So far, each FOE story that I've read (admittedly not a terribly large number) has had a chapter where I go into it and get slapped in face (in a really good way). Where the author really seems to hit their stride and the story asks 'do I have your attention now?' Whether it's an increase in depth of characterization, a plot revelation, moments of laugh out loud comedy, a harrowing action sequence, the unveiling of a dangerous secret, a combination of those or something else in entirely. There's always been that one chapter that makes me say not only am I glad that I've read this far but that I really want to read further. For Rangers of Wintertrot I feel this is that chapter.
A Fallout Equestria fic that is slightly less dark than most and has quite a few moments of comedy. I like it! Can't wait for it to continue and for the Diamond Dog to show up.
Just finished up through Chapter 6, and may I say your style and prose have quickly improved! I enjoyed the premise from the beginning, and now that Our Heroes have acquired a base of operations (or have they?), I'm very much looking forward to where things go from here.
Love your story, there is not enough stories about the Steel rangers, or Applejack's rangers. Also could you give a rough estimate of how far along chapter 7 is
3383944 It's pretty much finished, just some tidying up and adding in an ending. Had to delay a little in writing up the ending due to recovering from a root treatment, but if I'm lucky and nothing distracts me (Not you, you're not a distraction ) then I might be able to finish it before Halloween.
So...Jack Knife had a thing for Ink?....That just makes her death a bit more tragic....As well as pointing out Ink's thickheadness. {This is Ash Ketchum/Phineas levels here.}
OMFC, SO GUD, WHEN 7 COMING OUT?!
I crack myself up. :D
Hilarious chapter. Good work guys.
Awesome story so far! Kind of makes me want to write my own FoE :D
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Thanks ^^. Glad you both enjoyed it.
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Happy to hear that. ^_^
So far, each FOE story that I've read (admittedly not a terribly large number) has had a chapter where I go into it and get slapped in face (in a really good way). Where the author really seems to hit their stride and the story asks 'do I have your attention now?' Whether it's an increase in depth of characterization, a plot revelation, moments of laugh out loud comedy, a harrowing action sequence, the unveiling of a dangerous secret, a combination of those or something else in entirely. There's always been that one chapter that makes me say not only am I glad that I've read this far but that I really want to read further. For Rangers of Wintertrot I feel this is that chapter.
A Fallout Equestria fic that is slightly less dark than most and has quite a few moments of comedy. I like it! Can't wait for it to continue and for the Diamond Dog to show up.
3019687 Glad you are enjoying it.
I just finished shotguning the whole story and LOVED it, every chapter.
3163020 That is very encouraging. Thank you. The next chapter should be released this month.
Just finished up through Chapter 6, and may I say your style and prose have quickly improved! I enjoyed the premise from the beginning, and now that Our Heroes have acquired a base of operations (or have they?), I'm very much looking forward to where things go from here.
3173656 You read my story =D. Thanks Calbeck. Glad you enjoyed it so much, I'll definitely be getting chapter 7 out this month.
3167821 Can't wait!
Love your story, there is not enough stories about the Steel rangers, or Applejack's rangers. Also could you give a rough estimate of how far along chapter 7 is
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It's pretty much finished, just some tidying up and adding in an ending. Had to delay a little in writing up the ending due to recovering from a root treatment, but if I'm lucky and nothing distracts me (Not you, you're not a distraction ) then I might be able to finish it before Halloween.
So...Jack Knife had a thing for Ink?....That just makes her death a bit more tragic....As well as pointing out Ink's thickheadness. {This is Ash Ketchum/Phineas levels here.}
Great chapter by the way.