This is a story of a madpony in a box. One who's life took an unexpected turn (And more so than usual.) as he ended up in a strange land called "Equestria" to meet a mailmare named "Ditzy Doo."
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Honestly i thought it was pretty good but for your first time its alright, the first time i wrote something it was a lot worse.
3334660 Lol, thanks! It'll get much better as I continue. I tend to always come back to things I make, over viewing them time and time again, and each time it only looks worse.
I've found many ways to make the next chapter much better. Thanks again for the input!
It's decent, although I think you should make your descriptions a little more, well, descriptive. Also work on the grammar a little bit. Sorry if I'm pounding on this, I would love to see it a little more worked out and polished. Overall, pretty good!
3334744 Thanks! Right away!
i love it and i guess i will have wait,to see if The Doctor and Ditzy go into the Rainbow Factory and search it in and discovery what is it for real in the next chapter
3345023 Thanks for the support! And I guess you will...
3345044 Your welcome for the support
and yeah
Read The Fragments of Symphony as it is about how the Tenth Doctor Whooves restores normality and regenerates into the Eleventh Doctor Whooves.
Why was this cancelled?
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Sorry about that.
I made this a while ago, and I'm not really a good writer. I'm actually surprised I haven't removed it, it's embarrassing for me to even think about. 
4970437 Uncancel it, get an editor, and write more!
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Ehhh... I'm not too confident in my writing skills... Maybe in the future I'll get a spark of creativity and continue the story.
The story is nice, but everything spoils that The Doctor was humanoid and then he regenerated into a pony and got in Equestria...