lol Love the story, It is sad to think that this Spike "will" end up breaking his Rarity in two. Not looking forward to that hospital trip But got to give it to Rarity, 9 hours is no joke lol. You would think she would like bring in another mare in the relationship to relieve some to the pressure off of her (or maybe 3 if he is going almost into the double digits lol)

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Interesting thought, but I'd have to wonder if Rarity would go for it. I would imagine monogamy is a popular concept in high society.

I actually laughed when I reread her old record. When I first wrote the chapter, I put down three and a half hours, which then got me to wondering how long other people go for. I usually don't go longer than an hour or two, so three and a half seemed like a long time to me. But I did a bunch of looking around, and I guess that's considered foreplay for some other women. I know researching something like that on the internet is not a very reliable means of factual information, but some people went a little too far into detail for me to doubt it a whole lot.

The long and short of this story; there's some crazy-ass chicks out there

4083251 lol true, But that is the thing everyone knows that the rich are the biggest freaks there are behind close doors. And Spike being the most exotic thing in all the land (not to mention his hang time with his double dragons I don't think she will have problems finding women interested in joining the ride lol). And Rarity also mention she has had a "interest" in mare. All would be needed is for them to be at a party and a mare to mention she would love to share her husband with her (would help if she almost get broken in two the night before by some super spike loving) I think that would create a interesting series of who Rarity brings home each time to help ease the burden of that "monster" she has in the bedroom.

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....Applejack...

4083316 Lol think they take a trip for a weekend to their old home, and AJ tells her how long since she has "been" with a man, even longer since a good one lol. Rarity feels bad about that and is not 100% since they fooling around on the train. So she brings it up and let AJ take a shot at the bull. After that and the fact she didn't have to take all his....energy herself she start seeing it as a good idea. That is where all the interesting mares of Camelot come in (and whatever interesting fetishes they bring along with them)

He's way better at it than I am ( for now... >:3 )

So it begins......

if you want really awesome stuff, go check out his stories

Well, I don't mean to brag.

Either way, loved this keep it up! And I'm sure you already know my views on adding another mare or two to the mix.

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Random thought just occurred to me; I wonder if there are clop competitions...

...Now I'm wondering how much pride one could possibly take home in writing the best clop.

Clop-lympics! Hoah!

I'll definitely give that idea some thought. Though, I think my first task would be to find a way to make it relevant to the story. Wanna try and make that a constant theme for this collection, lol.

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There are competitions I believe, I think Equestria After Dark has some every now and then but I don't know for certain, A few groups on here do so as well, but I haven't ever done it before.

And I understand completely, there's alot of scenes I want to write but Its hard to work them all so they make sense, which is definitely a bummer at times.

loved only thing i hated was the somking thing but other wise

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Damn high society and its ill-gotten habits! lol

Y'know, a little creativity and one more mare makes things perfect for all!

I imagine Raity's endurance would improve dramatically if Spike were only in one hole on each gal.

Might even outlast him!

Well good story very good just a lil thing I didn't like was the smoking, girl smoking is a turn off for me. Other then that loved it.

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girl smoking is a turn off for me.

Uh... okay. Sorry you feel that way?

It's kind of odd, considering you specified that women who smoke are a turn-off for you. And I'm like, "As opposed to men who smoke?"

That was so awesome

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Glad you like it!

4083251 Depends on the kind of foreplay

4083501 There's Clopvember which is done by Equestria After Dark every year. Basically the same idea as Nation Novel Writing Month (NaNoWriMo). You get the whole month to write a erotic novel type fic.

And now for the story. Your word choice in certain places could be improved, example being that no one finds calling a penis meat sexy , but overall a enjoyable read. I was quite pleased

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Better to call it meat than a chubby, lmao

Clop isn't exactly my forte. ( If you haven't noticed that already ) So my typical word choice and sentence construction isn't the best fit for it. But I can always improve on that in my spare time.

4091966 That I will not disagree with

The best choice usually to allude to it when you can

awesome fanfic by the way, but can you do one where it is a spike/harem where spike is with the main 6 plus the two sister princesses and they are living in a castle?

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I'll try to remember to keep that idea in mind, but the best time to hit me with requests is when I'm holding a contest in my blog.

And then 11 months later(or more), Rarity lays an egg...

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And then their dragon-born offspring shall be named Crystal Clarity.

Mm das gud

Faved for married het, which is a somewhat lacking sub-set of clop.

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I'm willing to bet all my savings that's been done before.

Not often enuf!