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Aqua Bolt

Joined August 2011
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Stories (4)

  • Requiem
    Octavia must relive her memories of a childhood friend through the helpless eyes of an observer.

    3,397 words · 1,076 views · 33 likes · 0 dislikes
  • The Prince Among Paupers
    Blueblood is living in Ponyville. Hilarity ensues.
    14,709 words · 2,476 views · 47 likes · 2 dislikes
  • Putting on a Show
    One disaster of a show is not enough to discourage the Great and Powerful Trixie. A successful stop in North Neigherbrook will put her back on top of the world. She'll be respected, admired, worshipped, even. Oh, and happy. That, too. Probably.
    2,782 words · 164 views · 10 likes · 0 dislikes
  • A Duet of Souls
    Octavia suffers a creative breakdown.
    2,164 words · 644 views · 9 likes · 0 dislikes
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Octavia and her childhood friend Allegro con Brio have grown distant ever since he moved away when they were thirteen. Now, caught in a dream, she must relive a series of scattered memories of him through the helpless eyes of an observer cursed with the gift of hindsight.

Tagging it as a "romance" fic seems a little inaccurate, but fairly close

First Published
28th Feb 2012
Last Modified
28th Feb 2012

Comments ( 11 )

#1 · 111w, 1d ago · · ·

That was really sad. Oh Octavia, you oblivious fool. :ajsleepy:

#2 · 111w, 1d ago · · ·

This is an exceptionally well written piece! I really like your portrayal of Octavia here and I definitely felt a manly tear coming on. VERY nicely done!

#3 · 111w, 1d ago · · ·

this is complete? sad story.

#4 · 108w, 4d ago · · ·

Spoiler Warning!

So, I'm assuming that Allegro con Brio was lying to Octavia in the cemetery when he said he had somewhere to go.  But how did he die in a motel room?  It couldn't have been of exposure. :rainbowhuh:

#5 · 108w, 1d ago · · ·

Wow dude, I am sickened that this only has 20 reviews. Thank you for writing this, it was both a pleasure and disturbing to read.

#6 · 105w, 6d ago · · ·

the tear dam is breaking again get the tape! :fluttershysad:

#7 · 105w, 4d ago · · ·

This story has significantly boosted my like for Octavia. I guess with a quiet pony such as her, it can be hard to tell the difference between snobby and sad. I guess I hadn't expected the latter up until now.

#8 · 104w, 2d ago · · ·

This was a beautiful read, you're great. So sad :pinkiesad2:

#9 · 102w, 4d ago · · ·

Oh man, finaly I get to read this.

Really tragic story... But beautiful the same time. A horrible prize for such a valuable lesson...:fluttershysad:

Great job dude!

#10 · 61w, 2d ago · · ·

Brio, you are a terrible liar. 'Tavi, you are a terrible friend. I hope you both feel ashamed of yourselves. Especially you, 'Tavi. Brio had one friend, just one it would seem, and you just had to smother her to death with apathy.

#11 · 43w, 2d ago · · ·

I really don't see how this has as few votes as it does, it was really good.  At least there aren't any downvotes.

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