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> futa

Today is going to be a good day.

Okay! Well! That was um...unexpected! I'm not really a fan of the whole 'dick-mare' thing and 'mixture sixty three', in fact I skimmed over it mostly, but I'm not going to rip on your story just for that. I had to re-read a few parts just to be sure on some events, but all-in-all, good story, your writing style is excellent and you seem to have a well formed plot established, maybe a bit over-used, but I love reading the same thing in new ways so Keep writing!

4128798 You know it.

4128814 Thank you, I will.

4128798 Amen!

Which is ironic as I'm listening to Green Day's Holiday, and it asked to give another amen right before I typed this. Woo, coincidence! Time for Futa!

Warning, Hate Mail: I dislike this ship because they have never met canonly. They will quite possibly never even meet in the show. This ship is overdone and I find futa uncomfortable. I will give props for making a successful story though and liked it so you won't be sad or anything like that. I will continue no longer, have a nice day.

And Mixture Sixty-Three suddenly makes sense to me...

Welp, that was... actually a damn fine piece. Great to see you haven't lost any bit of your razor edge when it comes to writing, Art! And it's good to have you back in the game. We still have that collab to finish after all.

Must have more hugs!

4129988 Everyone is entitled to their opinions, and I appreciate your forwardness. Besides, it's not like I didn't see something like this coming.

4130020 Message me when you're all ready and waiting for my assistance.

4130056

It will come... eventually? Got full-time work now, and my muse flips on and off like a bloody light switch. And most of the time, said switch has an anvil tied to it.

Still, when it comes and I can act on it, it really does stick. I'll get back into the writing gig full-time around May if things go belly-up concerning work.

God, I adore my job for giving me something to do, yet I hate it because it takes me away from fun stuff. The things you sacrifice for your favorite job, I swear.

4130077 Work always comes first. It's what I've been doing all this time, is working. We do what we have to do before enjoying the fruits of our labor. When the job's over and done with, then it's time to relax and do what we want.

4130056 Strange thing is, my shipfic didn't get any comment against it and I wanted one for some weird reason.

4130098

Indeedy do. And the fruits of my labor were about 25 Steam games and a brand new computer with a badass graphics card. Feels nice to actually have money, though I would like a month off sometime to really enjoy everything and get some proper writing done.

ok, how awesome would it be if there was a whole story based on this one, where the potion doesn't wear off, and she winds up stuck with a dick until the creator can find a way to reverse it?

Hmm... I don't really like Futa, but I guess that I can give this a read.

*Finds out that TittySparkles assisted in writing*

4132136 I take it you like her.

4132181 If I'm going to read this, I'm going to have to be high while doing so. Since I'd never touch drugs, a musical high will have to suffice.

Theeeeeerrreee weeeeee goooooooooooo....

*Reads*

I don't think it needs a hidden spoiler - if there is a warning, it's always futa

Thanks for the warning. Although the story itself sounds quite intriguing, I'd rather not read it because of the futa content.
But thanks again for the warning.

4132259 I wanted a way to allow it to be a surprise if the reader so wished. This was the best way to do so.

4132263 You're quite welcome.

The non reaction to Vinyl's rape joke killed this for me; I mean Octavia went right from crying and begging for help to pure sexy times without even a hint of anger or anything.

I mean, am I just not getting something here?

4132829 Maybe? This is a clopfic, dude. Don't try and read too much into it.

4132910
Okay I guess.

Love it fc09.deviantart.net/fs70/f/2013/357/a/1/2_hoofs_up_by_comeha-d6z0lto.png fc04.deviantart.net/fs71/f/2013/357/c/0/fave_by_comeha-d6z0jqh.png

4132920 To be fair, you could be right. I probably could've made that part more realistic, but her being happy felt so much better to me. So, I let it slide.

4132921 Thash grape!

4132934 dl.dropboxusercontent.com/u/91928202/BROHOOF.jpg

4132934
If you find it a problem later maybe you could just change it so she knows it's Vinyl but she thought the dick was a toy and the drug was some kind of lube that made it feel hot or something.

Either way it is a nice story and I like the hint of under the table action that may take place later.

4132947 May? Lol, no, that'll be up by today, friend. Titty and I have that planned out, and we're both looking forward to writing it, so like the author's notes said, stay tuned!

4132952 I can't wait

Damn, this was awesome.

Loved it!

4133892 I'm really glad to hear!

O_O

dat cover

Hey guys, earlier in this comment:4132952

I said It'd be out by tonight. Well, Titty has gone to sleep for the night, I believe, and I've got the bonus ready for you, but I need her edits. So, I'd be very grateful if you could wait until tomorrow for that, as posting it without her guidance is a bad idea in my opinion. I appreciate your patience and love for this story. I promise to have that out as soon as I can, which will hopefully be by sometime tomorrow. Thank you!

I died laughing at the "Do you have a Dick?" part it was hilarious.

I like the story but...

“No! You idiot! I could care less about the sex."

Phrases I hayt: And that's the other thing "I could care less about what you have to say." NOOOO, WROOOOOONG, YOU COULDN'T CARE LESS. Couldn't care less! It's the difference between could, and could not! If you could conceivably care less; then you COULD care less!

In fairness, it was right the second time used, though it was in the narration. And that's my overreaction to phrases I hate, have nice day :D

4140081 Easter egg error found. Great job.

4140093
That was the most clever way to brush that off ever o-o

Commence read.

At least it seems that they have patched things up.

That was so amazing, perfect writing involved and gripping story.

More Futa please.

4140172 And it fits so well with is picture

This story was all right. There were some more errors besides the ones I show below, but I was busy with another thought: this story needs a rape warning. It already has a warning for the futa, why not another for the rape? This is much more shocking than the fantasy that is futa and almost made me quit the story. I think the second chapter redeemed it a little, with Octavia flat out saying "rape should never be used as a joke.", but in my opinion, it still needs the warning.

I am letting this comment stand in as a warning for now, but I will spoiler it further if asked.

lugers, the valuable ponies that are required to lift heavy objects

I bet you meant "luggers."

she hung up and had her friend redialed

"redial"

After the mare was sure she had her privacy in tact

"intact"

Finally, the temperature started to heat up and relaxing her body.

"relax"
Or, maybe you meant:

Finally, the temperature started to heat up, relaxing her body.

This sounds better to me, actually.

Octavia looked back after hoisting her torst up again

"Torso?"

She did the best she could by cranking up the tempo by at least three more beat per minute.

"beats"

The floor was coaxed in sexual juices

"coated"

“Upon out dinner arriving. Please.”

"our"