They came as conquerors...but they will leave as something new. Bonds will be formed in the occupied Crystal Empire, love will blossom, and secrets long-buried will be uncovered.
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As much as I enjoy all these character moments, actual Lunalis shipping, and Discord and Celestia teasing her about it, I kind of want the plot to move along, too. Also, really, what the hell is happening to Shining and Cadance? I think it would be hilarious if they find them just playing cards with their guards or something.
AGH! EVERY TIME THIS STORY UPDATES IT JUST LEAVES ME WANTING SO MUCH MORE!
Can't help but notice they called that changeling an it. >.> but at least she's alive, I was worried after his that other chapter ended.
I wonder if they'll even try talking to her.
... Now i imagine the other elements busting in on Bait and Pinkie going at it and Twilight thinking that he's attacking her, while the others facepalm.
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Thanks for the high praise! I'm working on new chapters over here, the plot (heheh) will be moving along shortly.
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I like and approve of this idea.
Goodbye innocence, it was nice having you over! Sorry my brain decided thinking of an image for this was a good idea
Wonderful quartet of chapters, with Bait and Switch and Pinkie and Shy, the dream, a hint on Chryssy's backstory. My favorite part was the Mane 4 speculating on what Bait and Switch are doing to their friends and being so off about it.
Eagerly awaiting the next chapter(s).
A donkey appears…
"We write her letters, after all"
bubblegum? Oh my.
More chapters! …if that's okay with you.
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This sentence seems to imply that romances aren't plot, which just isn't so.
I mean, we might get a bit of Changeling Reactionary combat, by the blurb, but we have to get farther into the Chrysaluna before that can happen, and it'll be happening slowly (though Luna, at least, has now been alerted and took off the brakes).
NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO. I want cute lil halfings! Lol.
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patience friend...ponies are all about responsible sex here.