Even the End of the World Has a Tomorrow

by Owndapwn

Rough Draft taken down, work continued, Final draft will be up soon

This was a rough draft put up because I thought I wouldn't finish it.
I have started work again, and will post the final draft of chapter one up soon.

I am keeping this chapter so comments and ratings are retained.

New readers bear with me and check back later?
Perhaps track with email and remove if it doesn't interest you?

Comments

[MoonShine]

You cancelled this story? Why?

[Tome]

Interesting I got nothing to do. So i'll read.

I lawled at the last sentence. Lmao great story update it?

[Kintra]

Thats freaking amazing. I just started a fic based on humans annihilating themselves and equestria taking over the earth after the nuclear fire settled. Then I read this, dame thing, minus your not using a human in equestria, your using humans as a 'I blew up equestria' plot line! Pretty cool! I acctually hope you continue this, so far, its pretty coo.

[Owndapwn]

297756 Mostly length. I might go back to it later. Eventually.

297979 Would it make you feel better if I switched it to On Hiatus?

298375 If done correctly, it would have a lot of potential.
The way I wrote this was closer to humans blowing themselves up > Equestria forming several hundred thousand years later by natural evolution and geographical shifts > Abandoned explosive of unspecified and fictional power goes off from age (Which is unlikely due to nuclear decay)
Don't know if that came across clearly, what with having to explain it from the ponies' limited knowledge.
But somewhere, there are a bunch of skeletons with massive raging trollfaces rolling around chanting, "U mad?"

[Kintra]

298459 Some officer troll is saluting Celestia in some distant dark corner going "Mission complete Trollestia! The ponies have successfully Fission mailed! They are BUCKED!"

Yea the way I wrote mine is the same minus the 'abandoned explosive suddenly becomes more explosive' bit. Instead a human assassin with enough foresight and a lot of money had himself sealed in a nigh indestructible bubble, and was awakened by Celestia trying to get in. But I was just doing a concept. Working through dozens of potentials currently.

[Dead_Account_0]

You cancel a story, but end with the start of the next chapter? Such a tease! Very good characterisation. In a scenario like this though, it's pretty hard to keep completely with original characterisation but this was good. Brilliant work.

The whole colourful civilisation of ponies replacing humans is kinda like Adventure Time. Just saying.

[Owndapwn]

299684 Yea. I guess so.

I've never seen Adventure Time.

[Dead_Account_0]

300696 Another brilliant and colourful cartoon that appeals to all ages (In my opinion). The characters occasionally discuss "The Great Mushroom War" (Nukes) and along with the typical fantasy forests and mountains are pre-war ruins full of modern technology. It's like an extremely colourful and fantastical fallout with characters made of sweets and stuff. Sure that's more of a background deal and they go whole episodes without mentioning it but its pretty deep when you do realise it.

[Owndapwn]

301613 Intense. I'll see if it's on Netflix.

.....Or pirate all of it and watch it from my external HDD....