Spike da pimp!

also poor Applebloom

Instead of getting a slice of an apple pie... He got the whole damn pie! XD

That picture makes this look like another one of those 'Cupcakes' fucks. I suggest changing or remaking it.
A bit disappointing for a compete one-shot but I enjoyed it. I like how the ending leaves possibility for a beating or rape. You didn't describe Applejack's tone which gives that effect.

I do wish to see an 'ending' or aftermath. Thumbs Up!

Oh. You should explain the RarityxSpike absence too. would love to hear your reason.

Thanks

Dear god, all that trouble for that punchline? But I liked it, well written and pretty cute. Though I think you should continue this. Some real potential for a complicated realtinship in here

Woah Better than expected!
Tracking

One question though, how old is Applebloom in this?? Is she the same age as normal?!

All the mares want Spike to try thier slice of pie

Lol I didn't think it'd turn out like this

Fuck Her Gently - Tenacious D

I...
I just...
wat

I wuv it, moar I say, MOAR (Cause any Shipfic with Spike is best shipfic)

Y U SAY COMPLETE? Applejack is disappoint.

O_O

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the end is the part where you kick your imagination into overdrive thinking up scenarios, because only your mind can please itself

And damn, that was unexpected O.o

WHAT!?!?! That's how it ends!?!?! STREAK! Get your flank back to this story and do a clop scene chapter of this....NOW!

another spike and apple bloom book? please i be u best friend

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dont leave us hangin man i wanna know wha comesnext, and plsdont skip a single detail

also, damn you lucky lizard, what next, Caramel has aturn with spike

hahahahahahaha ...and now the part of me thats going to pony hell is going crazy

....this is one of th' funniest things i've ever read.

Oh sweet jesus he's back! LOL'z were had.

Congrats on graduating Basic Training btw. Going in myself soon.

i loved it it was really good

WTF did I just read

287240 I hope not....ugh...

damn spike
you get it in boy!

now, since no one else has started this, i shall:
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you deserve a slow clap my friend

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Do you plan on writing more?

Good fic.
too bad the link.. isnt a link.

Uhm. No. I read it and.... You know, in perspective, Applebloom is like, 7 years old.... and Spike is as old as Twilight, maybe a few years younger.

288220 When Twilight was a little filly, estimated age is 4-7, she hatched Spike, so no- Spike is not the same age as her.

Oh, I just realized who wrote this. It explains EVERYTHING

Haha! Spike gets all the mares!

< MOAR
But if this is all i'm fine with that

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dear mother of Celestia hopefully thats not lunaughty in disguise

o and grats on getting some free time to write you'r fics anyway one thing i do want to ask is when do you think you'll start crunching out twilust that one sounds like it'll be aalot of fun to read lunaughty was halarious. o and befor i forget theirs a new lulclopfic called beating the heat you might like it its halarious.
here's the link>Beating the heat

Dat ending!

Ugh, isn't that kind of pedophilic? I mean I get the joke, I do, but jeez... there's puppy love and there's creepy.

DAAAAAAAAAAAAYYYUM SPIIIKE GOT DA HOOOOOOOOOOOOOOE DAAAAAMN PIEEEEE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Oh for- Holy crap, so many of these bloody humor stories have me saying that, no wonder my forehead now has a hand imprint on it.
None too shabby, not quite what was expected, and I'm kinda glad for it. Still, what the hell.

Sa-sa-sa-sa-sa-SWAG.

A few misused homophones (stayed:staid) and some inconsistency with active and passive verbs.

Looks like Appleblooms getting AJ's sloppy seconds of Spike

Meh.

Mah Boi!
This is brilliant!

"She could easily bee seen from a distance" -
"and snuk out through the window" -
"he saw applejack staring at him" -

that's about all i can say...
you could write another one with molestia bursting in on applejack...

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it's probably molestia

I was expecting it to go like this:
1)Spike gets Applebloom's note.
2)Spike meets Applebloom that night at the barn.
3)They have sex.
4)Flashforawrd a month to Applebloom and Spike explaining to their families that she's pregnant.
It was still hilarious!

and that there's how you buck and apple. Ya got any question, or needs to go over it again you just give me a shout spike, and I'll be there to help you out.

best night of my life.

oh my that caught me by surprise god dam lol o:

Haha great writing, if it wasn't intentional to spell some words in this wrong then you should ask someone whose a good friend to proofread this so you don't get any mistakes no offense or anything just if you want the best out of your writing that'd be a good idea