The slumber party had gone wonderfully. Princess Twilight had easily assuaged Rarity and Applejack's petty arguments, and now the three were enjoying a relaxing slumber, encouraged by the gentle pitter-patter of rain against the window and cemented by the soft caress of blankets.
A sudden chill passed through the room. There was a flap of wind and Applejack's blanket settled back into place. A thin shadow passed across Twilight's sleeping form, and for a moment the shift in light disrupted her sleep. The room paused as she stirred, but she quickly settled down.
The shadow thickened, darkening and growing as it descended upon Twilight's limp body. Rarity smiled, and a glint of moonlight passed across her fangs before she sunk them into Twilight's neck.
Twilight let out a petite moan of discomfort. Under any other circumstances it might have been cute.
Rarity smiled to herself, and began to slowly, carefully suck the magic out of Twilight's body. Twilight moaned again, louder this time. Rarity ignored it, continuing to slowly, hungrily drink the--
The lights snapped on, and Rarity let out an audible hiss as she threw a hoof in front of her face.
"Rarity?" Applejack gasped. "What in tarnation are ya doin'?"
Rarity smiled, and the amount of teeth visible in her mouth would have made a great white shark proud. Two of them were distinctly elongated, and she slid her tongue across one, as if working free a piece of food.
"Why, Applejack. I didn't know you had woken up," she said calmly.
"What did you do to the princess?"
Rarity's horn ignited, and a brilliant blue flash lit up the room. As it faded, Applejack let out a gasp.
Rarity had grown a large pair of wings. Though it was hard to tell, Princess Twilight's body seemed flatter under the covers, as if hers had gone missing.
"You like them?" Rarity asked coyly. "I've been waiting ages for just the right moment to steal Twilight's magic. It wasn't easy pretending to be an upstanding pony for so long."
"What are you?" Applejack muttered.
Rarity laughed evilly. "Well, that's a stupid question! I'm a magic vampire!" Rarity's wings unfurled, and her eyes flashed blue for the briefest moment. "And I'm afraid I can't have anypony spreading that around." Her toothy smiled returned. Her gaze fell onto Applejack's neck, and she slowly licked her lips. "But don't worry, I promise it won't hurt. Much."
Rarity took a step forward, and AJ cowered against the wall. Without Twilight to help her, she was powerless against the pure evil inching towards her.
Rarity was millimeters from Applejack--close enough to count her teeth, close enough to smell her breath.
A purple flash lit the room, and an arc of electricity struck Rarity's back. She screamed in pain and slumped to the floor.
"Leave her alone." Twilight's voice was barely a whisper. Her limbs struggled to keep her standing.
"Impossible!" Rarity jerked her head to look at the attractive unicorn. "That should have drained you dry!"
"I guess you underestimated the power of friendship." Twilight's horn lit up again, purple electricity crackling along it.
A bubble of blue light surrounded Rarity's shapely, evil body and she vanished with a loud pop.
Twilight! AJ rushed to the bed. "Are you okay?"
Twilight collapsed onto the bed. "I should have seen through her fake sweetness. I put everypony in town in danger."
"You couldn't have known," Applejack said.
"And now I've let all of Equestria down by losing my princess-hood." A few noble tears leaked out of Twilight's eyes.
"Don't be crazy, Twilight. You'll always be a Princess ta me."
"Really?"
"A course! And I'm sure everypony else will feel tha same way. No one liked Rarity anyway."
Gee, it seems like someone does not like rarity. See, I did not even capitalize her name, she will never be anything like our Twilight-chan Kawaii Princessu.
Despair, bitch! You are nothing!
Oh noes! How can Twilight be perfect anymore if she lost her powers? Did Rarity just become the Vampire Princess of Awesome? Quick, get the Elements of Harmony, Twilight. You can save Rarity!
That escalated quickly.
The subtle meta-framing device is fascinating. Also, could this be the introduction of an actual plot?
3538380 IKR?
3538444 Rarity is too evil to be harmonized--she'd just get turned to stone like Discord because she is such a heartless monster nothing could ever save her. Nopony would want to save her anyway she is unpopular and mean and ugly
3538570 Maybe
3538890 Which is exactly why best pony should save her. Nopony else would, making Twilight best for seeing good in her.
3538890 Also, if Rarity is not saved, who will make the pretty dresses for Twilight and all of her thirty friends?
3538915 I forgot she's also greedy and prety and a really bad dancer
Well! It really looks like the plot is escalating!
Myesterious athor person what do u think of seson 4
Hmm. Well, clearly, Twilight's going to need a replacement friend to stay as well-rounded and utterly likable as before. I suggest Derpy Hooves, in a totally unbiased and even-handed way.
wo w such beutaful
3540799 Oh man, the first two episode were GREAT--they completely focused on Twilight, and all her friends were reduced to flat plot devices, which is exactly how things should be
Hopefully they keep that going.
3542118 Who's derpy hooves? I only know the names of like 6 characters because most of them are not important like twilight
3538570
Oh Celestia I hope not. Next thing you know, the author will start taking him/her(?)self seriously. That would be the worst possible THING!
No,No,NO! Not best pone!!
3554358 What do you mean? Twilight's gonna be fine.
Lol that's actually kinda funny
FUCK YOU! Oh I'm sorry that was out of line.These short FIMFictions are the beest..
MFW:
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3538444 BLASPHEMY! TWILIGHT IS ALWAYS PERFECT!
I have officially lost interest in this, sorry.
So... Twilight lost her magic? So she's not overpowered anymore...? Uhmmmm.
I don't know how I feel about this.
If you want my honest opinion, I hate this.