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Rainbow Dash: The Loves and Losses

This story follows the main storyline with some deviation which will increase as time goes on. It follows Rainbow Dash's love life over time. The story starts during the Summer Sun Celebration episode and goes from there. It starts in the aftermath of a break up between Rainbow Dash and Rarity. This story assumes that the ponies (minus Rarity and Rainbow), while living in the same town, did not know each other very well prior to this event. It will be multi-chaptered.

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Jphyper

Jphyper #1 · Nov 22nd, 2013 · 2 · ·

Your biggest problem is that you need to familiarize yourself with the show a bit more. First off, it's Shadowbolts, not Shadowcolts. Secondly, there's a bit of out-of-character-ness here. Rarity's personality isn't that of the cheating type, and Dash doesn't like making her true feelings known, especially what she'd call "sappy" feelings.

Lastly, this is written as if you've only seen the show's pilot only once and have only vague idea of what the events were.

Luckily, there's an MLP marathon tomorrow morning to go along with the start of Season 4. If you, a friend, or a nearby relative gets The Hub on your/their TV, I suggest you tune in for a little research.