Not a bad start so far. I'll keep an eye on it

Fat fetish...

God dammit I don't know what to say to this.
Im going to track this because this is most likely a one of a kind that we may never
see again.

Now this is something that hasn't been done very often in this fandom, and what's more surprising is the fact that its very well written. The amount of detail you put into the story is very well implemented, I didn't think you could actually make eating sound so sexy (I'm a sick person, I know) or detailed for that matter. Now what really got me was the fact you decided to go with gradual weight gain rather then going the usual route, e.g., "Rarity ended up gaining quite a bit of weight from the apple fritters that Applejack had given her the other day. A large majority of the weight caused Rarity's stomach to swell immensely, causing it to now hang pendulously low to the ground; swinging from side to side with a seemingly hypnotic nature as she walked to Applejack's house.", that wasn't very detailed and was rather rushed, but I think you get the gist of what I mean. Not that I don't like those kind of stories, its just that I prefer the more realistic weight gain. The stuffing was simply magnificent, my favorite part of any weight gain series, and this was one of the best, by far.

I'm definitely going to be keeping an eye on this.

-W

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I don't know what to say either, and I wrote it.

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I appreciate it! I honestly thought the eating scenes were lacking, but hey, I'll take it.

And yeah, gradual is more my thing, rather than instant.

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>most likely a one of a kind that we may never see again.

Is that what you think? This is just the beginning~

ANYWAY. Baron, you have my full support. This is magnificent. Now I just need to get my offering ready for showing~

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aaaa~

I'm glad you liked it! There will be more, oh yes. Lots more.

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Our fatties will block out the sun :A

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Luna would be pleased.

...which kind of makes me want to write fat Luna. strokes chin

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Aye, that could be true.

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I kinda did! I still have it lying around, unfinished and horribly outdated compared to my current level of writing prowess.

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D; Tease.

I've actually had a few fat Luna stories bouncing around my head, because Luna is fucking adorbs and doesn't get nearly enough love in this fandom.

But then, neither does Cherry Jubilee. Or Colgate.

So many thin ponies, not enough time. 3:

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I mostly just focus on Pinkie and Shy and Rarity as far as this sort of thing goes, though Applejack is also enticing.

And people keep telling me to draw Chrysalis as a fatty :y

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Haha, Pinkie. That one's kind of a given in this kind of thing.

Fun fact: in the original draft of this, Twilight was the fat one. Figured it fit (heh) Rarity more, though.

>Chrysalis
>fatty

I'd feed her my love, if you know what I mean.

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aw yiss

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You two are odd.

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Maybe. sniff Maybe.

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I dont get it.

Also, your Fic... I am so emotionally conflicted right now.
Im not usually one for this kinda stuff but god dammit you made this so well.
The writing is excellent and the detail is just... I dont even...

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I mean maybe I'm odd! I'm not denying it.

I do really appreciate the comments, though! I was afraid the descriptions were lacking, especially the ending eating scene. :B But, you guys are making me feel all fuzzy inside and maybe I should stop worrying so much.

I'm hoping the later chapters can keep up with expectations!

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Yes, please continue this. I have to see an ending to this. I need to see an ending to this
because this fic is something so abnormal in this community.

Your fic is probably the only Fic of its kind on here.

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Oh, you! I'll finish it, don't worry, even though I don't really have an ending planned and I'm doing this seat-of-pants.

I should have learned my lesson on doing exactly that with my last story, but I'm dumb and didn't.

And no, there's a couple of other fat fetish stories. Very few, though. Very, very few.

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Wait srsly? I...wat?
Does not compute!

How come I havent seen them? Are they ninjas? Electronic ninja stories or
something?

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I know! I was surprised too, but there's a couple.

Stonershy and I made a group for them, My Not-So-Little Pony. If you want more, go check it out!

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What the fuck dude. How have I not seen any of these? I need more sleep or something.
My keen internet eye is becoming sloppy!

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For being about fatties, they're surprisingly sneaky!

Take a look, most of them are really well done. I intend to read Forty Bits when I get home from work tonight, it looks pretty good.

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I read Forty bits... Sex scene at end... Damn...

Fat ninjas. How do?

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Pudgy Twilight sex scene? Aw fuck yeah. Now I really need to read this.

Shame I'm leaving for work. Oh well.

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(Possible Spoilers)

Its actually RainbowDash who's the Pudgy one in the end I believe.

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>Rainbow Dash
>pudgy

ALL OF MY MONEY. TAKE IT.

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agghhh anthro ;-;

I like my ponies as ponies. But, I've got plenty of art. There's just a big lack of stories.

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^ MFW I found that picture. I seriously had to take a second to process what I found.

Also I agree on the anthro, Ess no no

Fair enough

A fat rarity? I must keep an eye on this to see how this tantalizing morsel of a tale turns out

Just like a few others this isn't a turn on for me but I don't have to clop to a clop fic to find it enjoyable.
With a general intresst in sexuality of most kinds I can find something enjoyable in most "clopfics", like "watersport" fics being just funny and this one is just...intressting.

It's a plus that I do enjoy "larger" women (to an extent) but really, I am enoying this fic and will be looking forward to more.

i have my sceptics on real world fat fetish, but it sounds soooo much better ponified!

You have gained another favorite and a like, cant wait to see the rest!

I felt disgusted whilst reading this. I, like Rarity eating Applejack's fritters, await MOAR!

I'm not normally for mixing my kinks with my more innocent pursuits. Gotta say though this is fairly well written for the feeder genre, of the classic "country living" subgenre. I am both intrigued and disturbed by the descriptions, since I've never read this kind of thing involving horses before. Keep it coming, I want to see how this goes before I make a real judgement on it, but it looks good so far.

I can't for the life of mine imagine a Rainbow Fat...
This is not gonna end well, is it?

Tracking

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There will be no Rainbow Fats! At least, not in Soft Spot.

Yeah, I couldn't ever really imagine a pudgy RD without it being inexcusably OOC.

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inexcusably OOC.

Unless she did not have any say in the matter for some reason. Or it is set in the future and has been permenately kicked out of the Wonderbolts after making it in.

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>did not have any say in the matter

I like the way you think.

"everything was going to plan"
omg
is applejack
evil??????????
she must be evil to have a plan
i can just imagine applejack wringing her hooves with an evil expression while cackling madly

+=

I can't decide which of the two is the enabler. XD

“A... complement?” Rarity mulled the idea over in her mind several times, bouncing the thought side to side.

Should be compliment ! But I liked the start, gonna read on now!

Don't you think Rarity should be suspicious about Applejack cooking all that food when she was supposed to get her to exercise? I apologize if you address this somehow later on but I often forget these kinds of things if I read the whole story through.

Rarijack & Weight Gain? I approve. :D

*drools* Oh gosh am I drooling...? Oops

RariJack with Raritubby feedee? So! Awesome!