Oh you tease!

So I see the factory is being brought in pretty early-game, eh? Interesting.
I wonder if Fluttershy will return from the lake bearing a related quest. If she returns at all

Well, Twilight is going to come back a week later after hanging out in the desert. I've always wished I could move to the city there, in game, but Tel'Adre was never given as an option... Oh well.

AJ'll probably be the next back, along with Rarity, the stuff in the Plains and Swamps are really dangerous for newbies.
Although, Rarity might come back with some news from a certain Dragon Lady, or possibly even a dragon egg...

If this plays out the way most CoC games go, none of them are going to care that they're stuck there... they'll be to busy dry humping everything in sight.

The one thing that I can't wait for is when flutters meets up with Amily and Izma. Along with when Twi finds the city of Tel'adre and meets up with Urta, Scylla, Lottie, Loppe, etc.

Too bad Spike didn't come along for the ride, half the fun of the game would have required a member of the opposite gender and it would have been interesting to see how the little guy would have handled the adult world (but let's be honest, he's more likely to end up as some Goblin's plaything then anything else).

Oh well, safe to say that Rarity's screwed with where she's gone.

And let's see how long Rainbow's Loyalty lasts now that she's had a taste of the Demon Factory's 'product'.

Can you add bad endings to this?

They wouldn't be canon, and you could continue your story the way you want, but some of the fun of CoC is in seeing the bad endings where the player becomes a sex slave. Not writing about the bad endings is a huge waste of sexy potential.

I like this story. I AM DISAPPOINTED WITH THE LACK OF UPDATES TO THIS STORY! MOAR!!!!!!!

The funny part is I'm currently playing CoC! I MAY give this a read. I'm not really into anthro, ironically enough.

oh god no , corruption of champions is spreading here now?! EVERYPONY RUN!.......

I wanna see more!!! THIS IS SO GOOD!!!

I wonder if this will be updated again...or is it just dead...either way nice job on the writing

Please update the story with new chapters. You don't have to if you don't want to though but it would be appreciated if you would. The story was enjoyable. I want to know what happens next.

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