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"2edgy4me" definition taken from urban dictionary
Short for "too edgy for me", a phrase
commonly used in response to something
obnoxious, irritable or cringe-worthy. It is
also an effective general-purpose criticism
that requires no effort on the maker's
behalf.
Im saying that the your mc apears to be trying to hard to be dark, edgy, and "hardcore" with the violence, and swearing, and such. Claiming to be the epitome of all "evil" when he is just a dude playing video games with his friends is silly.
3836677 Silly you say? Well, I have to agree there. But, it is Gmod after all, and silly is one of the many terms constantly used to describe things within the game. Although claiming to be evil is a big step, seeing as how he's not much more than a violent, rude A-hole that swears a lot.
Spoiler Alert!
I was actually just about to include some kind of self-revelation, or epiphany for him. After that, I was planing to calm things down to the point of "I'll set your lawn on fire." instead of "I'll eat your babies from your womb."
I know it's kind of lazy, but I want to move on to other things in the story. Such as including some kind of OC for him, punishing RD, and maybe doing more with Fluttershy.
Again I thank you for telling me what I was mucking up without insulting me or my story.
But there is like 14 mor chapters, IT CANT END!!!!!