anxious to see what'll happen next now that the wedding has been called off.
4175299 What kind do you expect, a fist fight?
WOW, not only Twilight said the truth to THEIR faces, but also Cadance GOT angry at Shining Armor and Spike as well said the truth, and as a Cherry in the top, Celestia is arrested for high treason!
This is good for business!!!
4177141 Hell no, we expect a hoof fight
4178141 You only kick and punch for self-defense.
4178243 What are you, my mother?
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Not the quality I was hoping for, but it'll do for now.
I... honestly, this is pretty bad. I can't fathom how this received forty-four Ups.
Grammar aside, everyone here was severely out of character, and the writing/narrative itself just made everything cringe-worthy -- it all reads as a "bash-fic" than a plausible scenario of a cluster-fuck.
I'm not at my desktop at the moment, so I cannot go into more detail here, but if you send me a PM later, I can give you a lot of help when I'm back at it.
Recived a message saying that you updated chapter 2, but when I wanted to read it, it didn't appear. What happened?
go to hell Spike. Let's see her raise the "stupid sun" if she gets killed fighting things only the Elements of Harmony can defeat. And she did defend them against the changelings. It's not treason to fail
Where's chapter 2? I received an update message, but I don't see it.
4179978 not done yet.
4179821 4179978 So did I, but it doesn't seem to be up yet.
Wonder why we got a notification that it's up when it's clearly not? Weird.
I guess something just hiccuped somehow.
Finally someone points out the fact that Celestia does nothing in these important times.
4175350 Looks at the tags and chapters.
Yeah, no. Sadly that's not gonna happen. This isn't the kind of Canterlot Wedding story that we would like Mister Kyurem.
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My thoughts regarding the end of the newly rewritten chapter one can be described as thus:
This is an interesting remake on the story. Although if I was to pic something out, I'd like to say that when Twilight still insists that 'She saw it' wasn't really justified as enough.
This still makes little sense. Personally I would have gone about having her say something like;
"I know I NEEDED proof and I KNOW I acted irrational! But does that really excuse the fact that we were facing the threat of an attack?! Did that excuse the fact that nopony thought to carry out ANY checks for the behaviour of Cadance?! Or Shining?! Didn't any of you bother to think it could have been better safe than sorry?! Or were you all just to blind to your own ignorance and stupidity because materialism is more important than friendship?!"
Just as a heads up. ^^; Still, nice rework going on so far. :)
Nice going Rainbow Ct.
Hope to see some more soon.
hopefully this time the chapters will be better focused.
I guess THIS is the best alternate version of the wedding in Canterlot!
This story has taken an interesting turn
FAIR WARNING the next one who comments about me re-writing it, and I'm deleting it!
4620721 okay thanks for the warning.
4622396 not bad, continue onto chapter 4 I wanna see what happens next.
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Aw Snap! Now I understand why it's called "The Wedding is Off!" It's basically an Alternative Universe of "A Canterlot Wedding" where Twilight feels like she's the only one who thinks that they should Apologize to her for her actions before the wedding, but Instead of Applejack saying sorry to Twilight, after understanding every thing now, she doesn't do it intil later on!... ...I think...
I seem new to you so I'll say this: When i first saw this, when it came out, I was going to read it but I didn't know if I should. But now that I've read the first/1st Chapter (Of this fanfic of course, and I can tell it's a Rewrite), this story/fanfic is interesting me already!
And more of what I think of the first/1st chapter: It seems Twilight is upset about what has transpirterd after the fight with the Changellings, and Chrysalis, and she is angry with all of them for not, I repeat, NOT listenning to her and ignored her for her behavior!
It's cruel , but AWESOME!!
Good luck on the future chapters, xd77! I'll try and read the other chapters you made when i get the chance!
Yeah, if Twilight came in there with proof they'd probably just come up with another bad excuse.
5812482 Besides, what if there was no proof at all?
I see that Twilight pulled a Triton there.
I'm with Twilight. At least up to a point.
Twilight will Kill Da Wabbit
With the logic brought on by Twilight, I would be rooting for chrysalis. Because everyone (minus twilight) were only caring about their selves.
Like many others said. Even if she brought proof they would just make up another excuse. Now granted, she had no right to destroy the room, but hey, with them all being so stupid, it was bound to happen.
For one, Shining claimed she used a healing spell for his migraine. Had everyone forgotten that twilight studies MAGIC for a living?
ITs why I stopped watching the show after season 2.
Good, good... Let your hate flow, and soon your journey to the Dark Side will be complete.
Twilight Sprakle, your hate and rage has made you the perfect host of a red ring. Use it, become one us, become a red lantern and let your rage take down all of your enemies
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Twilight...join us...join the changelings...why be enemies, when we have a common enemy...stronger United...
I'm with Twilight, she has a good point.