A group of beautiful young women from earth are kidnapped by Celestia and made love slaves for Equestria's stallions
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I think you should expand it more, write about some the reactions of the girls and go more into detail. Otherwise, it's proceeding along pretty well I would say.
3605806 which part?
3605841 Chapter 2 in general, though it says it's a work in progress, I assumed it meant your just going to finish the chapter. I thought if you could add more stuff, like when the girls are in the wing of the castle and maybe when their talking to the assistant ponies. Perhaps expand on what they talked about.
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You sir got my fav and watch.
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3610114 YES!!! Thanks, and dude, I LOVE Mongrels! Trust me there's some crazy clop comin' your way soon ;)