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Arabian Ant Attack

In Ponyville one day Twilight is confronted with an ant invasion! She is forced to make sacrifices and do things she'd nver thought she'd do to survive! Warning! Not exactly Charles Dickens! Also! Paragraphs do not exist!

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Wade

Wade #1 · Sep 21st, 2013 · · ·

What th

DayDrifter75

DayDrifter75 #2 · Sep 21st, 2013 · · ·

I have no words.

shadow41425

shadow41425 #3 · Sep 21st, 2013 · · ·

my brain hurts

Luz

Luz #4 · Sep 21st, 2013 · · ·

Pinkie Pie wtf

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Axel Nyan

Axel Nyan #5 · Sep 21st, 2013 · · ·

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Bootsy Slickmane

Bootsy Slickmane #6 · Sep 21st, 2013 · · ·

Well, there are some grammatical issues, to be honest. It certainly gets underway quickly, no doubt about that. The narrative style is quite conversational, highly odd, and most informal... I love it. I've never seen anything compared to an overheated cake before, so that was very refreshing.

I started laughing eight lines in and didn't stop. This is so insane. I just... I don't know what else to say. Thank you for giving me a few minutes of madness to read, for I enjoyed it quite a bit.

Spider Lord

Spider Lord #7 · Sep 21st, 2013 · · ·

3237181 Thank you kindly for the critique. I'm glad you found it to be enjoyable. Grammar you say? Grammar schammer. Aha. This was written on a whim really just to see if I could construct a basic story with these characters, future fictions may be more readable...