Fluttershy went through her morning chores with a happy little song on her tongue. The day was young, the birds were singing, the flowers were in full bloom, and Celestia's Sun was shining brightly down upon a cloudless sky. It was a good day.
She had finished feeding the animals and was tending to her small garden (she was no earth pony, but the vegetables from her garden were just as good to her taste buds) when she heard chirped greetings from the birds. Peeking her head out, she saw a familiar form with something new.
Link had not been seen around in a day, disappearing off to wherever he went in the Everfree. Some said he was off fighting evil; others claimed he was going back to his home on the other side of the forest. A few (mostly Scootaloo) claimed he was single-pawedly making the forest safer by wrestling Ursa Minors and beating hydras to become the undisputed King of the Everfree forest. Fluttershy didn't know where he went, but she suspected it was dangerous and had resolved to make whatever time he chose to spend with her as relaxing as possible.
It was interesting, her relationship with him. Fluttershy was as shy as her name implied, much prefering her animal friends to the typical pony. She always seemed to blunder through social interactions with other ponies, and always made a complete fool of herself. Link was a smart as a pony, but his particular form and his animal speech made her far more comfortable with him than with a pony. It helped in that he seemed to have a rather laid back nature, and looked past her social faux pas without judging her for it, just as the other animals did. Consequently, she found herself opening up to him in a way that she didn't to even her close pony friends, though she was still quite a bit shy.
"Good morn– oh!"
Oh indeed. Link was not alone this time.
Seated upon his back was a small creature of around Spike's size. Also like Spike, the creature seemed to possess two legs and two arms, each with five little stubby claws on the end. But there the similarities ended.
Like her mount, she was black with white sections liberally spread about, particularly her belly, her right leg, and the area around her mouth. Her skin was not hard-scaled like a dragon, and was not covered in fur like a pony, something Fluttershy had seen in precious few animals. On her head sat a stone crown, broken, covering one eye, with fiery orange hair poking just over the crest. The uncovered eye was red with a yellow sclera, making her appear rather fierce. And for some reason, she had glowing patterns on her body, a muted florescent turquoise.
A slight grunt brought Fluttershy back to her senses. The creature was looking at her with its forearms crossed and a slight frown to its flat muzzle. Fluttershy 'eep'ed as she realized with a start that she had been staring. She felt her cheeks heat up as she hid behind her large mane.
"I'm sorry," she whispered. "I didn't mean to stare."
Link looked back at his mount. The creature held that position for a moment, then relented, relaxing.
"I'm sorry," she repeated. "It's just that I've never seen a creature like you before. What are you?"
The creature cocked her head. Then she opened her mouth and spoke some words in a tongue that Fluttershy, for all her animal prowess, did not understand.
"Uhm, I'm sorry? I don't understand you."
The creature looked at her mount. He gave a bark, but the creature shook her head.
"She can't understand me either?" Link nodded. "But you can understand her. And you can understand me." He nodded again.
"Is there any chance... you could tell me her name? Or what she is?"
Link barked, but Fluttershy encountered the same problem she had had when attempting to answer Twilight's questions; intent was easy to glean from his language, but names were not. She found she could not make out the name or what she thought was the species as any more than unintelligable barks and growls. She sighed.
"No, I didn't think so," she said softly, looking away. Then she brightened.
"Is there anything I can do for you two?"
Link whined.
"Of course. Let me get you a bowl," Fluttershy smiled.
Far be it from Fluttershy to deny a creature or pony who simply wanted to slake their thirst. She took a conveniently sized feeding bowl and filled it up with purified, chilled water from her refrigerator before heading back out.
She found Link sitting, waiting patiently for her. His little companion was idly sitting on the bird bath, observing the birds as they twittered about. She set the bowl down and he began greedily drinking.
The water was nearly gone when his little companion (she wasn't staring, she wasn't. Really!) sat up sharply. She stared at something in the bird bath, then called out to Link in an excited manner. His head came up, dripping water from his mouth, and he moved to the birdbath. Curious, Fluttershy followed. The creature was pointing at something in the bath, and as Fluttershy followed the hand, she saw it too.
It was a bug, a little water strider, but it was not an ordinary water strider. This one looked as though it was made from gold; it glinted and sparkled in the light as it skittered across the water.
Beside her, Link gave a little whuf. The little creature grinned, exposing a single snaggletooth fang. Fluttershy flinched back– such a visage suddenly reminded her of Discord and all the horrible things he had done to her and her friends.
But no horrible things came. The creature gently scooped up the golden water strider from the bath and held it out to her canine companion. Link sniffed it, then met the eye of his companion and nodded. She grinned and–
Fluttershy flared her wings and stepped back as a small bag appeared from nothing. The watched, still slightly alarmed, as the creature put the golden water strider in the bag, and with a flick of her hand, caused it to once again disappear. The creature giggled.
"Uhm..."
Fluttershy watched as the creature levitated herself onto Link's back. He turned to look at Fluttershy, as the creature on his back slapped his sides in a gesture of familiarity.
"Feel free to come back... if you want..."
Link nodded, then turned and began to pad off. On his back, his mount waved at Fluttershy, saying something that was unintelligible, yet clearly friendly.
"Bye," she whispered, waving her hoof at the retreating pair. That little creature reminded her a bit of Discord and his horrible ways, but she herself did not seem very bad. And she doubted Link would put up with her if she was, he seemed the sort who would not stand for that.
Fluttershy resolved herself to treat the little creature just like she would treat Link.
Then she picked up her humming and restarted her chores, listening to the birds join in on her melody.
Very nice. Wonder how Twilight would react to learning about Link's 'new friend'.^_^
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That girl in Castle town....
*Looks around suspciously*
She scares me...
I instantly guessed by the title that it was the golden bug quest...
I also imagined Link chasing a golden Changeling around town for an hour and a half
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TF2 reference, FTW!
Nyu~
Cool story.
Yayyy midna
4549888 ...Ok, you have to admit that sometimes, the natural flow of the story won't allow lengthened bits of filler. You could just release them as side-story chapters. That would entail all nine to be released mixed with the plot. ...It would be disconnected, though. Or you could release them all at once so I don't wait a week for filler. It's disappointing.
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I do admit I could have released them all at once, but to be honest I did want to try to boost my views, and doing this was the best way I could think of. Releasing them all mixed in the plot would have been, as you said, disconnected.
I suppose I could have released them all as a separate story, like an add on, but I kind of want everything to be together in one story.
I am sorry that I have disappointed you by not getting on with the plot. Would it have made it better if I released all these, then the final chapter would be the next part of the plot? I have to admit, I didn't want to do that either, because I knew that I was going to Iceland and therefore wasn't going to be able to get back to it until after Iceland. I just tried to write what I could, then release them all in preparation for the next arc, which starts at the end of all these adventures.
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Thank you for your criticism. It is always welcome.
I know grammar is my weakness here. I am not a lit major, the most grammar training I have is high-school level, and believe me, I have no intention of quitting my day job to write. I could solve that with an editor, but at this point, I don't think I'm going to get one. Not to say I don't need one, or that I don't believe in letting someone else criticize my work, I just feel that my energy would be better spent finishing the story first, then getting an editor and going over the entire story with them.
Unless you're volunteering. In which case, sure, shoot me a PM and we can start going through and fixing stuff.
As for the dialogue, I can't say that's my strong suite. I would welcome lessons or method which I could use to improve it. Though I am curious as to what dialogue you felt was so objectionable– Celestia and Luna have maybe three sentences together that chapter, did I really screw up their lines that badly?
Do you have anything else that you found objectionable that I need to improve?
4551642 While I admit that there would be problems with suddenly switching methods, it would work for me. However...about Iceland. How long do you plan to be there?
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Two weeks. June 30 through July 15th, during which time there is no guarantee I would be able to write anything. I figured you would be much, much happier if I didn't drop the first chapter of the next story arc on you guys, setting up basically the endgame of this fic, and then disappearing for probably three weeks or so.
4551703 Yes, quite correct.
I may like the plot better, but these little story arcs are great! I love how you had Fluttershy handle Midna, I wonder if the others will see her. I hope so, she's one of my favorite characters.
Oh? First the invitation and now she mets Fluttershy? I think Midna had had enough of being in the background all this time. Question, can Epona translate for Midna too?
Midna background character no more!
Snail snail, just once I'd like to take a bath in your slime.
I know you have bugs
4553358 ... Just when I thought the bug princess couldn't get any creepier you go and write that with Harime Nui as your profile picture...
Nui is one of the creepiest characters I've seen in any of Trigger's series'. Second place goes to Leeron. Even the immortal Viral is afraid of him, and they're on the same team at that point.
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4550404 She knows you have more bugs...
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There was a Zelda/Harry Potter crossover I found once where after the war in England, Harry became friends with Midna. Remus became Link, Nym- sorry, I mean Tonks, became Zelda, and the bug gurl was a young Bellatrix Lestrange.
Honestly, I was speed reading for a bit and since I missed details I immediately assumed Volvagia and was thinking in my head "Noooo no no nonono noooooo!!!!!" because of the future heartbreak. (BTW idk the Legend if Zelda time lines so I have no idea if it would even make sense for volvagia to be with a wolf link)
Then I reread and realized it's Midna lol
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I've found Heavy Weapons Guy!