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Attention: The entire story is being re-done because I'm making a mistake by going so far off topic. I made this to display Colgate's desires, her fetish. Not to go on with a story about Colgate raising foals with Berry. I'm re-doing it from the start in a proper tumblr set up. So ask questions, you can ask as many as you like don't be afraid to ask multiple questions at a time. There is anonymous questions allowed of course.
the writing definitely has gotten tighter since you rewrote it I will admit.
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I learned a lot since I first started this.
It would be of great help to me if you shared my tumblr around! No shame in it :P
definitely thinking colgate is lucky that Berry is not related to the mane six. luna might get asked to help in this at that point.
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The mane six, Celestia, and Luna all have their part in Colgate's life. Not so much the princess's but the mane six definitely had a part in Colgate's life that will be shown later on.
Everything will find it's place eventually, including Colgate's family and Berry's.
4225906 think you mentioned in the last story that you had it that the mane six accidentally wronged colgate to varying degrees.
also warned that they are actually competent entities as well. something every slasher fic i ever read seems to like to forget.
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I'm not sure in which direction I will go with the mane six as of this point. I'm still on the fence as to if I will make Colgate a killer or not, something that I need to think about carefully.
4226770 all I will say is if she tries to kill them, it is gonna is very, very badly for her and berry.
perhaps it would be interesting for her to attempt it but it probably would not end well, though perhaps not fatally.
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The bigger they are the harder they fall.
4228660 that only applies if the said big guys have an ego to mtch or arrogance............... more accurately if that ego gets in the way of taking you seriously.
not a single mane six would not take someone trying to hurt them seriously.
could fly with colgate abducting and tormenting someone for revenge, but i can't imagine her killing any of them and surviving the consequences. if the regal ones get themselves involved, there would be nowhere colgate could run or hide. even her dreams she would not be safe.
besides, if they died then they would not have to live with the torment. though she would have to be careful that the victim does not indentify her.
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Let me worry about how the mane six deal with Colgate, nothing is set in stone yet.
I might be leaving for a while, I'm not sure how long or when I'll go missing. Setting aside my frustration in this I won't be able to update at all if I am to go missing for a while so... Fuck me right?
kay if she stabs her mother she is going to jail........
also since she is an earth pony couldn't her mother just break her way through the wall if threatened?
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Perhaps you should leave story choices to me. I don't feel the need to explain my choices.
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And I further suggest that if you have problems with the way a character is acting you ask a question directed to them on the tumblr instead. You will not get responses from the characters here.
.......... yeaaaah that is not gonna end well for them. like at all. probably gonna take a while but murder seems to be something that is impossible to trul get away with in equestria. one way or another, this is gonna bite them in the plots.
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4562774 you are misinterpreting what i meant. this has potential for story. killing her was a mistake period. yet a mistake that has potential for a plot. not to mention she was not exactly someone of importance enough to gain the immediate attention of the ruling demigods.
also it makes more sense than what you had before with berry turning outright homicidal maniac. here she was acting out of anger.
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(note before reading this is written on a phone, so mistakes will happen in the writing that I don't catch)
"Killing her was a mistake period" is what you said.
"a mistake period"
"mistake period"
"MISTAKE PERIOD"
Listen I'm happy that your reading it and all, happy to have a person reading the stuff I write. But you need to stop talking about this. ESPECIALLY with the whole mistake shit.
Berry has just committed murder, and Colgate of course stands in accomplice to murder. What happens to them next is even a mystery to me, tho mostly everything in this has been pre-thought. It is subject to change upon what Colgate thinks is entertaining.
I don't know if she will be punished for her crime or not. We will both have to find out.
NOTICE: This comment is now out of date, the story is no longer on Hiatus
This story has officially been put on. "Hiatus" As I'm no longer sure if I want to continue this side of my characters.
I attempted to write another chapter for this story but I was unable to continue past 321 words.
If anyone would like to see the uncompleted chapter feel free to message me, but as of right now I find it highly unlikely I will ever continue this story. I am leaving it on Hiatus until I have made my final decision.
Sorry to disappoint any fans of the story.
Is it back?
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To an extent yes. This story has presented me with many problems.
The foremost being the attention it's getting. Half of it is positive, half is negative. 31/30.
The story is meant to be a written ask-blog off tumblr, but I hardly ever get any questions. The questions are supposed to be meant so others can change the story, asking for the characters to do certain things or asking for points of views of each character. But unfrotunately nothing ever comes out of the message box and if it does, it's mostly just trolls. (See the messages about diapers... Ugh -_- )
This story has a far smaller following then the LTNO series (My other story) Which means I'm putting more time into LTNO then I am this story. That, and I plan to release another story very soon. So I'll have 3 stories to work on, and my motivation for each one will decide which gets an update first.
TL:DR
It's hard for me to continue a story I feel most do not care for. And it is much less fun for me when no one is asking questions as this story was intended to be about. (See the tumblr link) I am releasing another new story, and working on LTNO at the same time. Thus chapters for this story will be delayed.
You duplicated the last paragraph.
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I didn't sleep till 5am, forgive me.
Nothing too bad in the description. The picture is definitely a little weird. That cancer story could be some bleed-over, but it doesn't really scream "Plan 9" to me.
I'm passing you over.
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I do not wish to discuss other story's on the comment section of another.
But to quickly explain to anyone who does not understand the reference to the. "Cancer Story." I wrote a story 2 years ago, and a friend requested I re-write it for them, so I did and they asked if I could post it as well. So I did, and it was a failure. Out of 27 views it gained 14 downvotes and only 3 upvotes with 2 favorites to it's name. So I retracted the post, and left it with a password. It should no longer be view able. I do not wish to discuss this any further, it was a favor for a friend. Not an opportunity for a bunch of assholes to come poke fun at me.
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I don't think this story deserves the negative reception it's been given thus far, and I'm not going to support something I don't believe in.
Oh, sorry, I wasn't clear on my statement. This fanfic looks like it would be good to those who are interested in the kind of thing that this fic is about. You seem like a good writer.
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Yes unfortunately this story does have a limit to it's audience, for a more "Family friendly." Story please refer to "Letters To No One." As it does not contain the same level of blood and violence as this.
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Thank you for the recommendation.
I may very well do that.
For all future updates please refer to the tumblr assigned to this story. With the exception of the next chapter, I will no longer be posting ANY updates here.
The tumblr is to be found here: http://colgates-entertainment.tumblr.com/
Next update SHOULD be coming soon. I have a new computer in the works so everything's just being transferred.
New update to be posted this weekend (Subject to change based on if my editor gets online or not) See tumblr for further details:
http://colgates-entertainment.tumblr.com/