Quick note: This idea is as you may guess is mine but also from My Little Dashie from inspiration. That you ROBCakran53.
My life chips away like an icepick grinding at a thick sheet of ice. I do have my life going in on bleak direction. The neighborhood isn't all too right. Sure, it used to be a quiet little town when I was younger, now not so much. I hold a normal day to day life.
I get up, I get dressed, I eat breakfast, I walk to work, I work, I walk home to an empty house, and I collapse onto the bed; basically a rinse and repeat life style.
My parents went to live somewhere else. I chose to stay believing where I was would be best for me. Now, I'm lowly rethinking that option. It's too late now however. I hate my life, a rinse and repeat life style isn't one I hoped for. Sure, sometimes something interesting happens: a friend comes over for a visit, a new employee I have to show around, I am thrown a birthday party at my work once a year. Other than that, that's basically it, nothing happens that is unnatural to me.
My job isn't important; in fact, my boss said he could fire me any second if he wanted. And, he's right; he could, if I wasn't doing just well enough at my job to keep me going.
I walked home - sun glimmered on my house - one thing unnatural. The sun hasn't been that bright for weeks now. I looked up there it was for the first time in the past few weeks the sun glared out of its fluffy and gray prison. I was happy. Is this a shimmer of hope? Probably not.
Despite my doubt I had some kind of feeling building up that it is a sign of hope. I opened my gate the crackle of the gate was simply worse than before this time caused a small gasp as I opened it. I walked to the door to the sight of a small package. There was no sender, no information, no anything other than the FedEx logo on it. It couldn't be mine. I never ordered anything of any sort on any website.
I saw no tape on it either. I grew curious of the package's contents. I picked it up I didn't shake it firstly: I'm not a child at Christmas. Secondly: I am careful if it's fragile. For all I know it could’ve been crystal vase. Okay, that may be an over the top example but you get my point.
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I walked inside the house the doorstep package firmly held with both my hands. I set it down. I tapped my mouth wondering: what is it? I suddenly heard a small whimper emitting from the small box. I hastily opened it knowing whatever's in this package is alive.
To my shock there lied a gray pony with a two colored mane and bat like wings. I was dumbfounded at the sight of a Bat-Pony. "What the heck?" I grabbed the most likely new born as it was quite tired looking. I began cradling the female Bat-Pony.
Along with the tired look she was also in the pink newborn blanket that a hospital gives a newborn. I pushed the top of the pink blanket off her head. I gave her a comforting feeling by stroking her mane lightly. I saw her eyes slowly creep open and look at me. I smiled at her soon I realized I have no idea her name. I tapped my chin thinking of a name. Soon something clicked. "Hello Opal Ash." I stroked her mane softly I could tell she wasn't ready to speak in the fact she's still but a foal. The first year is going to be just watching the foal I recall Pegasi have a tendency to sort of . . . fly.
I wrapped my arms around the foal willing to take care of this foal. Obviously she can't even walk so she would never make it out in the world. I cradled her soon seeing she had long since fallen asleep. I smiled as my heart nearly melted. I brought her to my bed setting her gingerly on my pillow after taking an extra pillow I walked over to my couch and slept there for the night.
'Mental note: Get Opal Ash a bed for the couch. And next to my bed too.
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Opal Ash made a smile at me. It's been simply two months since I found her at my doorstep. Exactly two month today was her second month old birthday or whatever. It wasn't anything special being no one knows of my little secret I have not even my family. Granted, their over in another state.
I kissed the forehead of Opal Ash her coat never stops tickling me. As I sat down I saw Opal wanted to get up on the couch. I bent down and picked up the foal setting her down next to me on her little bed I made for her. Opal didn't want that. Opal Ash got to her cute little hooves and lay on my lap. I brought myself back and began stroking the filly's mane trying my best to not disturb her in the slightest.
I soon fell into a sleep of my own. As I woke I saw Opal off my lap and nowhere to be found. I gasped as I looked desperately around my house; trying so hard to find the ash gray Bat-Pony. The worst case scenario is she escaped and got noticed. Or, got hit by a car or something. I tried to dismay the by thought shaking my head.
It had no effect.
I looked left and right still figuring out where Opal is. Suddenly I felt something fall on me. Something slobbery. I looked up and saw her. Opal Ash just above me using her wings flapping them keeping her just out of my reach. "Here Opal, here girl, come to Daddy," I said gesturing my hands towards me to try to get her to accept and fall down so I can catch her.
Life can be lame; she simply kept flapping her wings as she giggled like she should as a foal of her age. I was amazed with her. She was smiling as she continued to flap her wings. I smiled at her. "C'mon Opal! Get down here," I told her calmly just to get her multicolored tongue stuck at me.
I frowned. This will be harder than I previously expected. Won't it?
Cause why the hay not? Come on mate, if you're gonna do this do it right! Next chapter better be 16k.
3514466 I will not I know why you said that but no.
3514483
I was encouraging you jokingly sire. Set your sights high and shoot for the stars.
Her name is echo not Opel
I thought this was going to be a trollfic (to a lesser extent) but it's still okay.
No need to be sorry! I don't like sadfics that much so this should be up my alley.
This is going by a little quickly... Also, the words are a bit cluttered, you have some sentences repeated at points.
Other then that, this'll be a nice story.
Furthermore, has the main character ever seen My Little Pony? You never mentioned.
3517138 Yes. He has.
Ooohhhh i cant wait for next page
Reads "not a true sad fic"
I AM GOING TO READ THE SHIT OUT OF THIS.
I can't really comment on the story yet - not enough there - but I have I to point out that Opel is a German car company, so Opel Ash sounds like a model of car. Perhaps you mean Opal, the gem...
3524552 Yes. The gem was what I meant.
Could you please just put out another chapter, its driving me mad just to wait for another chapter when the first sucked me in.
3579837 I would, however, my parents banned me form the Computer, they do not know I'm on right now.
3605603 Darn. Oh well, when you are allowed on the computer again could you try to add another chapter please?
3608066 Now, I'm banned from this damn website!
3981376 *faints*
3981376 surely you most be unbanned by now
please, you must continue this story. I want it to surpass my little dashie. so far im dying to hear more. please continue.
Update plz