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FaleYur


Average Brony. Average everything really. Sarcastic, sardonic, slightly sadistic. Lover of ponies and alliteration, hater of people, and giver of no shits. Reader/reviewer of stories, fan of Discord.

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This story is a sequel to Within Tartarus: A Collection of Horrifying Events


Jade is a Time-Traveler, or a 'Jumper' for the Temporal Control Agency, so taking part in less-than-possible activities regularly is all part of a day's work. But when a powerful noble takes an old grudge into her own hooves, she willingly unleashes a time spell that begins to unravel reality as we know it. And unknown to Jade, the puppeteer hiding in the shadows is closer to home than she realizes; a fact that could define the very history of Equestria itself.

Originally written for the Within Tartarus Collab group.

Takes place just after 'Magic Duel'.

Special thanks to Cromegas_Flare for not only pre-reading for me, but also suggesting the idea, and to IceboxFroggie, without whom, Jade would not even exist. You guys are awesome!

I have all the chapters for the first Act written, so it'll be updating every day from now until the end of Act I. Enjoy, and remember to leave a rating!

Chapters (12)
Comments ( 8 )

3826680 lol. I think the words: 'Waiting for approval' are seared onto my eyeballs now. :facehoof:

umm... where is the picture? or are you making it?:rainbowkiss:

3826842 I could have sworn it was working before... Oh welll, I'll deal with it tomorrow.

I would suggest just publishing all that you have ready, then make a blog with this story tagged to it. I am not getting any update notices on it at all. :applecry:

I'll also see what I can do to promote this farther without getting into peoples faces.... or I might.... I don't know yet, have work and other things clouding my mind.

hmm, let me see what I can do to get this story more fame... It will take a bit, but it will happen.

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