Spike, being a young male, notices certain things. Certain, awesome things about the world. Like the fact that every mare he knows is naked. And he can't stop thinking about it. But hell, who'd want to?
WHY IS THIS SO POPULAR?! I got like five more notifications while I was writing this chapter!
Awkwardness makes good comedies. Comedies are funny. Funny is good. Plus the idea behind it is rather unique, I've only ever seen a story where a pony realized that they were naked once before this. Even then it was hardly touched upon.
Okay...how should I put this...mare's...naked...no clothes...not giving a crap about how they look? Sweet Jabeezus...this has been the most epic day in my life.
HAPPY MOTHER BUCKING INDEPENDENCE DAY TO ALL DEH MARES SUCKA'S!!
3185505 Rarity will be torn. On one hoof, Spike is being a total perv. On the other, business will be booming once others notice the reality of the situation.
I think it;s like the story itself, the idea is one of those things that most of us have thought at one time or another, but didn't really think about it, it just sort of hovered at the edge of our minds. It wasn't until someone smacked us in the face with it that we realized, "Holy CRAP, you're right!" Which means we're collectively like a bunch of Time Turners and Luna's
I feel I must add my thoughts as to why this is popular!
It is probably one of the funniest MLP stories I have read without being excessive! This is purely a awesome fic! I think it is because it is a story so far about the dudes of Equestria without all of that stallion on stallion stuff. Usually everything is all about the awesome mares of Equestria but this one is about the guys in very relating way!
Plus the effects of the Zangief tier "Moment of clarity" for all the guys and now Luna, makes it even more entertaining! Plus Spike is Boss in this fic!
Really though I am enjoying this fic and I find it to be something truly unique and fun to read. I also haven't noticed any errors as well so it doesn't throw me off from liking the fic.
I almost find a story underneath Your Own story, bro. The little details that you put on each horse lead me to observe more sharply their actions, and we have a reading between the lines here: Was Twilight staring and winking at Spike?; With that Applejack and RD were nervous?; What is the reason for being with Twilight sexual questions (beyond what we already know)?
Spike's right, Twilight needs to get laid. Then, as his faithful assistant, he must help her with that.
Already congratulate you for the way it has counted the espressões of each one. Sounds pretty funny.
Personal problems of our dr. Whooves for control are very very funny. I am hoping the reactions of other colts. Bigmac is walking visor by Apple Acres. Caramel is following the other colts? (he's gay in this fic?)
I wonder if Thunderdale and other members of the male nucleus will appear.
I was intrigued, but not surprised at how much neurosis Luna grew rapidly.
You really should take advantage of the sex dreams about Luna, without fear of leaving an idea of subitendida clop behind.
Soooo… is this a thing I would have be a (somewhat repressed) North American to find funny? Freethinking Scandinavian here glad to live in a country where Every Single Beach (according to our Supreme Court) is legally a nude beach. I mean, what's the big deal about nudity? Believe me, when you are surrounded by naked people, they just become people, and the naked body becomes if not completely desexualized then certainly not as hyper sexualized as some would apparently believe. It is just not a big deal.
It's well written and all, but I guess I just don't get the premise, nor would, I suspect, the ponies.
3189836 Well, I geuss, to my knowledge, you are spot-on. I am from America ('Murica) and I really do find this funny. So nakedness is normal to you. It's also normal to the ponies. Now put an extremely-sexual man/dragon in the mix and see what happens. That's what makes it funny.
“Luna?” she asked, louder. She put her forehooves up on the edge of the tub- Only to be almost completely knocked off them when Luna jumped out at her. The only thing keeping her upright was her sister’s grip on both sides of her face. “Everypony’s naked, Tia!”
Damn it Spike, why did you have to tell an immortal and Goddess of dreams that you see ponies naked, and just when the fun was about to get start, Pinkie Pie, take back the cake!
This makes no sense. Seriously. You have everypony acting like they HAD some level of nudity taboo and were just mindwiped to forget it, only for Spike to recover and start reminding them that they forgot.
Actually, I guess that could be a thing that happened. Would that make the story more or less funny? Not sure.
I can’t say I was surprised at my dream. Just me sitting in a booth at some random club ( I think it’s a club. I mean, I’ve seen them on TV), while some random mare shakes her flank at me.
Strip Club. HE WAS WAS IN A STRIP CLUB IN HIS DREAMS!!!!!!! (mindblown)
Just because it's something you get used to doesn't mean you can't have a revelation about it. In fact, it would more fit with the story anyway.
It's like if you have a small fruit tree in your front yard. It's there, it's been there for years, you've known it's been there for years, but for some reason, you only just now look up and think "Hey, wait, I could eat that fruit."
Or something like that, I'm not great with analogies.
I think Spikes mortal enemy in this fic will be rarity. She wears and makes... clothes, 'shudders'
Luna + hilarious premise = comedy gold. You sir, are genius!
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All I can say.
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Oh, my roommate brought that to my attention.
Next Chapter, dude. Next Chapter.
Oh sweet Jesus. Please write some more.
Indeed she does.
mwahahaha!
my face is hurting from smiling to much good job
I shall bombard your notification box some more, then.
I really like how nudity will basically make the whole of equestrian society collapse.
Because the premise is funny as hell, that's why! Now continue writing for our amusement, slave!
This is sheer comedy gold. Keep up the good work.
Awkwardness makes good comedies. Comedies are funny. Funny is good. Plus the idea behind it is rather unique, I've only ever seen a story where a pony realized that they were naked once before this. Even then it was hardly touched upon.
YES! ALL OF MY YES!!
And the truth is known at last! Totally gonna add this one to my favorites for the next update.
I saw this thread last night. It's getting even funnier with part 2, keep it up!
my guess for the popularity? Well most of us were probably part of the thread and honestly who doesn't like manly spike
Okay...how should I put this...mare's...naked...no clothes...not giving a crap about how they look? Sweet Jabeezus...this has been the most epic day in my life.
HAPPY MOTHER BUCKING INDEPENDENCE DAY TO ALL DEH MARES SUCKA'S!!
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CELEBRATE THE WOMEN'S FLANK!!! BEST IDEA EVAR!!!
Have my like and fav...and...I never thought I'd give this away...but I'ma give you TWENTY...MUSTACHES!!
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Rarity will be torn. On one hoof, Spike is being a total perv. On the other, business will be booming once others notice the reality of the situation.
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one word.....moar
I think a couple of ponies may have thought of this before, like Photo Finish, hence the all the time dress...
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Then again, it sorta ends at a point were it may be more framing than covering...
Why is this popular?
I think it;s like the story itself, the idea is one of those things that most of us have thought at one time or another, but didn't really think about it, it just sort of hovered at the edge of our minds.
It wasn't until someone smacked us in the face with it that we realized, "Holy CRAP, you're right!"
Which means we're collectively like a bunch of Time Turners and Luna's
I feel I must add my thoughts as to why this is popular!
It is probably one of the funniest MLP stories I have read without being excessive! This is purely a awesome fic! I think it is because it is a story so far about the dudes of Equestria without all of that stallion on stallion stuff. Usually everything is all about the awesome mares of Equestria but this one is about the guys in very relating way!
Plus the effects of the Zangief tier "Moment of clarity" for all the guys and now Luna, makes it even more entertaining! Plus Spike is Boss in this fic!
Really though I am enjoying this fic and I find it to be something truly unique and fun to read. I also haven't noticed any errors as well so it doesn't throw me off from liking the fic.
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*eagerly awaits the shitstorm in the next chapter*
You got around to the Princesses a lot quicker than I thought you would. Good Job!
Now lets see how far you will take this.
Ha! Will this end with akward cover-up sessions all over Equestria? Anyways, great story!
So the fruit of the knowledge of good and evil in Equestria is one little dragon's pervy epiphany? I can dig it.
How will this end
(Thy story hath both amused and disturbed us, o humorous scribe... well played.)
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I almost find a story underneath Your Own story, bro. The little details that you put on each horse lead me to observe more sharply their actions, and we have a reading between the lines here: Was Twilight staring and winking at Spike?; With that Applejack and RD were nervous?; What is the reason for being with Twilight sexual questions (beyond what we already know)?
Spike's right, Twilight needs to get laid. Then, as his faithful assistant, he must help her with that.
Already congratulate you for the way it has counted the espressões of each one. Sounds pretty funny.
Personal problems of our dr. Whooves for control are very very funny. I am hoping the reactions of other colts. Bigmac is walking visor by Apple Acres. Caramel is following the other colts? (he's gay in this fic?)
I wonder if Thunderdale and other members of the male nucleus will appear.
I was intrigued, but not surprised at how much neurosis Luna grew rapidly.
You really should take advantage of the sex dreams about Luna, without fear of leaving an idea of subitendida clop behind.
Hmm.... if this spreads, Rarity could get rich!
Hilarious. That is all I have to say.
Man. This is gold.
Well, I can see why this is a featured story!
definitely unique, and rather funny. i like where this is going.
Și veți va avea mai multe notificări, prietene.
This was hilarous, keep working!
This amuses me. Shall fave and like post-haste.
Soooo…
is this a thing I would have be a (somewhat repressed) North American to find funny? Freethinking Scandinavian here glad to live in a country where Every Single Beach (according to our Supreme Court) is legally a nude beach. I mean, what's the big deal about nudity? Believe me, when you are surrounded by naked people, they just become people, and the naked body becomes if not completely desexualized then certainly not as hyper sexualized as some would apparently believe. It is just not a big deal.
It's well written and all, but I guess I just don't get the premise, nor would, I suspect, the ponies.
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Well, I geuss, to my knowledge, you are spot-on. I am from America ('Murica) and I really do find this funny. So nakedness is normal to you. It's also normal to the ponies. Now put an extremely-sexual man/dragon in the mix and see what happens. That's what makes it funny.
AMAZING!
THIS IS AMAZING!
good lord!
Lost my shit again.
Damn it Spike, why did you have to tell an immortal and Goddess of dreams that you see ponies naked, and just when the fun was about to get start, Pinkie Pie, take back the cake!
Pinkie Pie: Aww damn it
So... how'd Twilight get a letter that fast? Spike burped it out without waking up?
This makes no sense. Seriously. You have everypony acting like they HAD some level of nudity taboo and were just mindwiped to forget it, only for Spike to recover and start reminding them that they forgot.
Actually, I guess that could be a thing that happened. Would that make the story more or less funny?
Not sure.
Oh dear. The realization begins! Run, Spike, run! Run for your life!
And for more sweet pony ass!
3192406 Da magicks. I'm sure the Princesses have a few tricks up their non-existent sleeves.
“Clowns or midgets?”
not sure if this is the best part of the chapter or if its the author's notes at the end.
This is without a doubt the greatest comedy I have read on this site so far. Cheers!
WHY IS THIS SO POPULAR?! I got like five more notifications while I was writing this chapter!
Because it's so utterly brazen, not to mention... unique. also, you broke Luna's brain, I didn't think that was possible.
Strip Club. HE WAS WAS IN A STRIP CLUB IN HIS DREAMS!!!!!!! (mindblown)
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Just because it's something you get used to doesn't mean you can't have a revelation about it. In fact, it would more fit with the story anyway.
It's like if you have a small fruit tree in your front yard. It's there, it's been there for years, you've known it's been there for years, but for some reason, you only just now look up and think "Hey, wait, I could eat that fruit."
Or something like that, I'm not great with analogies.
Never quite expected to see a Supernatural Reference of all things in an MLP fanfic. Brilliant!
3199659 I know, right? It caught me so off-guard I had a few moments of "Now, where have I heard that?" Then it hit me, and I was like 0.0
Dude, totally spot on.