After her humiliating defeat, Trixie tried to go back to her travelling show. No town would have her, so now she just wanders, with no direction. Until she gains a new master.
4087536 Cutie Mark Crusader: Non Escape Artists. The Spike/Sweetie Belle relationship is a developing master/mistress one. I find it easy to write stories on this subject, as I have... 'field experince'.
4087868 Both, actually. I'd have to say 60/40 Dom/sub, but I haven't been active for the past four years since joining up. Well, unless it's... practice... on myself.
4089088 4089685 You know linking to nsfw material is against the rules now, right? I suggest listing a bunch of tags that could lead you easily to that picture (artist:caroo,trixie), just like Nostalgia Schmaltz does.
4090179 Yes I do. And personally I think that rule is stupid.
If someone comes to a story with these tags and opens in work, then that's there choice. Hell, you should see some of the stuff I've linked in my A/N of other stories. Nothing said so far. But now edited to show that is is NSFW.
I may just have to read some of these stories. Quick question though. Why is it always Trixie that's the sub? I truly believe it should be the other way around. Not that I dislike this story mind you, but it's always Twilight that's the dom, and it's getting old.
I'm going to keep an eye on this story. Because, any Twixie romance with Dom/sub is just plain awesome.
4090293 I'm sure you've noticed both the unicorn Twi and the alicorn Twi tags? We've got some time to cover, who knows what will happen...
And yes, I have. It can be found here. Fair warning, it was meant to be just clop up until chapter 16, where the story I had subconsciously put it came to a head. See if you can pick up on it through, and happy reading!
I think Trixie isn't going to be too cooperative in the future if this is what she gets. And of course Twilight is the dominant bondage nut, the quiet brainy ones always are. At least she's not a totally over the top "you will worship me or I will beat you" type.
4093025 Not so much as worship, no. And it won't be a beating as such. Of course, we'll have to have a few spankings, but Trixie's punishments will be different.
4093041 Spankings is fine, as is maybe a little riding crop and even whip. I don't want this to go brutal, unless Trixie is into that sort of thing. So long as Twilight stays in the"you're hot and I'm going to play with you now" territory and doesn't slip into "I own you, now up and take it" territory, I'm cool with it.
Then again it is your story, so you can take it wherever you want.
4090211 It annoys me to, especially when it comes to interesting cover art. Perhaps you could at least name the site you found it on for me? I can't seem to find it myself.
As for the story, interesting so far. You certainly have my attention.
Erm....what 'illegal' things did Trixie do? I mean I know she kind of took over Ponyville, and that's breaking the law and whatnot, buuuut....she was allowed to leave, right in front of Princess Celestia no less, so she was clearly pardoned. Unless of course you're trying to say that Twilight, her friends, and even the entire town just stayed hush-hush about the whole thing after what they went through, for some unknown reason, until after Trixie was gone. Even though Celestia was right there, watching a show Twilight was putting on with her magic, with Trixie right there next to her offering a little boon to enhance the quality of the display for the Saddle Arabians.
But then, if we didn't inexplicably spontaneously have everyone decide to 'arrest' her on-sight, we wouldn't have our BDSM porn from out of nowhere....*sigh*.
I'm really hoping that Twilight and her friends are just really hot for the idea of having a slutty little mare to break in and turn into their sex toy. Because otherwise there's just a gigantic inconsistency in the plot that makes my inner writer writhe in discomfort.
4253759 Even if Trixie apologised and Twilight accepted it, it does not excuse the fact that she committed a criminal act. As for Twilight and her friends... that has yet to be decided. Well, four one is joining in next chapter.
Also, AU tag, dude. Which is an author's 'Screw what happens in canon' tag, as I like to call it,
4254122 I'm well aware that it doesn't excuse a criminal act, but as far as we know, as I stated, Trixie was clearly allowed to leave even though Celestia and probably the Royal Guard were right there. And if not a single one of them said anything and Trixie actually wasn't pardoned, not only would that mean that they all willingly aided in the escape of a fugitive that used and abused them, which just doesn't make sense after what she did, it also makes them all accomplices in her crime. Willing accomplices at that, especially since in this case, it seems that the influence of the Amulet isn't being held responsible for Trixie's actions.
Of course, this being an AU, it's also possible that the actual crime has changed and we don't really know what she actually did to make her a criminal in the first place
Mind you, you shouldn't take this the wrong way. I like where the story's going! I just hope that this is addressed at some point.
“Oh no, you’re not going anywhere.” She tried to summon her magic once more, but it faltered, leaving her perplexed until Twilight placed a mirror in front of her, and she saw a golden ring around her horn. She reached up to take it off, but it just zapped her hand, making her yelp. “We can do this one of two ways. You can either go with the guards in the morning, or you can stay here and make up for your crimes. Your choice, but that is staying on you for the time being.”
Twi? Go to Tartarus. I believe a starving, scared mare, whom's livelihood was ruined by you and your friends, and can't think of anything better than going to prison, has learned her lesson. Go. To. Tartarus.
“No, this is your first punishment. You regressed to speaking in the third person, and started bragging. Each and every time you do so, your punishment will get worse. Understand?” Something inside Trixie opened up… the feeling of helplessness, of her control being removed… it wasn’t that she liked it that scared her, it was that she wanted to explore it even more. “Trixie, I asked you a question.”
So you're punishing her for having a personality, eh, Mary Sue? I repeat, go to Tartarus.
didn't really except you to write this kinda thing.....
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actually no.
I will be keeping an eye on this.
4087477 Uncheck the mature tag and then see how many of my stories you can view. That's what he means.
4087514 Glad to hear it!
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what i meant was just the master/pet thing.
if you made a blog about this, than i didn't see it or missed it.
4087536 Cutie Mark Crusader: Non Escape Artists. The Spike/Sweetie Belle relationship is a developing master/mistress one. I find it easy to write stories on this subject, as I have... 'field experince'.
And no, I didn't make a blog for it.
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well i haven't read that one before lol.
That... was unexpected
But in a good way!
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Dom or sub? I'm dom myself. (I'm not big into it, I just like to mix things up.)
4087868 Both, actually. I'd have to say 60/40 Dom/sub, but I haven't been active for the past four years since joining up. Well, unless it's... practice... on myself.
4087912 For me, it's about 90/10. I'm OK with it, just not wild about it, you know?
at first i saw the story and i was like "Huh, seems nice." then i see the author, and i'm like: O.O "This ought to be good."
will read later
I am very interested to see where this goes.
Cover image source?
4087673 Trust me, if you'd read my CMC story, you'd expect something like this.
4087921 I can understand that, sometimes we're just not cut out for certain roles.
4088156 Oh come on, there are much better authors than me out there... but thanks, I hope you enjoy when you get here.
4088778 At the moment... even I don't know, but by the end of this, Trixie well be comphhh!!!
Keep blabbing like that, and I'll get the strap on back out. Now, come give you mistress a massage.
Mppph! Miphhtrepphh!!
Hush, Trixie, or I won't turn it on.
4089088 Now in the description. This would never come about had the artist not suggested someone write a fic for it.
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You know linking to nsfw material is against the rules now, right? I suggest listing a bunch of tags that could lead you easily to that picture (artist:caroo,trixie), just like Nostalgia Schmaltz does.
4090179 Yes I do. And personally I think that rule is stupid.
If someone comes to a story with these tags and opens in work, then that's there choice. Hell, you should see some of the stuff I've linked in my A/N of other stories. Nothing said so far. But now edited to show that is is NSFW.
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So, you've made stories like this before?
I may just have to read some of these stories. Quick question though. Why is it always Trixie that's the sub? I truly believe it should be the other way around. Not that I dislike this story mind you, but it's always Twilight that's the dom, and it's getting old.
I'm going to keep an eye on this story. Because, any Twixie romance with Dom/sub is just plain awesome.
4090293 I'm sure you've noticed both the unicorn Twi and the alicorn Twi tags? We've got some time to cover, who knows what will happen...
And yes, I have. It can be found here. Fair warning, it was meant to be just clop up until chapter 16, where the story I had subconsciously put it came to a head. See if you can pick up on it through, and happy reading!
love sub/dom and love twixy this will be a blast
4092497 And more is cumming,
I think Trixie isn't going to be too cooperative in the future if this is what she gets. And of course Twilight is the dominant bondage nut, the quiet brainy ones always are. At least she's not a totally over the top "you will worship me or I will beat you" type.
Faved and following.
4093025 Not so much as worship, no. And it won't be a beating as such. Of course, we'll have to have a few spankings, but Trixie's punishments will be different.
4093041 Spankings is fine, as is maybe a little riding crop and even whip. I don't want this to go brutal, unless Trixie is into that sort of thing. So long as Twilight stays in the"you're hot and I'm going to play with you now" territory and doesn't slip into "I own you, now up and take it" territory, I'm cool with it.
Then again it is your story, so you can take it wherever you want.
4090211 It annoys me to, especially when it comes to interesting cover art. Perhaps you could at least name the site you found it on for me? I can't seem to find it myself.
As for the story, interesting so far. You certainly have my attention.
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Or you could... just PM people who ask.
can I get the name of the site where that cover art from?
Well, that escalated quickly. Well done, though.
would it be possible to get the link to the full version of that cover picture? if there is one, of course.
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Yep I want to know too
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I will grace you all with the source of the image.
Look on derpibooru.org
we need moar
4248959 1667 words of moar is done so far. Patience, young one, and it will come.
Erm....what 'illegal' things did Trixie do? I mean I know she kind of took over Ponyville, and that's breaking the law and whatnot, buuuut....she was allowed to leave, right in front of Princess Celestia no less, so she was clearly pardoned. Unless of course you're trying to say that Twilight, her friends, and even the entire town just stayed hush-hush about the whole thing after what they went through, for some unknown reason, until after Trixie was gone. Even though Celestia was right there, watching a show Twilight was putting on with her magic, with Trixie right there next to her offering a little boon to enhance the quality of the display for the Saddle Arabians.
But then, if we didn't inexplicably spontaneously have everyone decide to 'arrest' her on-sight, we wouldn't have our BDSM porn from out of nowhere....*sigh*.
I'm really hoping that Twilight and her friends are just really hot for the idea of having a slutty little mare to break in and turn into their sex toy. Because otherwise there's just a gigantic inconsistency in the plot that makes my inner writer writhe in discomfort.
4253759 Even if Trixie apologised and Twilight accepted it, it does not excuse the fact that she committed a criminal act. As for Twilight and her friends... that has yet to be decided. Well, four one is joining in next chapter.
Also, AU tag, dude. Which is an author's 'Screw what happens in canon' tag, as I like to call it,
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I'm well aware that it doesn't excuse a criminal act, but as far as we know, as I stated, Trixie was clearly allowed to leave even though Celestia and probably the Royal Guard were right there. And if not a single one of them said anything and Trixie actually wasn't pardoned, not only would that mean that they all willingly aided in the escape of a fugitive that used and abused them, which just doesn't make sense after what she did, it also makes them all accomplices in her crime. Willing accomplices at that, especially since in this case, it seems that the influence of the Amulet isn't being held responsible for Trixie's actions.
Of course, this being an AU, it's also possible that the actual crime has changed and we don't really know what she actually did to make her a criminal in the first place
Mind you, you shouldn't take this the wrong way. I like where the story's going! I just hope that this is addressed at some point.
Twi? Go to Tartarus. I believe a starving, scared mare, whom's livelihood was ruined by you and your friends, and can't think of anything better than going to prison, has learned her lesson. Go. To. Tartarus.
So you're punishing her for having a personality, eh, Mary Sue? I repeat, go to Tartarus.
I loved this all so far can't wait to see what happens next.