The Life of Spiral Dream
written by LightMask
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I liked this, and I look forward to reading more. However, i have question.
Does this story take place within the same continuity as Blank Sheet? Or is this going to be its own separate story with the whole Blank Sheet thing just being an AU kind of story?
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This is going to be an Alternate Universe to Blank Sheet. She'll move to Ponyville later on, but won't run into Blank.
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Well I'm glad you like it, and I'm going to make more soon.
Yes, this pleases me greatly <3
Thoroughly enjoyed this
. Might even give this 'Blank Sheet' story everyone else is talking about a try as well 
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I like it. Want to see more
Loved Blank Sheet. Looking forward to seeing more of this now.
3645328 Okay. I'm glad this will be an Alternate Universe to Blank Sheet. I like the Blank Sheet story for the plot (in more ways than one) but I honestly can't stand Blank Sheet himself as a character. I dunno. He just kind of rubs me the wrong way.
But I loved Spiral, even in that story. I think it's great that you're making another one just about her, and it's pretty good so far.
Looking forward to more.
enjoyed this first chapter a lot, hope we get more soon
I don't even need to read to know i love it but when/if you finish the story you should finis it on the moment she and blank sheet get to 'gather'. I suspect this is going to be a 15 chapter plus story
A spin off? Why not, least you are still writing again. :D
Hold it! *screech*
No. Way. You made a story about Spiral Dream! Welp. Gonna actually read it now.
I think I read something somewhere about editing and letting you know if we spotted something or not. . .
Then again, it is 3 AM and I've been browsing everywhere recently. Anyways, back to my point.
Punctuation. A lot of it is missing. For the most part, it seems to be mainly commas. There are a few places where a period could be used instead, however there do need to be more commas.
Nice job on this so far. I'm terrible at writing stuff from the character's first person perspective, so you have my Kudos just for pulling that off. I like Spiral Dream and her somewhat rambly style of speech. And it's nice to see a hypnotist pony that has her limits sometimes.