Dr. Whooves: The Redemption Of Equestria

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Sequel to Dr. Whooves: T.R.O.E. (can be read separately) Lilith is the first of her kind, a Hybrid Changeling. Her father a Time Lord, her mother Queen of the hive. Her life should be great, right? No chance.
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Lord_Ike · 32k words · 19 18 · 375 views

Dr. Whooves: The Redemption Of Equestria

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In Equestria's unrecorded past Luna, Celestia, and Dr Whooves must face many challenges on the path to reclaiming the kingdom from the forces of darkness.

Dr Whooves (Dr. Who from the hit series on BBC) will be with the two adolescent allicorn sisters nearly every step of the way as they journey in search of the elements and other forms of power to free the land from its oppressors.

Props to MrMinimii for taking the time to proofread this for me.

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Dr. Whooves: CH 1: Disharmony’s Beginnings · 23rd Oct 2013 · 1,171 words
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Dr. Whooves: CH 2: Town of the Grey · 23rd Oct 2013 · 1,738 words
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Dr. Whooves: CH 3: Unfeeling Stone · 23rd Oct 2013 · 1,887 words
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Dr. Whooves: CH 4: To Remember Old Wounds · 23rd Oct 2013 · 2,086 words
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Dr. Whooves: CH 5: So This Is A Game? · 23rd Oct 2013 · 1,513 words
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Dr. Whooves: CH 6: The Insignificance of Light · 23rd Oct 2013 · 2,223 words
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Dr. Whooves: CH 7: A Thrall to Darkness · 23rd Oct 2013 · 2,413 words
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Dr. Whooves: CH 8 · 23rd Oct 2013 · 1,087 words
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Dr. Whooves: CH 9 : To Fool the Trickster · 24th Oct 2013 · 5,306 words
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Lord_Ike #5 · Nov 26th, 2013 · · · Dr. Whooves: CH 9 : To Fool the Trickster ·

IMPORTANT NEWS!

With the emergence of season 4 MLP I have given a short explanation of events so this story can remain as canon as possible.

SO… As soon as you finish reading the WHOLE story, read the authors notes at the bottom of chapter 9.

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CHlM3RA #6 · Nov 26th, 2013 · · · Dr. Whooves: CH 9 : To Fool the Trickster ·

3534933 dont worry it wont demolish my opinion, i also looked over the fact that you call all chimeras tyrannical.

Ok now to my opinion:
First thing i noticed was that the story is very doctor whooves like, including that it changes the timeline a bit. The way you explained the cration of nightmare moon botherd me a bit while reeding but thats because of my special opinion on Luna, i guess. I wuld have liked a bit more details on the surroundings and a bit of scientific blabbing from the Doctor. Compared to the fun I had reading this, that are just some minor details. I really enjoyed the Story.

Sorry that thats more a negativ list of things but its really hard for me to point out what I like and reather easy what I dislike.
I see forward to any new story you post no matter what Topic it is, like Zecora sad "dont judge the book by its titel".
(I did my best with grammatics but mine is really chaotic and i dont have english spell magics on this pc.)

Lord_Ike