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Before the Saddle Arabian delegates leave Canterlot, Celestia must speak with Amira over the mare's romantic interest in her.
With thanks to my editor, OkemosBrony.
This story has mild clop elements near the end.
The Saddle Arabians need their own tag.
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Sounds interesting. Also you rarely see stuff starring the Saddle Arabians.
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Thanks! And that was actually a part of what inspired this; it'd be nice if they got more exposure.
Thanks for the comment!
We need more Saddle Arabian stories.
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I completely agree!
This was cute and enjoyable.
The only thing I don't like is that it was a oneshot. I'd love to see what becomes of Tia and Amira afterwards.
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Thank you! I'm so glad you enjoyed it!
I am sorry for that, I might one day come back to this couple and write a sequel, but my writing tends to be very much based around "in the moment" passion, so unless inspiration strikes a continuation is unlikely.
I am hoping to tie it in with some other maneverse fics I am writing, but only subtly, plus that really depends on whether I make much progress with them.
Anyway, thank you for the review and the fave, I really appreciate it!
The sheer novelty of this story alone was enough to get me to fav, but its sensuality pushed me over the edge. Truly engaging.
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Thank you, I really appreciate that and i'm glad you enjoyed it.
I read this a while back and thought it was awesome. Had the urge to read again, but couldn't find it. I searched for about 30mins and find this treasure, making sure to favorite and up vote it.
I am a sucker for a Celestia romance not involving Twilight or a human. This is my new favorite, it actually makes me want to write the pairing. Its very well written and not very choppy, much more on the sensual side. I think your characterization of both Celestia and Amira is so good. I hope you write more of the two.
Also, you should add this to some groups. It deserves more favorites and up votes.
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I certainly enjoy Twilestia, but I do agree that adding some variety to the two characters pairings, especially Celestia, can be extremely enjoyable. I was a little worried about the scene changes and descriptions in this and sensual is exactly what I was going for, so thank you. It means allot that you would want to write this pairing after reading my work, if you do i'd love to see it.
I'm glad you think so highly of the story and it's characterization. Getting those two down was tricky but very rewarding. I would certainly like to write more of those two in the future. Sadly I have no real story ideas to work with, as I can't really think of where to take them. In some ways I feel this one closes it off fairly well, while also leaving room for more if I come back to it.
Thanks for the suggestion, I have considered that but I've never been clear on how that works. Just adding my own story to someone else's group feels a bit rude to me, though maybe that's how things work here.
Plus i'm not entirely sure of where to add it, it feels to sensual for a none clop group, but perhaps not quite sexual enough for a clop group. If you have any suggestions though i'd be happy to listen, it would be great for this fic to get more attention.
Thank you for the great comment!
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Its really a wonderful story. Definitely in my top 5 Celestia stories and I've read a ton of them.
I am a hard twiestia shipper, but at times I need variety and this is perfect.
As for where to take it, I see a very easy sensual relationship between the two. Celestia while allowing herself one night might even feel guilty about it, but she can't help but enjoy it. Amira on the other hand is the role of understanding partner, allowing herself to enjoy any time the princess wants to spend with her. They could exchange letters(I am so tempted to write this and I haven't written fan fiction in months and never for ponies) I think this is a great one and connects them very well. You could show case a few visits of the two spending time together. Fluff, could be good for them.
As for groups I would say: Twilight's library, the sensual clop group and even the regular clop could work. Its a really great story.
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Thank you, that really does mean a lot.
Totally agreed on the Twilestia front.
I could see that. Letters and visits could be quite nice, if you want to write it i'd love to see it personally.
TY for the suggestions on groups, I will see about asking their leaders for permission.