Equestria is a peaceful land. Canterlot is one of places that is telling the same. However, sometimes, things can get very weird. If you visit this place and you are lucky, then you will say that it's absolutely normal. But if you are unlucky and accidently get in a wrong time on a wrong place, you will see the true face of this city.
If you are looking for a serious story with no grammatical or stylistic mistakes then don't read this one. But if you want to laugh (at least a little) and you don't mind things that are very crazy, then read it!
Chapters (4)
Wat...dafuq? This story is too funny, but at the same time, I'm thinking, 'what the hell is this!' I will click the like button because it's funny, but I don't think I'd click fave on this one. Sorry, but I think it's fair if you know how I feel about this story.
Um you lost me at the chocolate line. I think that it is hilarious, but that kind of kills stories for me. Calling a Whipped cream can a dildo seems to be a pretty accurate description.
Thank you both for this feedback. It really means much for me.
........MY GOWD SHING GET YOUR SHIT ON TRACK AND FUCK EVERYONE ALREADY WITH WIPPED CREAM!!!!
and also....just do what yourwife says and shut up
yay
first comment anyway the story was good there was a few errors you should look it over again also do me one favor...make some insect happen I'm really looking forward to some clop in this and what better way then for Candace to walk in on twi and shining fucking
3583219 Well, this story is supposed to be weird, but Twili and Shining fucking... That's little bit too much. Some clop... alright, there will be, but I don't know when. I'm working on another chapter and there probably won't be clopping. But maybeee...
3583666 if you say so...timber wolves should be everywhere im a fucked up inhuman thing do to lack of sleep
a timber sex party...with the cream!
Ooooh
3739271 Yeah, that's just the word!