This certainly is quiet an interesting and maybe downright entertaining Fic featuring Applejack and Rarity together that you certainly capture there overall actions on how they would have acted in the show itself which nevertheless made this all convincing you made them to be all the more fun to read.
Spike just appearing out of nowhere when the Purple Fashionista just scream her excited totally make me think of this Art here: fc06.deviantart.net/fs71/i/2011/310/b/a/criminal_spike_by_csimadmax-d4fbc3f.png That surely made me laugh all the more afterwards and even hoping the she would have call out for help when she realize it wasn't normal for Spike to appear just then LOLLL!!!!!
AJ would get along great with the 10th Doctor Whooves.
309376 "Don't let me eat pears! I HATE pears!"
So far it's cute.
Faved
We are the Empress's pride. Hear us Roar!!!!!
This certainly is quiet an interesting and maybe downright entertaining Fic featuring Applejack and Rarity together that you certainly capture there overall actions on how they would have acted in the show itself which nevertheless made this all convincing you made them to be all the more fun to read.
Spike just appearing out of nowhere when the Purple Fashionista just scream her excited totally make me think of this Art here:
fc06.deviantart.net/fs71/i/2011/310/b/a/criminal_spike_by_csimadmax-d4fbc3f.png That surely made me laugh all the more afterwards and even hoping the she would have call out for help when she realize it wasn't normal for Spike to appear just then LOLLL!!!!!
The farm mare just had to mention something about PEAR'S just had to remind on this very hilarious comic down below:
fc06.deviantart.net/fs70/f/2011/249/5/f/ponykoma___apple_acres_by_emlan-d492fw6.png Only made my day all the more amusing that I most thank you for that.
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"Love the Empress
for She is the salvation of Pony-kind
Obey Her words
for She will lead you into the light of the future,
Heed her wisdom
for She will protect you from Evil
Whisper her prayers with devotion,
for they will save your Soul
Honour Her servants,
for they speak in Her voice
Tremble before Her majesty,
for we all walk in Her immortal shadow."[/b
Since you love criticism so much, I'll be sure to post my thoughts on each chapter
I have only a little nitpick here though; "straitening" should be "straightening''. For the rest, this is well-written and sufficiently entertaining.
RArity, why you so mean to poor Spike D:
sad is sad
>>tellytoy
Well said good sir, well said.
I read the bit about pears and instantly thought of the Doctor.
311622 Godfather AJ is the best AJ
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Could you tell me the name of those comics please? And by whom?
Applejack with her mane loose i must say is like really freaking gorgeous