It's Nighttime in Ponyville & it was a full moon out tonight, Luna, in Celestia's private study shall be our host for the night, telling us the stories of Spike and 20 other's
"Ah, hello Bronies & Pegasisters, you may be wondering what am I doing here? Well, it's to read all the fan-mail you've sent me to tell you fascinating tales about my dragon of a nephew's love life! Oh, I got the goosebumps waiting for the 1st letter to arrive! Ah, here it is!"
you have my attention
From this first chapter alone I can tell that the story needs some serious proofing. I hope to return once the chapters have had some editing done to make them grammatically better.