men i like this story but i just keep thinking that this is like 50 years after regular canon at least but that not why i m here
i am here to present a challenge to you you know what a thresher maw is?
well i want you to succesfully make a story with a thresher maw as a character how you use it its your choice

3722852 no. . . .some one here actually watched that series?! *poof* new favorite viewer!

3723009 the reason I have it like this is because the times changed. industry brings forth corruption, so in order to rid corruption, you have to remove the source, industry. I have read it in a few stories where time goes backward or forwards with technology and gave it a shot. I see I kinda failed with that concept. Fortunately this is an experimental series, although part of something bigger, I always expect my experimental series to fail, although they do really well. Also, this thresher maw, you couldn't be talking about the same monstrous creature from the Mass Effect series? I am horrible at combining things as is (just take a peak at Darkest of Souls, you'll see) And with a creature that depends on an atmosphere with no way to sustain life, why would mlp get mixed up in that? So although I am running low on ideas, I am gonna have to decline that challenge, this is just not physically possible for me, I'm sorry

3723140 dont worry what i did say that to bring heavy industry to a town in orther to transform it to a big city it will require decades remember that ponyville as a town only got like 70 years or so in existence and equestria as a whole its not so advanced like a mix between the 18 and 19" century with some exceptions dont get me wong i enjoy the story but you just need to plug it right to the universe in this case mlp and the regular speed from a town to grow into a city on those values you must consider development births deaths and travel also how popular is in its country twilight said at the begining that ponyville its a quiet town so it cant grow that fast thats why it doesnt fit to me

3723140 dont worry threshy we will find you a new home look you make him cry
hehehe

3723272 Opps, did I say that the town was Ponyville? I could have sworn that I avoided that. If so I see that I made a mistake then

3743761 A test to make my fighting writing style better, and to test new writing forms. This story also holds a purpose though, it is a part of something big, quite big. The story is much different from what I normally write, so this is all very new to me. That is why it is a test. I also do not feel bad if some one says it sucks. This story is mearly a test, and experiment. I do not expect it to be good at all. The fact that it is doing so well surprises me quite so. So thank you, your compliment was quite heart warming, really! Also, you can count on there being five more stories like this, action packed with a little bit of drama. Some more than others. I will write them one at a time while writing chapters for One's Past is Another's Future. Trust me, if yo uguys like this story, wait till you see what I got cooking up in the works