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ChronicleStone


I'm just some guy that occasionally finds himself with a bit too much free time. What you see here is the result.

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This story is a sequel to The Deepest Magic


The Chimera's defeat has heralded a new time of peace within Equestria. The future looks bright: the Crystal Empire has returned in the north, the devastation wrought by the Chimera has been almost entirely restored, and Twilight Sparkle has become Equestria's newest alicorn princess.
However, not all is perfect within the land. Princess Luna has fallen into a depression as she grapples with the errors of her past, and Sky Streak cannot shake the Chimera's final words about the source of hatred within the land, and the threat of its own return. But now that he is a member of the elite Alicorn Guard, he believes he is more prepared than ever to stand against whatever darkness rises against his home.
But as Sky prepares to once again face down the darkness, he will enter a dangerous game where nothing is as it seems. And when his world is shattered in one tragic moment, he will need to come to grips with his own anger and bitterness. Because if Friendship is the deepest magic, then the only way to conquer the darkness is to spread that friendship...even to your enemies.

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Comments ( 24 )

:twilightoops:Oh. My. GOSH! WHAT TOOK YOU SO LONG!?!:twilightangry2:

:fluttershysad:Oops, Sorry. But seriously though,what took so long?:rainbowhuh::scootangel:

Haha, sorry about that. Between work (retail in December in a mall), classes (projects, finals, and the like), holidays (and the out-of-town family members that come with it), and life in general, I've been plenty busy. Work on the story has been REALLY slow going, but I've been taking the opportunity at work to work on dialogue during the occasional lulls in the action. I actually bought a rhyming dictionary a few days ago to help with one character in particular. *wink wink*

All that to say that yes, I'm still very much working on this. I've had a few breakthroughs in the plot line within the past twenty-four hours, so once I get some free time to actually sit down and write, it should take off. Just hang in there!

P.S. The next chapter is technically tentatively complete, so if you'd like, I'll post it up, if it'll make you feel any better :derpytongue2:

Been working on it already (promise!). I've come to the point in the story where I have a better framework and understanding of what should happen, so I should be churning it out much quicker now. Thanks for the interest as always!

Guess I'm the first to reply.:twilightsheepish:
Good story so far. Really good. I love your work and I'm eagerly awaiting for the next chapter.:yay::pinkiehappy:

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Oh, well, thank you! Thanks for commenting! As a matter of fact, I actually have another chapter up and ready to go, and there's not a lot I can do in the short time I have before I need to hit the sack (Black Friday is a menace), I'll just post it up here. And if you haven't checked out my other stories, I'd encourage you to do that. They provide the backstory that leads directly into this one.

OK, shameless self-promotion done. Can't help it sometimes.

...OK, fine, can't help it ever.

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Yeah ok I'll be sure to start from the beginning. I've already read your last story and I loved it!:yay::twilightsmile::raritystarry:

If almost seems like this has a prequel

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It technically has four! My first four stories (Roots of Fear, Ice and Shadow, Under the Black Sky, and The Deepest Magic) were a four-arc saga that introduced Sky Streak and my other OC's into existence. If you want to keep reading Oathbound, I'd suggest you read those four, as well. It'll give some insight into the characters, as well as a bit of backstory to each of them. Oh, and thanks for reading and commenting!

Woah! Didn't see that coming.:derpyderp2:
Nice twist to the story.

OH!! :pinkiegasp: There so needs to be a chapter of Whose Line Pony Style. Starring Rarity, Pinkie, Discord and Princess Luna as the Talent and Spike as Clive Anderson. I'm just gonna sit back with a smirk and imagine that gem. :moustache:

I'm also a fan of silly filly sudios!:yay:
I loved the fall of the crystal empire video.
My favorite was Snowdrop!:twilightsmile:

I'm so excited for the next chapter.:yay:

Yes it all comes down to this. The final showdown. Can't wait.:yay:

Man that was a good chapter. Sorry it me so loooonnnnngggg to read it.:fluttershysad: I've just been really busy. But now I'm here to finish the story.

Wow that was just unspeakable. I didn't expect to see Storm Emblem. Hopefully his spirit can rest in peace now.:pinkiesad2: R.I.P. Storm Emblem. Great chapter by the way.:twilightsmile:

I knew that she wasn't gone. I had faith she would not leave so soon. That chapter nearly broke my heart.:fluttercry: It was so sad to think that this is where Lily would part from Sky. Anyways, I can't wait for the final chapter and epilogue.:yay:

Man that was one hell of a story. This is by far the best story you've written.:yay: Give yourself a pat on the back. Also I've gave some of my opinions a couple of chapters back. Another thing, I personally think the longer the story the better. But let's not go 200,000 words long.:twilightsheepish: But I do believe some short stories would be good for now. Just to lead up to a big story. Anyways enough of me rambling on I just wanted to say I loved your story and I will be here for the next. Peace.:twilightsmile::yay::ajsmug::heart::pinkiesmile::raritywink::rainbowdetermined2::moustache:

So this is where it all ends. But I'm curious to know what Celestia means by Sky's destiny awaits.:duck: Oh well guess I'll just have to wait. Anyways great epilogue. I'll be here for the next story.:raritywink:

The Chimera is or at least is related to Discord, right?

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The Chimera is actually a character I decided to insert because I needed a new villain, but one that didn't have any connection to the canon. I actually created it before it made an appearance in the show! Though I'm glad that it did...it validates it in my mind. But the Chimera actually isn't connected to Discord at all. The Chimera's backstory is explained a bit in Oathbound, but the full truth of the Chimera won't be revealed until the next story. Stay tuned!

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