It has been 3 months since Pinkie has been in the human world, and the whole world knows about it. After a meeting with the U.N. I am tasked, together with a squad of 5 MTF guys and Pinkie Pie, to go to Equestria, get Pinkie home and establish a safe and secure base and relationship there. But during a containment breach at site-209, we're stuck in Equestria. Meanwhile somewhere on Equuis an old threat is rising again and is more dangerous then ever
Chapter status for release
Intermission part 2: being/not made being made by Marathon
Chapter 1:Setting done, undergoing editing process
Author notes
1.Chapters will be revised from time to time. Some names will be placeholder names (such as Obama or Willem-Alexander) because I can't get on a name origional.
2.You don't like the fic, tell me why and I'll see what I can do. If it's because you don't like HiE fics, why are you even here?
3.Tags will be added or removed from the story as it progresses.
4.Chapters marked with M are made by Marathon.
5.If you have any questions regarding the story, please contact me as Marathon is only here to help me. I will be able to give an explanation on where this is going.
6.Don't expect a full pro-writer written story as I am just a newbie at writing stories.
7. Additional Author notes here will be added when story progresses or when I can come up with some.
The story's premise is alright. There really isn't anything wrong with the plot, so far as I have read. Although the Halo vehicles seem slightly out of place.
However (a word I use quite often), there are many spelling/grammar errors. I would recommend that you go through the story carefully and fix them. At the very least copy/paste it into MSWord and fix the mistakes there, but remember it won't replace human inspection.
3905957 thanks for the tips! I have to say that I'm a massive Halo fan, that's why there are vehicles from Halo.
Also the spelling mistakes are made because of internet explorer. 
I usually use Chrome, which has a spelling checker, but the grammar is because, well...
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The fact is that I'm Dutch, so yeah...
Also, I don't know any other army vehicles beside the Halo ones. I wish I knew more than only these ones.
3905957 Hey uh... You're not going to reply?