*breathing heavily* Can't. Curse. Don't loose you cool, man. Okay. I hate just how perfectly you portrayed the characters. It really makes me wanna punch something. Good story. You did good, I'm just pissed at the ponies.

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I will take that positively and that I did something right.

Damian or otherwise known as "Night Angel" in the Shadow Step is an assassin.

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as for everything else.

Well let's see... Not much love an tolerance from the ponies since all they have done so far is hit, hit again, propose shoving Damien into the ever free forest, propose execution. And for what? Standing idly by doing nothing only looking at Applejack as she walked away? Yeah that totally deserves him to be put on leash like an animal. Ponies are fucking retarded.

smack that bitch Luna in the face, give a good cunt punt to Rainbow Dash and break Celestia's horn off and shove it up her ass.

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I agree. This fic's a good one, I can see it.
(For I am the future-telling Posodleedlodle, if you don't get the joke with the name look it up on youtube)

Hmmm... Interested to see where you're gonna go with this.

Looking forward to reading more.

4402146 ....... I see what you did there

4402150 and that, dear author, is what I wanted to say.

Hmm, for a second, I thought this was a crossover with Brent Weeks' amazing Night Angel Trilogy, if it is, then Kylar must have changed his name.

Don't know if I like the actions of the ponies. Don't you dare to make him a puppet that the ponies can control. Let him keep his temper and hatred towards some things. You took everything he holds dear away from him. His knives and shadow magic. Kinda brutal if you ask me.

Seem really cool can't wait for more man

“Does somepony need a cupcake?”

How I would've responded to it that question

"I don't know dose eneypony need a cupcake?"

4402316 No, it's not a cross, AFAIK. If you've read the whole trilogy then you know that for sure... What with him adopting peace and everything

Edit: Just realized, you may have meant something like an alternate universe.

Edit 2: Holy st, someone else has read that?! Internet hug!

4402150 Dude, everything that isn't a pony, zebra, or gryphon has been an enemy. Besides that one sea serpent. They are naturally gonna be suspicious of something with knives on its person that was found in the Element of Honesty's backyard, trying to gain her trust to later manipulate her into being vulnerable to kill or main her and her friends. Or at least that's how they might be seeing it. I don't know; I don't get any more knowledge than you.

4405919 I hope someone does a crossover like that, Kylar was/is badass

4406208 I enjoyed those books.

4406208 Damn right he was.

And now I wanna write that. Hmm.... Ideas?

BRB, rereading the trilogy.

4406660 Maybe have Kylar die, and the Wolf Dude (whose name I have forgotten)" decides to give Kylar peace, and sends him to Equestria. But, perhaps, dark forces from his world will follow.

4407501 This is becoming more and more appealing to me.

Also, I think we should take discussion of another story off of this story's page; it feels like I'm stealing views even though the story doesn't exist yet.

Unless the author doesn't mind, that is, in which case whatever.

4408605 You're free to talk about whatever.

4408827 OK!

4408605 Maybe Kylar becomes, hmm, I can't think what race of pony would fit Kylar, but he still has his gear, and his Wetboy greys, he has brief memories of fighting Timberwoles. He wakes up in Fluttershy's cottage as she cares for his wounds.

4408863 Honestly? I'm tempted to put alicorn, just to be "that guy", as I always am. But unicorn makes more sense, because he really couldn't fly before; if he still has the kakari, then that makes shit really interesting.

4408888 yup, it's like some random bandit puts an arrow to his forehead, turns around and takes a piss in the bush, a second later, Kylar wakes up and shanks him mid piss, worse way to die. Well, unless he had been taking a dump when Kykar shanks him.

4409270 Hmm... Right, I'll get on that.

I know exactly how he'll get into Equestria, too. Randomly falling into a rift in spacetime.

Because fk yeah.

4409307 Meh, I like the Wof dude sending him into Equestria to have a peaceful life, the. Some evil dick from Azoth follows.

4409320 Actually, yeah. I'd forgotten about that...

Maybe when his new wife dies (the assassin, forgot her name) Wolf Dude calms him down and sends him to Equestria for peace.

4409353 Didn't Kylar wed and Bed Viv?

4409455 That was her name! Viv.

Yeah, when Viv dies, the mage guy decides to give Kylar peace by sending him to Equestria.

4409462 Yeah, that works, link me and I'll check it over.

4409613 I'm gonna make an empty Doc and link you to that; I'll start work on it later today. I can't right now. I'm too busy doing homework.

EDIT: Can you PM me your email? I want to share with you directly.

Rainbow Dash and Luna for some reason being racist....or specist.....WTF?

OMG! Best story ever so far! Please update! Thank you for bringing this into my life Duelist96!

4414718 I'll try but they will be slow since chapters are going to be at least 10k words in length or even longer.

4414725 take all the time you need!

This... is... amazing. I expect another chapter or I'll be super buthurt

Damn good sir!

When s the next chapter coming out?

4474288 I'm currently working on the next chapter, but unsure when it might come out.

4475624 im left with nothing to do....ive been waiting for your stories to update by reading other storys from other ppl but now those need an update too.....meh :(

4676198 Sorry, just been busy trying to finish other things so I don't fail college. I do almost have a chapter finished for this story and on Final Stand I have started on the next one, as for Do I Belong, I need to check something before I post it.

4677542 college *shivers* I need to start thinking about that lol

I like the story thus far. I really do. But holy hell do I want to murder EACH and EVERY SINGLE ONE of them. Like, seriously. These are the ponies that preach love, and tolerance, and acceptance, and understanding.

And the first thing they do upon meeting a creature, who has done nothing wrong, and in fact tried to be civil, is to knock him out, steal his possessions, locking him up, threaten him, attack him, and then tell HIM to be civil? The hypocrisy these guys are spewing is through the roof!

For the sake of this story, I really hope they get sufficiently punished for this.

“Well, I saw this creature looking at you as you walked away and I just wanted to make sure that it didn’t hurt you.

This whole "Attack-something-that's-new-without-thinking-twice" behaviour is getting rather tiresome. Sadly it seems to be the same scenario in most HiE-fics.

Probably one of the biggest clichés in this genre and most likely what irks me the most in story's that involve something new.
Maybe it's a running gag and I'm just missing the punchline.

“As much as I would love to do that, Damian, we have come up with something else,” Luna said, a little disappointed.

Probably the most OOC Luna that I've got to read so far.

4933629 No matter what the story an what they do, the Mane 6 will never punished for anything bad they might do. Because they are the 'Elements of Harmony' and considered national heroes or some shit, making known what they did and punishing them would make Equestria look weak in the eyes of other nations/countries/races. Celestia can't ever have anything bad the Mane 6 might do be known to the public, so they all have the highest diplomatic immunity to get away with anything they wanted if they chose too.