I like I really do but I just wish that all Luna shipping didn't start out with said pony comments on how much they love the night. What I want to see is where Luna finds someone who is afraid of the night and she becomes determined to show them that the night is not to be feared. And then over time they both began to feel for each other. That would be totally original.
But that being said, I'm a huge fan of Luna and Twilight so thumbs up, faced and followed.
Thank you for the comment! I totally understand your point with the whole development of relationships with Luna. I really like your idea but I feel a full series is more appropriate for that type of story. I do think it's a great idea though so maybe that will be my next full series!
It was strange for Twilight at first, she had never written a letter to even her own teacher that didn’t have some type of purpose that served the kingdom. But she soon found herself sending and receiving numerous letters that followed the lines of how either mare’s weekend went, what they’re plans were for that week, or even just random gossip that Twilight had heard from her friend Rarity.
I would say that friendship lessons aren't that big a deal in the grand scheme of things, but I've seen what the power of friendship can do, I.E. defeat villains with rainbows.
this look good
Nice. Adding this to my fav list as I love Twiluna. I caught some things so I hope you don't mind me pointing them out.
Uhm... might want to replace that with either up or through.
Sun rather than some.
Unneeded punctuation mark.
May.
huh. ok twiluna is in fact best so i think..... yeah. ill watch this.
3238189 Thanks a lot for the notes! I'll fix them immeditately!
Edit: Done! Thank you again!
3237938 I'm glad you like it!
3238247 I hope you enjoyed this and I hope you'll enjoy the next part!
Yeah, okay, you caught me in my guilty need for Twilight ship fics.
I like I really do but I just wish that all Luna shipping didn't start out with said pony comments on how much they love the night. What I want to see is where Luna finds someone who is afraid of the night and she becomes determined to show them that the night is not to be feared. And then over time they both began to feel for each other. That would be totally original.
But that being said, I'm a huge fan of Luna and Twilight so thumbs up, faced and followed.
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Thank you for the comment! I totally understand your point with the whole development of relationships with Luna. I really like your idea but I feel a full series is more appropriate for that type of story. I do think it's a great idea though so maybe that will be my next full series!
Please! I need more! Just finished the show, I have pony withdrawal! Please, I'm going to die if i can't get my Twiluna fix!
3289466 I am now 3/4's done! School has kept me from my writing but nopefully I can finish tonight!
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AAGgggg.... where my beautiful Twiluna? Don't mean to pester, but please? I gotta get my fix, man.
I couldn't help but laugh a at Luna's not very subtle advances
Love it! So calm, and peaceful...
5522962 I know right
I wish I was able to stay awake. Unfortunately I have to go to sleep. Goodnight everyone
I would say that friendship lessons aren't that big a deal in the grand scheme of things, but I've seen what the power of friendship can do, I.E. defeat villains with rainbows.