Story is a bit shaky I guess.

3450156 Yeah its my frist time every writing a fanfic so I was pretty nervous. I'm just hoping it can turn out to be a good story in the end. Thanks for the comment :).

Not going to turn good with tags like human, anthro, romance, sex, mature and a bunch of super-soldiers Brony OC for the main cast.

3451000 Well then maybe it's just my story that I want to get out of my system. If you don't like it then so be it.

Think its pretty good keep it up

3457686 Thanks, as of right now the second chapter is being worked on. It makes me happy to see that it pleases!

Wow this is really really good, as a general tip try to slow down the pace and make the chapters longer. Other than that, I greatly look foward to seeing more of this fic

This is a nice story! I will support all the way!

3501872Thanks right now I'm just having a bit of writers block with the next chapter. Grrrrr Its really bugging me. But anyways thanks for the support.

take your time making this story cant wait to read the next chapter