When the when the last mortal in the universe passes away, the lone immortal plans for her own funeral pyre. However she did not expect the interferance of a certain god of Chaos...
Really losing her memory? That is so original. This story may be good but seriously couldn't you pick something more original than losing her memories?
8381673 If you ever look into the Sonic canon, it is a thing. When Shadow does something major using Chaos Energy, his memory gets wiped until something triggers it. Consider it the price of using Chaos Energy is such a way.
8381687 You dont think i know that. Ive seen a lot storys that have the same thing. But that's the problem that's been used a lot. There are a lot of things in the fimfict thats been used a lot. Like losing your memory, humans that are cowards, humans that are too nice. Let me tell you That there is no human Alive that is that nice. Othere than that your story is good.
8381701 Ah, okay. So it is more of just an issue with an overused trope. Understandable from that perspective. Myself, I haven't run across very many stories where the amnesia trope has been used, so I didn't find any issue with using it. In my mind, the kind of magical exhaustion that Emerald suffered from her body trying to regenerate coupled with the summoning across realities scrambled a few things. But it won't be showing up again in this story, or any other ones that I write because it doesn't fit with them.
Really losing her memory? That is so original. This story may be good but seriously couldn't you pick something more original than losing her memories?
8381673 If you ever look into the Sonic canon, it is a thing. When Shadow does something major using Chaos Energy, his memory gets wiped until something triggers it. Consider it the price of using Chaos Energy is such a way.
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You dont think i know that. Ive seen a lot storys that have the same thing. But that's the problem that's been used a lot. There are a lot of things in the fimfict thats been used a lot. Like losing your memory, humans that are cowards, humans that are too nice. Let me tell you That there is no human Alive that is that nice. Othere than that your story is good.
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Ah, okay. So it is more of just an issue with an overused trope. Understandable from that perspective. Myself, I haven't run across very many stories where the amnesia trope has been used, so I didn't find any issue with using it. In my mind, the kind of magical exhaustion that Emerald suffered from her body trying to regenerate coupled with the summoning across realities scrambled a few things. But it won't be showing up again in this story, or any other ones that I write because it doesn't fit with them.