Will have to read soon Little Dashie.

Earlier then first. I read this story before is was posted.

306253 Just because your an editor doesn't give you bragging rights....

306257 And why not? I got rid of dozens upon dozens of errors. I think I earned a little bit of bragging rights

306259 Because most editors I've noticed, don't go bragging about how they read it earlier then anyone else. A lot of other people could been picked to 'proof read' a story.

306344 ^ But please don't rub it in to him... I pride myself in flame free comments...

306347 My bad, twas just my two cents.

Errr, also, i spotted something in the very beginning you might want to fix. You repeated the journal entry twice, as well as some lines after it..

306363 Thanks I was wondering about that

306363 There you go! just refresh the page!

hey if i come with some concepts for this storie can i just throw them your way or is it a authors only thing?

334982 yeah im open for anything...