"Yes your majesty. Anything else we can do for you King Zorath?" the dragon servants asked.
"No i think it will be quite all right. Thank you." The Dragon stated. The servants nodded and left the throne room. The dragon Zorath looked around his throne room. He had been given the throne after his recent victories in the battle against the Hydra nation. He smiled to himself, he had finally become a ruler like his father, and he was his fufilling his father's last wishes. It was at that point in thought, that he smelt something off. His nose felt like it was on fire. I didnt want to burn anything down, so he opened a window, and sneezed hard, his nose feeling like another dragon has burned it with thier breath.
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His eyes fluttered open, to notice a black armored creature holding a vial of smelling salts by his nose. He quickly glanced at his trasure hoarde. Nothing had been touched, nothing had been moved. He came to the conclusion, that if this creature wanted his trasure, he would have taken some already. He put his hand on his head, it aching like a beating drum.
"Steady now Zorath, you need your rest. Those ponies took a lot out of you with those elements. Namely one thing in particular." Shadow Moon said.
"Who are you? Why are you here?" Zorath asked, sitting up. This creature had ruined his dream, and he was not at all happy.
"I am a knight, sent by the almighty one herself.you may call me Shadow Moon. I have been witnessing a lot of strange events, out of place events in particular, and you seem to be the latest one." Shadow calmly stated, as Zorath sat on his hind legs, towering over Shadow Moon by a good 50 some feet.
"What are you talking about?" Zorath asked curiously. Shadow stuck his hand in the dirt, and sifted through it, making sure Zorath could see the shreds of black energy trying to hide, and escape being seen.
"This energy, this force, It is the same force that has turned many a good being into a tyrant. It seems to have taken control of you as well, well at least before the mane 6 rid you of its curse. We still have yet to figure out its origins, but we are learning as much as we can." Shadow explained.
"So why are you telling me this, Moon?" Zorath growled
"I am telling you this, because I am hoping to find the origin when you first obtained this essence. Where were you before you came here?" Shadow asked.
"I was in my homeland of The Fringe, accross Eternity's Crossing." Zorath said, stretching his limbs as he explains.
"Why if I may ask, were you there?" Shadow asked, even more intrigued.
"I was going for my father's funeral... He had recently come down with a sickness.... After a couple months, he finally passed on. Now is that all? I would like to go back to my slumber." Zorath impatiently explained
"One more thing, when you said your goodbyes to your father, did you feel any sort of surge from him to you?" Shadow asked
"No, why?" Zorath again interested in the subject.
"I have explained it already, we must find the origins of this force. So thank you for your time, i must consult the elders." Shadow said, as he left the Dragons cave. He simply walked off the edge of the cliff, and fell, as the dragon watched. That Knight, however annoying at waking him, had just jumped off a 300 foot cliff. Thats when he saw a Giant Pheonix in the sky, with a black dot on Its back. The Dragon smiled a bit, shook his head, then laid back down, to return to dreamland.
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Shadow Moon leaped off of the bird, and landed in front of the castle walls. The guards jumped and pointed thier spears at him in reflex. He simply waved.
"Halt, who are you?" The guard on the right of him asked.
"I am Shadow Moon, and i seek audience with Celestia. I can wait while you alert her." Shadow said, smiling.
"I dont trust you.... If you are lying i will..."
"You will what Gleaming Sword?" A Royal Voice asked. The guard looked back to see Luna, walking down the castle path.
"Princess Luna! I didnt mean anything!" Gleaming Sword pleaded.
"It is fine Gleaming, back to your duties, i will bring Shadow Moon to Celestia personally." Luna says.
"Yes Princess." Gleaming said, as he went back to being a statue.
Luna escorted Shadow Moon up the path to the castle.
"So, how have you been Shadow?" Luna asked simply.
"Quite well princess, i have some important information for Celestia."
"About what Shadow?" Luna asked
"The Nightmare Force." He stated. Luna looked at him with actual fear, and Shadow only nodding.
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Back at the Crystal Empire Cadence was sitting in her room in front the mirror brushing her mane till suddenly she hears crying coming from Sombra's nursery. Rushing over to the nursery Cadence looks down into the crib to see Sombra bawling and wailing his head off, she picks him up and cradles him rocking Sombra back and forth while cooing.
"Aww what's wrong sweetie calm down. Tell Mama what's wrong?" she said.
Sombra's crying stops to a whimper and he looks up at Cadence, "Bad dweam."
"Aw you had a nightmare. Don't worry Mama wont let anything hurt you I promise." Cadence said then went over to the rocking chair and sat down, "Do you want me to stay with you till you go back to sleep?"
Sombra nodded and Cadence started rocking in the chair humming a lullaby till the little baby in her arms fell asleep and she laid him back in his crib. What Sombra saw in his dreams will not come back to haunt him but the nightmare has just begun.
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"How's Rainbow Doing?" Rarity asked, looking over at Fluttershy. Rainbow was laying on Fluttershy's Back. Flutter looked back at Rainbow. She smiled.
"She's fine, just exausted after a long day." Fluttershy whispered. It had taken Twilight and Rarity to calm Rainbow down, and after that she had just collapsed.
"It must have hit her hard, although I would love to know how it happened in the first place. I mean, we knew the Elements were powerful enough to take down just about anything, but we never knew it could reverse an unreversable curse." Twilight said.
"Yeah but it was only temporary.. I mean look at her... She's little and cute again!" Pinkie exclaimed.
Everyone looked at Pinkie pie, who was somehow walking upside down above them in air. They all shook thier heads, and kept walking. Pinkie Pie was simply Pinkie Pie, there was no other explanation.
Although Pinkie Pie was crazy, she was still right. Rainbow had been through a lot in the past day. Rainbow had been a foal this morning, turned into a mare, and then turned back into a foal when she wasnt needed again. Its like the Elements had a sense of humor or something. Twilight shook her head. One of her best friends was a foal. And with how random everything else was, who knew who would be next?
It had taken them almost an entire day to get to the train that would take them back to Ponyville, thier home, and to thier foals. Twilight could only imagine what trouble Sunset and Trixie had gotten into.
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The ride home was a long one, due to the snow delaying the train. Snow had come up out of nowhere and hit Canterlot, sinking it in almost a foot of snow in a matter of an hour. Everypony was waiting on the train, waiting for the snow to subcede. Fluttershy and Rainbow had taken a car on the train all to themselves again. Surprisingly enough, Rainbow had stayed asleep the entire walk, and the time they spent on the train. Fluttershy was almost debating on waking Dashie up by force, but was thrown out of that idea when she felt Rainbow moving on her back.
"Hey sleepyhoof." Fluttershy said quietly to Rainbow.
"Hey Flutters, how awe you?" She asked, stopping when she realized she was talking like a foal again. "It wasn't a dream? I'm not a mare anymore?" Rainbow said, tears welling up in her eyes.
"No Sweetie, you aren't a mare anymore, you are still my little Dashie. And it's ok to cry, we all cry sometimes." Fluttershy said
"Rainbow Dash doesnt, but obviously i am. I'm just a big baby." Rainbow Dash started to cry even harder.
"You are not a baby, just because you are physically Dashie!" Fluttershy said. This was the most confident Rainbow had ever seen Fluttershy, except when she was protecting her friends from danger.
"How am I not? I cant walk well, i use diapies, i drink from bottles, and I'm no bigger than your head. How am i not a foaw?" Rainbow dash complained
"Because at heart your still Rainbow Dash, the fastest most amazing mare I've ever known even if you are a baby your still you. Your funny and smart alec but always loyal to your friends. Your sometimes a trouble maker but you always apologize for your actions. You maybe a baby Rainbow but your still you and I'm proud to say that I'm your Mommy." Fluttershy then started nuzzling her cheek witch Rainbow gladly returned the affection.
"She's right, even if I'm a baby I'm still me and I'm awesome no matter what age I am." Rainbow thought to herself.
Then she realized something. If she was a mare again she would miss out on having what she always wanted for a long time when she was a little filly the first time...a Mommy. And Fluttershy was the best Mommy in the world so even if she's a baby that wont matter cause she's still herself and she has Fluttershy and that's more awesome then anything and maybe it would be okay to stay a baby a little while longer.
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Meanwhile... In ponyville
"Lightning please stay away from that! Sunset Dont fight with Trixie! Onyx.... Keep sitting there and playing, youre being good!" Zecora yelled, trying to keep all of the Foals in line. It was harder than she had originally thought. Zecora hoped that the girls would be back soon. She didnt know how much longer she could keep the peace.
that comment gets three facehooves for the ending and the chapter name fail..
.. I wasnt even thinking of firebird when i wrote shadow moon riding a giant pheonix.... Oh look now im thrown into equestria... What will i become now... And who is gonna write my story for me if i have hooves?? And another thing...
That was your exact words super stallion... Youre just luky i dont listen to no pony..... Tehehehehehe
Well i guess this is the last time i will comment, seeing as im unconcious being sucked into a vortex in equestria.... See yall on the other side!!
One of my favorites. Much better than Crystal Shards.
Cant wait to see what he will become^^
Maybe a cat?
A dog?
A baby dragon?
Fox?
Raccoon?
Or a eagle pet for me and Night Mist? A parrot?
3876827 I'm curious who is going to care of him. What will his alias be for that matter?
3876891 Good Question... maybe he will stay with Zeccora? Or even better: Miss Cheerilee!
Haha, Zecora wasn't rhyming at the end! Classic
3876938 I know.... I know everything... I think I'm a unique one tho.... Im getting turned into something extremely special ;) and it ain't anything you guys have thought of, and I'm not going to be stay with anyone you guys have thought of either... Think harder pros ;)
Kit: I'm thinking bunny. :)
3877026 yeah she was too mad... Teheheh
3877504 nope
No surprise that Onyx is being the most well behaved. He truly is a little gentlecot.
And although Rainbow Dash may be a foal again, at the least she'll stay cute.
3877602 I'm just surprised he's not helping round em all up.. . But I had to throw in some humor for onyx
Oooooh, I don't care where you're from, that's gotta hurt. He'll be feeling that when he wakes up.
3878028 yeah.... Sadly that wad my idea to be knocked out... Never guessed kit would use a baseball bat.... He is a magical being after all...
3878461 Hey, I was knocked out in the same way, though I had no time to react like you did.
You know... The one part that made me question... Everyone is asking about me.... Im wondering what sombra saw:
I meant... I know hes an evil a-hole... But hes still only a baby..... Does no one care about him... Or more importantly, what he "saw?"
I didnt write that part (but i wrote everything around it) so i dont even know what he saw....
3878607 kit and that dang baseball bat.... Well i already know what i get to be... So unique... Not done in this story yet... Throw me your guess here on the comments... What do you think i will be?? My name will be DeadGoat or DG (alias) (pronounced DeeGee)
So what do you think i will be? (THE ANSWER IS NOT A DEAD GOAT!!!!)
3876725 i dont get it??
3878656 Um I am guessing a Griffon and you stay with Gilda? A Minotaur? A Hippagriff like from Harry Potter or maybe a Thestral? A Changeling? A Bat Pony? A Zooombie Pony? I don't know the list of guesses is endless.
3878707 ooomg youre so close... But so far... you had the right idea... But it isnt essentially any of those.... Its speciall. I shant say more, bc i have no idea when SS will be releasing new chapta.... Seeing as i wrote the past 2... Tehehehe
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Kit: I still like the bunny idea
SS: no
Kit: oh come on then we can see how angle would deal with a little ball of fluff of his own.
SS: no
Kit: Fine how about a kitty, then opal can show off her nice side.
CS: You're assuming she has a nice side.
Discord: Oh i know how about a little bouncing ball of chaos for yours truely.
CS: how about we don't ever talk about that idea again.
SS: agreed.
Kit: Oh how about a little baby pheonix for Phelomena and Firebird?
SS: his name is going to be DeadGoat do you really think ether one of them would name their child that?
Kit: No but i bet opal would.
SS/CS: HE'S NOT GOING TO BE A KITTEN!
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Can we just call him Dee Gee because Dead Goat doesn't sound very good to me and I don't like the thought of writing that down every time I write his name.
3878743 A pink fluff pony? A non-dead goat? A Timberwolf? A Crocadilly? A mini Chomper? A Fox for little Sly to play with? A Mer-Pony? A baby Mantcore? A regular baby lion cub? A baby seaserpent? The Nightmare Force itself?
Mario: It'sa me Mario.
NM: Mario get out of here! (Kicks Mario towards Chomper.)
Mario: Yahahahahahahaaa! (Lands in Chompers mouth) Mama Mia.
Chomper: (Shuts his mouth) *Gulp* Yummy. Buuuuuurrrp.
Amazing chapter as normal and im loving kit right now he's so funny discord tho is kinda mean to people with all of the trolling everyone
3878665 Kirby games. I like Kirby's Return to Dreamland much more than Kirby Kirby 64: The Crystal Shards. I left out any mention of Kirby just because I can.
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CS: Guys i think we might have a problem
SS: What kind of problem?
CS: It's Discord i caught him reading a book.
NM: so what, we're on a web page that people read stories all the time.
SH: Yeah what's the big deal about him reading?
Firebird: First it's discord, no telling what kind of book it might be.
SS: that's a good point was it a spell book?
CS: no
NM: a history book?
CS: no
SH: a ancient curse book?
CS: no
DG: well what kind of book was it.
CS: The title of the book was "How to serve Ponies."
SS: where did he get a book like that?
CS: I think he found it in an old griffon outpost, or maybe the dragons the bottom line is that he's been reading it.
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That's gross. As a fellow carnivore I wouldn't even eat ponies.
Are Phoenixes carnivores? I eat a lot of different things.
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NM: Um the book title is called "How to Serve Ponies."
CS: Yes we already established that.
NM: Well, what if the title meant how can he provide for all ponies needs.
SH: I never thought of that.
SS: Come on this is Discord we're talking about, the last thing he would wanna do is be a servant to ponies.
CS: Super Colt has a point.
3879121 im callin him DG ;)
3879650 lulz... I thought you were talking about our crystal shard.... Well i made some aetwork ;)
i.imgur.com/ov6bklJ.jpg
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What do yall think of it? Made it at 1 am while talking to SS this morning and i couldnt sleep until it was finished
3880183 If you want me to be overly nitpicky, you spelled my user name wrong. Notice my lack of capitals.
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Hey, where's S..., er Onyx? Where's Sky Hooves? Where's Kit? Where's Sly? Where's FB? And where am I?
Just kidding, I know it's hard to try and match foals, Phoenix's, Draconaqueses, and foxes in there with our characters.
Wait, who's the Alicorn in the back? The one with the red mane. No wait a minute, that can't be... is that Lauren Faust?
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3880191 well sorry for the one capitol letter... Again i did it at 1 am, and i got off of work at 11:15 pm last night. So i was tired when i made it
3880218 Nothing major. Anyone can does it.
3880212 yeah, it was hard finding specific characters. I couldnt find super man as a pony, nor green arrow or green lantern, nor pheonixes, the only draqouneous i could find was discord, and no fox sorry... it was extremely difficult.
3880183 I like it!
3880224 yeah noone realizes how hard gfx design can truly be. It took me a lot of resizing and placement to make sure it all fit. AND thats only using premade pics... Dont get me started on making my own....
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Have you tried this site for any of them: derpiboo.ru (Be advised, some images are really weird if you don't already know.)
Or maybe this site: http://www.deviantart.com
Both are good sites for random images.
3880247 thats where i got a lot of thevectors..... But i had to go thru each and every one and downkoad it.... ;)
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Ah I see. So, is that Lauren Faust in the picture?
3880285 eeyup... I threw in queen faust herself, watching over her little foals...
Oh and i like how no one but super stallion asked about the sudden snow in may (its not new years anymore like in castle chaos)
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Now, I was wondering about the snow, but I thought I would sound silly asking that. I wonder if Faust will make and appearance in this story. Is she suppose to be like Celestia and Luna's mother?
3880301 faust is the creator of equestria.... But not all the world... Equestria is only a country in the entire world. Queen faust is the creator, celestia and luna are princesses (yes faust is thier mother... But i am not sure if that will make any diference..).. but yes i will say now, without spoiling anything the snow does have something to do with the end of the story... Whenever that happens to be ;)
3880316 Wh-wh-what? But I want the story to keep going. Not end. At least make a sequel to it if anything SS.
3880339 dont worry.. It has a long way to go..... Maybe 80 chaptera..... Or so hopefully
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Awww, still not long enough.
3880360 we habent even hit 80 chapters yet... We have over double theynway to go... Amd if he does end it, its too popular he would make a sequel...
Good things may come to those who wait (like my reveal chapter) but all good things must come to an end eventuqlly
3880183 Cool. Now we need some artwork of the O.C.s
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3880389 someone can draw them, i can vector them and throw them in. Until then... Enjoy derpy
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