A mysterious visitor from an alternate universe has landed in Ponyville. He seems relatively normal, but he has technology, and weapons that show a violent past. Who is this man, and what are his plans during his stay in Ponyville
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A mysterious visitor from an alternate universe has landed in Ponyville. He seems relatively normal, but he has technology, and weapons that show a violent past. Who is this man, and what are his plans during his stay in Ponyville
Human? check.
Violent past? check.
Too short? check.
poopy self insert emo time? you tell me.
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Human? Sort of
Violent? Definitely but with good reason
Too Short? I'm trying my best to moderate so as to not lose readers before they finish a chapter.
poopy self insert emo type? Ok neither me nor Alex are emo's, and he's definitely not based off me?
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kay
very good story so far.
i can't wait to read more chapters of this story.
They have no right to keep his weapons from him. Celestia should return them at once. I would refuse to eat or cooperate until that condition was met.
Sorry, didn't mean to be discouraging or a pest, that's just my opinion.