When they Finally got to the Everfree Forest. Blotlings were everywhere. So, Mickey paint a few so they could reach the temple of the elder sisters. Mickey and Co. whet to the main chamber the Blot was at the alter.
"Hay Blot!" yelled Mickey "Come fight me and we'll finish this."
Than the Blot made and army of Boltlings to fight the main six.
"Mickey we'll take care of the Blotlings while you fight the blot." said Twilight.
Mickey attack and dodged the blot and hit it with paint and thinner. Until the blot thin in to nothingness. and the Blotlings did it also.
After Mickey and Co. got back to the Castle he told everypony that he made the bolt in the first place. Then he was sent home.
The End
That felt... a bit ham fisted. Everything was kinda rushed. There was little descriptive details, and the battles were "Mickey hit the bad guy with a few shots of paint/thinner and said bad guy was turned good/detained". Also, everyone seemed totally okay with...... Well, ...... I guess I could say, new information about...... New world's? Other dimensions? I don't know how I'm suppose to describe it, but they weren't even surprised. The story has much potential, it just need work. It needs to be expanded on. More details, character development, a tale like that of the game. A tale that is like any other crossover tale. I don't know how to say it. It just needs work.
Random moustache!
... WHaaaaaa????? The pacing was terrible on this, it needs longer fight scenes and I am disappointed in this. Epic mickey is one of my favorite Wii games and you ruined it for me.
IDK how to feel about this story. I have to admit it. Adding a paint or thinner ending was a good idea. The plot however made little sense to me and the chapters were too short. I'm not going to dislike it. But I feel like you should add more to the story. Keep up the good work!