..... hey its this guy!

......YAY! rule 34 at its best! plus first!?

Thumbed up scystorm, clop may not be my cup of tea but at least i respect the effort :p keep up the good work

Aaaaand I have a new author to track.

Excellent start, and I can't wait to see this series continue.

I'm not normally one given to reading Clopfiction these days but I couldn't resist when I saw you wrote something. I loved this little story despite it lacking in story, though it had it's fare share of plot, yeah I know bad joke

I do like where DAsh's suggestion is going, ie a herd-like multi-way (six-way) relationship within the mane six which is a great idea for a clopfiction series, if all the chapters are in the universe.

I'll go post ideas in the forum thread.

Good stuff!

Tracking...

Sweet mother of Celestia.

You damn dirty dog. WHY DO I LIKE THIS STORY?!
Favorite....

Variety is the spice of life, so I definitely hope you do some without sex toys, they're kind of a turn-off for me.

Oh god Scy.

Oh... my.....

Yep that's me

Hey

Hey

Show don't tell

SHOW DON'T TELL

SHOW

DON'T

TELL

ESPECIALLY FOR SEX BECAUSE IT'S HOTTER THAT WAY

Very sexy.

Wow... Great job Scy. Especially since it's your first "clop" fic.

I know I'm weird for saying this, but the "Species" lines threw me off a bit. Just my headcanon telling me there are three "races" of the "species" of ponies.
Otherwise it was really good all around. I'm lOoking forward to more.

>> NaturalGlitch What's wrong with fullfiling wishes? That seems like a positive to me. :P

*le track* *le fave*

Dear Princess Celestia
Do you want to ... you know
Do it?
Your faithful student Twilight Sparkle
:molestia:

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Feel free to recommend it! It would make me super happy!

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good job
now i have to go to class...

Why oh why...
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...do I like to read these?

I'm NOT tracking and I'm NOT favoriting but this story is on my radar. If Fluttershy has to be involved in some lesbian orgy, then I'm leaving...

Edit: Dammit, now I'm tracking it!!

This has got to be one of that most detailed clopfics I've ever read. And it's TwiDash! That makes it, like, 238 times more awesome.

now if only they made an animation of this......... ANIMATORS! THAT'S YOUR CALL!

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Have you read Romance Reports?

that was really good! But i like alittle bit of more backstory and a plot itself but this was really nice

wait a minnit, you're gonna write something for us Gay bronies TOO?

WOOHOO!

Why did I read this, WHY!?!? Much more disturbing, why did I like it so much

I saw the title and tracked this.
I KNOW WHAT YOU'RE DOING.
And I am feeling Pinkie Keen.

...

That was good.

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Yep. Can't deny it anymore. I'm a furry.

...

Shit.

what in TARNATION are sex lips!?

Also, how did Dash fit her tongue in Twi's vajayjay?

"Never forget what species I am, Rainbow." I think you mean race. It is canon, unicorns, pegasi, and earth ponies are different races of the pony species.

"Her arousal dripping onto the floor below her." Um, arousal is not a liquid.

"Sending her feminine juices out onto the sheets" Seriously? feminine juices? I'm sorry, but that phrase is so...old-fashioned. It sounds like something that would be said by someone 60 years ago, and then that person would be gossiped about for being lewd.

Anyway, despite the flaws above, this has potential and was pretty hot in some parts, mostly in the beginning. 3 1/4 stars, and I've reccomended this to a friend. If I could figure out how to favorite it (no one will tell me!) I might, till then, tracking.

Okay, can't rate right now for some reason... oh well. The point is I liked it, but you need to research terms for lady bits so you don't look ignorant.

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You favorite it by using the Star on the left. It's next to the name of the fic! Try reading the site FAQ some time if you're having trouble. :) Also, there are no more star ratings, it's Like or Dislike now.

Also, please don't call me ignorant~ I know how lady parts work. I'm being creative with my terminology whether you like it or not. "Species" however is an error I hadn't gotten around to correcting yet. Now I have!

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'kay. sorry

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You say that like it's not a bad thing.

Oh my. I've read some clopfics in my time but this is one that takes the cake over most.

...besides some of Semi's own work, that is. Very descriptive, very passioniate, very naughty. I loved it.

This will be the first and probably only clop I will track.

Also, clopfic + classical music =

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I feel like a sir.

DAMN!

DAMN, DAMN, DAMN, DAMN, DAMNATION, DAMNDAMNDAMNDAMNDAMN!

Me gusta.

i'm laughing my ass off and i have a boner? not sure if want also this emoticon seems oddly apt:)

Holy gravy! The sensual and sexual are so...
Continue your work...CONTINUE IT NOW!
Ignore my randomness, it's a problem that the fourth wall police have been looking into.
By the way, you now have an empty box of crackers and a missing sock. Why? Because, the fourth wall cannot stop me from taking all you socks. Muahahahaha!

Never thought I'd enjoy a dildo clopfic. Nice job. I really liked how tender you had them get with each other, and I enjoyed the visuals and audible effects while they were going at it. I'm going to be taking notes on stuff like that for future stories.
One thing that kind of bugged me though were a few word choices. Things like "sexily". Maybe it's me, but that sounds kind of like you couldn't think of a word, so you had to put that there. Kind of makes me cringe if I read it out loud.
Otherwise very good. 4/5.

First off, I'm one sick pony, so i actually prefer pony porn by far over that sapien ugliness.
I loved the one to one attention you give these couples, and the willingness of each to forgo their own selfish desire to bring pleasure to the other was inspireringly generous writing. The pace was not rushed and had a solid natural feel that is generally lacking in the wham- bam 1000 word horse race to the finish line that many clopfics inflict upon us.
Once again you have worked magic and don't forget a bit of m/m to make us all squirm a bit too. Just throw in the nuzzling, kissing, and forplay, and you may even get some converts. Hey I warned you I'm sick Solid writing storm! TY.

SWEET MOTHER OF DISCORD

Me Gusta. Me Gusta Mucho.

AND A CLOPFIC MADE ME D'AWW!

first i was like then i was like and finaly im like

YOU SICK FREAK! HOW DARE YOU MAKE TWO PONIES HAVE SEX LIKE THIS!? THIS IS DISGRACEFUL!!!

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*zip*

that was so good I almost clopped to it with my mom in the room!
let's see if I can get my girlfriend to say yes to a little "midnight fun"

295277 that is a cute pic of Fluttershy and personally I would like to see her in here

296227 you sir you are everywhere just like me only i see you and you no see me i watches you oh and to comment on the fic well done i wish i had more to say but i am "tender" and "empty" at the moment both physically and mentally so i will comment on what i think later for now i must zzzzzzzzzz

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I think that was supposed to be creepy, but I'm not quite sure.

305371 no it wasn't it was a compliment and i wanted to tell you that i have read some of your posts and i respect your opinions on a lot of these fan fics and this was used to get your attention Swag

Oh sweet lord. An intense clop fic with an adorable/ comedic ending.
You, sir, are a wizard and a sir.

So...this is like the Combinatorics Project, but with clop?

Not bad. Not bad at all.

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Haha. Noooot quite, but sounds good to me, anyway!

Three things stand out for me.

One, and most importantly, I like the premise. No angst or ooc... ness, just friends having fun with each other. Sex, yeah, but t's still kinda heartwarming. (I like clop, but too much of the good clop is brimming with angst and the cast turning on each other.) Seeing the sexual hijinks expand to include the others, especially Pinkie (I imagine she'd LOVE these new games) would be great, so looking forward to that.

Two, they were both very in character, which is cool. Hope to see more of Twiligh in particular.

Three, I noticed the Spike at Rarity's for the night line. A throwaway line or foreshadowing?